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What Happens Next – (Chapter: 26: War is Hell)
Zadie’s eyes grew wider as she listened to Arthur’s message. That fucking bitch! She sat down heavily in her chair. Ralph poked his head into her office, “Hey Zadie, I got those pictures developed for the Russell case…Whoa! You look pissed! What happened?” Zadie shook her head absently, “Nothing don’t worry about it. Listen, I’m going to go ahead and leave.” She got up and started gathering her things. Ralph looked at his watch astounded, “Wait, it’s only like 6:30, I mean you’ve only worked an hour or so past your shift…what, don’t tell me you finally got a life?” Zadie rolled her eyes, pushing Ralph roughly out of her office and slammed the door.
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Coach Anderson smiled happily as she surveyed the damage. She quickly counted the strewn bodies spread out all over the field, “Well, the good news is, nobody died!” Several girls groaned loudly. Tristan finally spotted Denise and crawled over to her body. Denise was laying face down in the grass. Tristan carefully rolled her over and straddled her. “D…talk to me!” She held her hand under nose, and sighed, relieved. Tristan leaned closer, gently slapping her face, “Hey, D…wake up!” Denise moaned softly, her eyes finally blinking open. Denise shook her head slightly looking up at Tristan’s flushed, grinning face. “Tristan, get off of me!” Tristan smiled sexily, “Hey, that’s not something I hear often!” She ducked, laughing as Denise took a wild swing at her head, “I’ll be right back…you know other women to rescue and all.” Denise grunted as Tristan walked away singing, “Here I come to save the day….”
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Madison stood in the hall by Ashley’s locker, checking to make sure the hallway was still empty. I can’t afford for anyone to see me doing this! She pulled the opened envelope from her purse, removing the picture one last time. God, we look so happy. In the picture, Ashley and Madison were smiling brightly, their arms over each other’s shoulders. Turning it over, she quickly scanned the back…
Ash,
You always made me smile. I miss that…smiling with you. It sounds crazy, I know that you see me smiling and laughing all the time, but it’s always for someone else…to impress them…to make them laugh…to hide how I really feel. You always made me smile just to make me happy. Ash, being with you was the last time I remember being happy. You’ll always be my único y verdadero amor.
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I don’t think I stopped laughing once this chapter. Tristan is awesome. I like Zadie and I think she’s good for Arthur.
I LOVE THIS STORY PLEASE CONTINUE!!!
way to go, soldiers ! hehe….i’m lovin it XD. keep it up =)
I’m loving it..I think that Tristan is a riot. Don’t care too much for Arthur and Zadie, want more S&A…still cool though, cheers mate!!
Oi…I had a bloody long run today, so I so know how much Ash is hurting…had to catch my fic’s before a hot bath…and some rest. Again, cheers mate.
“Eww, Ash stop farting in the tub!” Ashley giggled “I like making bubbles.” now that is going to say in my mind for the rest of my dramatic life. * eyes rolling, sigh* Anyway still good story. KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK, BABY!! Please post very very soon!?!
love it LOVE IT!!! PLEASE post more soon!!!!!
zadie officially rocks…mr C definately needs to get some TLC, lol…and after that track practice, so does ash…im going to keep reading now ; ) lol
I don’t think I stopped laughing once this chapter. Tristan is awesome. I like Zadie and I think she’s good for Arthur.
I LOVE THIS STORY PLEASE CONTINUE!!!
way to go, soldiers ! hehe….i’m lovin it XD. keep it up =)
I’m loving it..I think that Tristan is a riot. Don’t care too much for Arthur and Zadie, want more S&A…still cool though, cheers mate!!
Oi…I had a bloody long run today, so I so know how much Ash is hurting…had to catch my fic’s before a hot bath…and some rest. Again, cheers mate.
“Eww, Ash stop farting in the tub!” Ashley giggled “I like making bubbles.” now that is going to say in my mind for the rest of my dramatic life. * eyes rolling, sigh* Anyway still good story. KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK, BABY!! Please post very very soon!?!
love it LOVE IT!!! PLEASE post more soon!!!!!
zadie officially rocks…mr C definately needs to get some TLC, lol…and after that track practice, so does ash…im going to keep reading now ; ) lol
Hmm… I liked it, loved Spencer and Ashely, definitely think there should be more Spencer Ashely time though! for some reason im not too interested in Zadie and Arthur.
Hmm… I liked it, loved Spencer and Ashely, definitely think there should be more Spencer Ashely time though! for some reason im not too interested in Zadie and Arthur.
Still Laughing!!!! Great chapter. I don’t mind the Zadie and Arthur mix, I think they are cute together. Yes, more Ash and Spence would be good to but you are doing awesome, keep up the awesome writing. As for Tristan…she is just a crack…..i think she is you though???
Still Laughing!!!! Great chapter. I don’t mind the Zadie and Arthur mix, I think they are cute together. Yes, more Ash and Spence would be good to but you are doing awesome, keep up the awesome writing. As for Tristan…she is just a crack…..i think she is you though???
Alright, here is my comment. I have been reading this story since you started to write it. I LOVE the story and the way you are making it more interesting each chapter. Keep going with this story for a long time. Hope that you post another one real soon.
Alright, here is my comment. I have been reading this story since you started to write it. I LOVE the story and the way you are making it more interesting each chapter. Keep going with this story for a long time. Hope that you post another one real soon.
“Eww, Ash stop farting in the tub!†Ashley giggled, “I like making bubbles. HAHAHAHAH. Oh my god, that’s absolutely priceless.
“Eww, Ash stop farting in the tub!†Ashley giggled, “I like making bubbles. HAHAHAHAH. Oh my god, that’s absolutely priceless.
I also wanted to thank you….laughter is such a wonderful thing. thanks for making my day.
I also wanted to thank you….laughter is such a wonderful thing. thanks for making my day.
That was a great chapter…just loved the whole thing. I think I was laughing from start to finish….and I really liked Tristan! too funny.
That was a great chapter…just loved the whole thing. I think I was laughing from start to finish….and I really liked Tristan! too funny.
I love your stoy I think I’ve posted ever time you have written. it’s really really good i always look for your story when i get on. post more really really soon.
I love your stoy I think I’ve posted ever time you have written. it’s really really good i always look for your story when i get on. post more really really soon.
“Eww, Ash stop farting in the tub!†Ashley giggled, “I like making bubbles.†HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA…I’m gonna so get a major six pack from all this laughing that I’m doing…all thanks to you babe;)I wonder what Ashley’s reaction will be to Madison’s letter…if anything, please don’t break our girls apart because of her skanky ass!=D
“Eww, Ash stop farting in the tub!†Ashley giggled, “I like making bubbles.†HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA…I’m gonna so get a major six pack from all this laughing that I’m doing…all thanks to you babe;)I wonder what Ashley’s reaction will be to Madison’s letter…if anything, please don’t break our girls apart because of her skanky ass!=D
OMG the whole part about Tristan and her little war adventure was just to funny..;) still laughing over here :Phope you post more real soon ;)
OMG the whole part about Tristan and her little war adventure was just to funny..;) still laughing over here :Phope you post more real soon ;)
Oh my God, that was ridiculously funny. The whole thing with Tristan cracked me up. Spencer and Zadie got pretty sassy in this chapter, nice one. I love your story:).
Oh my God, that was ridiculously funny. The whole thing with Tristan cracked me up. Spencer and Zadie got pretty sassy in this chapter, nice one. I love your story:).
Tristan is off the wall crazy but oh so adorable at the same time. Anyone with that much imagination and can generate the realistic sound effects is just too damn hot. Writing humor is probably one of the hardest genres because it can come out awkward and forced, but trism, it just seems to flow so naturally when you do it! I love love love your story! Update soon!
Tristan is off the wall crazy but oh so adorable at the same time. Anyone with that much imagination and can generate the realistic sound effects is just too damn hot. Writing humor is probably one of the hardest genres because it can come out awkward and forced, but trism, it just seems to flow so naturally when you do it! I love love love your story! Update soon!
LMFAO!! The funniest chapter yet!! OMG, Tristan was hilarious! Zadie rocks…you make her sound of frickin’ HOTT!! Arthur deserves happiness for once. mMm…HOT OIL huh? OMG, you MUST update SOON!! Pretty please with sugar on top=P
LMFAO!! The funniest chapter yet!! OMG, Tristan was hilarious! Zadie rocks…you make her sound of frickin’ HOTT!! Arthur deserves happiness for once. mMm…HOT OIL huh? OMG, you MUST update SOON!! Pretty please with sugar on top=P