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Complicated.
5:
Spencer pushed the door to her dorm room open and crossed the threshold with a large laundry basket in her arms. She carried the basket over to her side of the room, set it down on her twin-sized bed, and began folding.
Denise, her roommate, was working on her laptop at the other side of the room. The tapping sound the keys made under her fingers as she typed was driving Spencer crazy. Denise had a 15-page English paper due Monday that she had started Friday night and was spending the entire weekend to work on. The entire weekend, which meant Spencer heard that damn tapping all night long. She tried listening to the stereo, to drown out the sound, but Denise ‘couldn’t concentrate.’ Her headphones had mysteriously disappeared weeks ago, so the only thing she could do was stick it out.
“Oh, your friend called again while you were out,” Denise said, without looking away from the computer screen. Tap, tap, tap, tap. Fingers moved noisily on the keyboard.
“Did she leave a message?” Spencer asked, while searching through the basket for a match to the green sock she held in her hand.
“Only that she wanted you to call her, whenever you got a chance.”
“Okay, thanks.” She tossed the sock onto her bed, and, after grabbing her cell phone from the night stand, stepped out into the hallway. There were a few people chatting outside, so she decided to go into the bathroom for more privacy. It never accumulated a lot of people during the afternoon on the weekends. On her phone, she went to the first name in her list and hit ‘send’. After three rings, Ashley’s husky voice was in her ear.
“Hey.”
“Hey you,” she smiled, leaning back against the bathroom’s cool tiled wall. “I got your message.”
“I figured.”
The blond frowned, hearing a hint of annoyance in her girlfriend’s voice. “What’s wrong?” she asked, her eyes went to the row of sinks in front of her.
“Nothing.”
“That was believable,” she said, sarcastically. “C’mon, tell me what’s going on.” Pause. “Ash?”
“It just… it sucks. I never hear from you. I’m always the one calling you. And every time I do, I have to leave a message, either with your roommate or on your voicemail, and I’m getting a little tired of not being able to get a hold of you when I want to.” Ashley let out a long sigh. “I know I sound like a whiney bitch right now, but–”
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totaly loved it! u wernt kidding when u said it was depressing were you? ah well post soon! something happy perhaps??
Awesome chapter, def needed to read this. I had so many questions about what happened to them – thanks for answering that! Please port more soon!
omg! i don’t know what to say, it was that good. That has to be the sadest break up ever and the best break up written ever. lol
just finished reading this fic and i gotta say that it’s amazing please keep updating it..
totaly loved it! u wernt kidding when u said it was depressing were you? ah well post soon! something happy perhaps??
Awesome chapter, def needed to read this. I had so many questions about what happened to them – thanks for answering that! Please port more soon!
omg! i don’t know what to say, it was that good. That has to be the sadest break up ever and the best break up written ever. lol
just finished reading this fic and i gotta say that it’s amazing please keep updating it..
OMG…that hurt so badly…::tears::…totally loved it though!
OMG…that hurt so badly…::tears::…totally loved it though!
wow. do i dare go as far as to say the legendary (well as far as this site goes) caseygurl has competition?! lol. you really must post at merciful intervals dear. that is the automatic and unspoken responsibility you promise to take on when you write as well as you do.
wow. do i dare go as far as to say the legendary (well as far as this site goes) caseygurl has competition?! lol. you really must post at merciful intervals dear. that is the automatic and unspoken responsibility you promise to take on when you write as well as you do.
Ouch…that hurts, soo bad. Damn you Ashley! Well now I see why Spencer couldn’t stay pre-med after that…how can you concentrate on something thats not your passion when your feeling like that? Photography sounds like the best self therapy. Great job and can’t wait for your next update.
Ouch…that hurts, soo bad. Damn you Ashley! Well now I see why Spencer couldn’t stay pre-med after that…how can you concentrate on something thats not your passion when your feeling like that? Photography sounds like the best self therapy. Great job and can’t wait for your next update.
I think you needed this chapter to fill in the blanks…keep writing, anxious to see where you go with your story. definitely liking the story.
I think you needed this chapter to fill in the blanks…keep writing, anxious to see where you go with your story. definitely liking the story.
This chapter was so sad that it actually made me laugh. It’s always funny to me when an author warns about a chapter being really depressing because they are always telling the truth. I’m always excited to see an update from you. I’m glad that your next chapter will be arriving soon-ish :) I’m thinking that your next chapter should include a puppy, or a flower, or a sunny day in the park — you know, something happy! I could use some happy thoughts after reading this chapter. LOL.
This chapter was so sad that it actually made me laugh. It’s always funny to me when an author warns about a chapter being really depressing because they are always telling the truth. I’m always excited to see an update from you. I’m glad that your next chapter will be arriving soon-ish :) I’m thinking that your next chapter should include a puppy, or a flower, or a sunny day in the park — you know, something happy! I could use some happy thoughts after reading this chapter. LOL.
wow that had to be painful, I had a lump in my thoat the whole time. keep up the great work on this fic.
wow that had to be painful, I had a lump in my thoat the whole time. keep up the great work on this fic.
I think this is one of my absolute favorite fan fics. I LOVE THIS STORY!!! I totally feel for the characters so now i feel like shit… SO POST SOON!!!
I think this is one of my absolute favorite fan fics. I LOVE THIS STORY!!! I totally feel for the characters so now i feel like shit… SO POST SOON!!!
jeeez….ok so i havent really had alot of time to read lately, but this post…well…shheeeshh. I guess Ash has some demons she has to fight before she can start to fight for spencer….gosh…you know sometimes i swear that girl must be on drugs…then i remember who it is im talking about and realize…wait she probably is lol…Ill be waiting for the next post!
jeeez….ok so i havent really had alot of time to read lately, but this post…well…shheeeshh. I guess Ash has some demons she has to fight before she can start to fight for spencer….gosh…you know sometimes i swear that girl must be on drugs…then i remember who it is im talking about and realize…wait she probably is lol…Ill be waiting for the next post!