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Growing Up – (Chapter: Reactions)
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“I don’t know…Sam…Sydney…Spencer maybe? I can’t keep track of your girlfriends.”
Spencer had called and Sara had said something to her that made her never call me back. Any and all control I have flies out the window with this statement.
“Who the hell do you think you are?” I am seething as I begin walking towards her. The pleasure I would get from ending her life right now would sufficiently compensate for a life sentence in prison. She begins taking equal steps backward as I approach her while the color drains from her face.
“Ashley, please!” She pleads. Her fear increases as the distance diminishes between us.
“How DARE you.” My body is responding on it’s own; I am no longer rational. Now at an arms length from her, I grab for her throat with both hands.
“Don’t!” She coughs out faintly. I look coldly into her eyes as she grabs my wrists in a desperate attempt to remove my hands. It feels like an eternity before the reality of the situation finally seeps into my consciousness. I snap out of my trance as if just awakening from a dream. I stare at the location of my hands in disbelief, frightened by what they could have been capable of. I jerk them as if I have been touching a searing hot surface and she sinks to the floor, putting her hand to her throat. I leave the room without another word.
I walk until the night sky is painted in pink and orange hues. The sun is peeking over the horizon and I still have no answers to the questions that have been running through my head. I don’t know how I let myself react so horribly. I don’t know what to do about Spencer. I feel like I don’t even know who I am anymore.
I rest my forehead on the door to the room and lean heavily against it with my hand on the knob. I can’t say for sure if I am too exhausted to actually turn it or if I am too afraid to admit to Dani what I have done. It isn’t until I see a group of kids walking towards me that I am able to open the door. I take a heavy step into the room and close the door behind me, without moving further into the room. I just stand, shoulders slumped and hands hanging limply at my sides…lifeless, emotionless, spent.
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ahhh i love this story! i really hope ashley calls spencer! i’m glad you’re back! keep posting :)
welcome back. You were certainly missed. hope things are working out for you so that you can start posting on a more regular basis again…we missed you.
I’m glad you had the chance to update. I hope Ashley takes the chance and calls. Post More. Good Job.
rly good..ashley shoulda killed the bitch..but yea i hope she calls spence.. and yea its good.. i been waiting a week for u to repost…haha i have to say i am satisfied..haha post soon..ill be waiting..cant wait to see wut happens..byee
finally an update. Ashley needs to call Spencer like right now and fix everything. post more soon.
Again, thanks for the e-mail. I’m so glad you are back. I really do truly hope that things turned out okay for you. This chapter…where to begin. I would have probably done the same thing Dani would have done. God. Efffing Sara! I can see why Ashley would feel bad after doing that, though. I mean, I’ve said this before, and I’ll say it again..I’m not a violent person. And you all probably think I’m lying, but still. Poor Ashley. I agree with Alice9455, though. Ashley really, really needs to call Spencer. Or better…fly over to Spencer’s side of the country and again: MAKE OUT. Whooo. Excellent update. Thanks so much. Again, I hope everything turned out okay. I hope you’re okay :) Much love, dear.
Where does one begin?..I have missed you and am very hapy to see you back!!!!Hope things are getting on track for you and that it all is in your favor!!Now can I ask? WHEN IS SPENCER COMING BACK? Please post soon…I am still addicted to your story and check everyday more than once for your post.TRUST!!!…again..WELCOME BACK!!!!
great stuff. i love the pacing of this story–very real. people just don’t fall in to each other’s arms…they take risks. it’s about time ashley took one. worth the wait ;)
Okay, a few things… first: Welcome back! I actually had to resort to reading Lace-fanfic while you took a break. Hope everything’s okay with you. Second: in my dreams Ashley is wearing boxing gloves and Sara is the friggin punching bag! Actually, scratch that, in my dreams, Ashley’s wearin NUTHIN! LOL Third: someone ring the alarm please because I’m low in me Spencer-doses …I warn you, funny things happen when I don’t get my regular dose of sideways-head-bobbing and raspy-voice-talking.
Oh caseygurl…I’ve missed you so!! Welcome back hon! I agree with Dani, if I were Ashley, I would’ve killed Sara I think…lol. 2 pages, but I’ll live…I’m just so happy that you updated love! I hope things get better soon=) *kisses*
So here is my two cents…I have been reading your story since chapter one and I think I’ve done a good job on trying to comment on just about ever single chapter! I absolutely love your story and think you are a fabolous writer. But I think maybe you are losing some readers and getting less comments is because however great the story is, I think it’s getting a little slow. I feel like if this story were a movied and I was sitting in the theater watching it, this would be the part where I would say to myself, “Ok, come one hit the climax already!” And I know you have been to one of those movies were you walk out saying I loved it! But it just got a little slow in the middle. And I think thats just where you’re at right now, just the slower part. Please don’t hate me for saying this, I’m a 20 year old college volleyball player so I’m just use to the idea constructive critisism you know? It what I’ve grown up with playing sports. So please continue to write, I think you have one of the most well though out storie lines on this site. Your writing actually reminds me a lot of Shakennotstirred’s stories on The L Word FanFiction site! So great job and can’t wait for your next update!
YAAAAAAAY!! You’re back..lol and i must contest…you did not loose me as a fan : ) lol…ok…so if i were ash..that bitch would totally be dead…lmao but she honestly NEEDS to call spence…come on!!!! If not for love…for the sake of my pitiful existance….lol j/k but im so glad youre back and writing…make sure that internet stays on!!!! post more as soon as possible!!
Pick up the phone Ashley…but let me grab some popcorn and beer before you and Spencer hash it out. Sometimes you have to destroy in order to rebuild and I think it’s safe to say that the demolition has occured. Excellent, as always, Caseygurl! Please post soon.
awww I love this fic, I really hope Ashley calls Spence even if it is just to hear her voice. they deserve it . keep up the great work
ahhh i love this story! i really hope ashley calls spencer! i’m glad you’re back! keep posting :)
welcome back. You were certainly missed. hope things are working out for you so that you can start posting on a more regular basis again…we missed you.
I’m glad you had the chance to update. I hope Ashley takes the chance and calls. Post More. Good Job.
rly good..ashley shoulda killed the bitch..but yea i hope she calls spence.. and yea its good.. i been waiting a week for u to repost…haha i have to say i am satisfied..haha post soon..ill be waiting..cant wait to see wut happens..byee
finally an update. Ashley needs to call Spencer like right now and fix everything. post more soon.
Again, thanks for the e-mail. I’m so glad you are back. I really do truly hope that things turned out okay for you. This chapter…where to begin. I would have probably done the same thing Dani would have done. God. Efffing Sara! I can see why Ashley would feel bad after doing that, though. I mean, I’ve said this before, and I’ll say it again..I’m not a violent person. And you all probably think I’m lying, but still. Poor Ashley. I agree with Alice9455, though. Ashley really, really needs to call Spencer. Or better…fly over to Spencer’s side of the country and again: MAKE OUT. Whooo. Excellent update. Thanks so much. Again, I hope everything turned out okay. I hope you’re okay :) Much love, dear.
Where does one begin?..I have missed you and am very hapy to see you back!!!!Hope things are getting on track for you and that it all is in your favor!!Now can I ask? WHEN IS SPENCER COMING BACK? Please post soon…I am still addicted to your story and check everyday more than once for your post.TRUST!!!…again..WELCOME BACK!!!!
great stuff. i love the pacing of this story–very real. people just don’t fall in to each other’s arms…they take risks. it’s about time ashley took one. worth the wait ;)
Okay, a few things… first: Welcome back! I actually had to resort to reading Lace-fanfic while you took a break. Hope everything’s okay with you. Second: in my dreams Ashley is wearing boxing gloves and Sara is the friggin punching bag! Actually, scratch that, in my dreams, Ashley’s wearin NUTHIN! LOL Third: someone ring the alarm please because I’m low in me Spencer-doses …I warn you, funny things happen when I don’t get my regular dose of sideways-head-bobbing and raspy-voice-talking.
Oh caseygurl…I’ve missed you so!! Welcome back hon! I agree with Dani, if I were Ashley, I would’ve killed Sara I think…lol. 2 pages, but I’ll live…I’m just so happy that you updated love! I hope things get better soon=) *kisses*
So here is my two cents…I have been reading your story since chapter one and I think I’ve done a good job on trying to comment on just about ever single chapter! I absolutely love your story and think you are a fabolous writer. But I think maybe you are losing some readers and getting less comments is because however great the story is, I think it’s getting a little slow. I feel like if this story were a movied and I was sitting in the theater watching it, this would be the part where I would say to myself, “Ok, come one hit the climax already!” And I know you have been to one of those movies were you walk out saying I loved it! But it just got a little slow in the middle. And I think thats just where you’re at right now, just the slower part. Please don’t hate me for saying this, I’m a 20 year old college volleyball player so I’m just use to the idea constructive critisism you know? It what I’ve grown up with playing sports. So please continue to write, I think you have one of the most well though out storie lines on this site. Your writing actually reminds me a lot of Shakennotstirred’s stories on The L Word FanFiction site! So great job and can’t wait for your next update!
YAAAAAAAY!! You’re back..lol and i must contest…you did not loose me as a fan : ) lol…ok…so if i were ash..that bitch would totally be dead…lmao but she honestly NEEDS to call spence…come on!!!! If not for love…for the sake of my pitiful existance….lol j/k but im so glad youre back and writing…make sure that internet stays on!!!! post more as soon as possible!!
Pick up the phone Ashley…but let me grab some popcorn and beer before you and Spencer hash it out. Sometimes you have to destroy in order to rebuild and I think it’s safe to say that the demolition has occured. Excellent, as always, Caseygurl! Please post soon.
awww I love this fic, I really hope Ashley calls Spence even if it is just to hear her voice. they deserve it . keep up the great work
still lovin up this one. Thank god sara is out of the loop now! And thanks for coming back and sharing your amazing talents with us. I hope you are well with whatever your going through! I look forward to the next installment.
still lovin up this one. Thank god sara is out of the loop now! And thanks for coming back and sharing your amazing talents with us. I hope you are well with whatever your going through! I look forward to the next installment.
Your legion remains true.. and true to form, we all want to tell you what to do with the story.. I’m no exception.. there needs to be contact we need this settled! Thanks for coming back!
Your legion remains true.. and true to form, we all want to tell you what to do with the story.. I’m no exception.. there needs to be contact we need this settled! Thanks for coming back!
WHOO HOO!!! You’re back!!! ***doing the happy chair dance*** Gosh, I know it was only a week, but it did feel like forever. I hope your life calms and your stress disappears. And don’t worry, it looks like you have many loyal fans still here. Now, on to the story. First, I’m glad Ash didn’t kill Sara. How could our couple get back together with Ash in the slammer? Second, Ash quit being such a puss and call Spencer!!! NOW!! 6 months. Really? You need to call. Love, love, love this story. I’m glad you appreciate the support because in reality I’m just pathetic and have nothing more to do than wait for another fantastic chappy from you. I know, it’s sad……but you definitely made my day today. Thanks!
WHOO HOO!!! You’re back!!! ***doing the happy chair dance*** Gosh, I know it was only a week, but it did feel like forever. I hope your life calms and your stress disappears. And don’t worry, it looks like you have many loyal fans still here. Now, on to the story. First, I’m glad Ash didn’t kill Sara. How could our couple get back together with Ash in the slammer? Second, Ash quit being such a puss and call Spencer!!! NOW!! 6 months. Really? You need to call. Love, love, love this story. I’m glad you appreciate the support because in reality I’m just pathetic and have nothing more to do than wait for another fantastic chappy from you. I know, it’s sad……but you definitely made my day today. Thanks!