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What Happens Next – (Chapter: 41: Crash)
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They all turned when the door slammed open, Spencer’s voice unnaturally high, screaming, “Something’s wrong with Madison!” Ashley’s eyes silently trailed Tristan and Aiden, watching them run inside the house. Her eyes continued to seek, widening when they finally met the sea. Gasping, she fell headfirst into the cold, choppy water. She struggled against the undertow, her arms growing tired, her body stopping its fight, she let her head dip below the water’s surface allowing the powerful suction to pull her down into the black water, drowning. Ashley trembled, fighting with all the strength in her body to hold Spencer’s gaze, everything in her being urging her to run, to get away from the inevitable pain to come.
Her breath caught, a sob sticking sourly in her throat, her mind consciously memorizing Spencer’s faded, bloodshot eyes, the dark mascara tinged tear streaks on her cheeks. In that moment, she realized that she had never hated herself more. One thought rose above the cacophony of all others, riding the powerful wave of shame from her stomach, licking hotly at the sensitive skin of her throat, finally surging bitterly into her mouth. I did this to her. Spencer looked like her heart felt, tired and shell-shocked, scarred from too many battles lost and limbs torn. She watched impotently as Spencer’s eyes disappeared, hidden behind a golden curtain, her slender shoulders shaking from the force of her sobs. The sudden surge of adrenaline left Ashley breathless, shoving her body into motion, her hands unconsciously forming fists, she ran.
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Aiden placed the cool towel against Madison’s forehead, smiling slightly as she began to stir, “Hey…don’t try to move yet.” He looked up as Tristan exhaled loudly, “See its cool T, she’s waking up.” Tristan nodded nervously, “Dude, I still think we should call somebody….maybe her parents?” Aiden shrugged, shaking his head, “Yeah right T! I’m not sure how to explain any of this to her parents, are you?” Tristan leaned back in the recliner, mumbling softly, “Shit.”
She nodded towards the still open front door, whispering, “It’s so quiet out there, do you think everything’s alright?” Aiden lifted Madison’s head, sat beneath her on the couch and let her head fall gently into his lap. He brushed at the few stubborn hairs that still clung to her sweaty forehead, “I don’t know…this whole thing is just so…” Tristan finished his thought, “fucked.” Aiden nodded sighing, “Yeah…fucked.” Madison’s eyes opened slowly and then suddenly wider, she jerked recognizing Aiden, “What are you doing here? Where’s Spencer?” Her face paled, her memory quickly returning, she panted, “Where’s Ash?” Her head turned surprised to hear another voice, “She’s with Spence outside. I think they’re talking.” Madison stared at Tristan for a moment before closing her eyes again.
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Well she better go talk to Spencer right now!! And she better fix everything!!
Hahahaha amazing, this fic is definitely up there with my top fav fans of the site. Very well written, very good job, nice plot… I’m constantly checking for updates :p Keep the good ideas adn the writing coming. Congrats.
I am glad I was an inspiration.I have not read this chapter yet but I know it will be wonderful. Thanks for for posting so I don’t beg any more but you know I will continue to beg for you though! You are awesome girl. I look forward to a great read at work tomorrow! Love ya girl!
amazing post. i think we need some ashley and spencer lovin right about now!
I can actually believe Spencer smacked Ashley. Damnit, why’d she have to mess things up? But it was funny…the conversation between Ashley’s parents. Ahaha. That made me laugh. You make me laugh. Ahahaha. Yeah, you do. Anyway, i hope Ashley gets Spencer back. Or I might just die.
I was right there with Change thinking Madison wasn’t a complete bitch. As soon as I read “When Aiden’s car started she finally allowed herself a small smile,” a whole slew of expletives came out of my mouth aimed towards Madison. And I agree with Aiden: “Just get your damn girl back. I can’t stand to see you like this!” Go get her Ash. Ok, anways…post more soon because I thoroughly enjoy this fic.
ohh man…lol jereking off in the shower?? lmao dude that was fucking funny….but the slap..omg…lol messed up but yet so funny…ok so its settled then! After track practice ash’s dad is gonna have a talk with her about hairy hands lmao, and then shes gonna race off and try to get spence back…WOOOOOHOO lol POST MORE SOON!!!
Well she better go talk to Spencer right now!! And she better fix everything!!
Hahahaha amazing, this fic is definitely up there with my top fav fans of the site. Very well written, very good job, nice plot… I’m constantly checking for updates :p Keep the good ideas adn the writing coming. Congrats.
I am glad I was an inspiration.I have not read this chapter yet but I know it will be wonderful. Thanks for for posting so I don’t beg any more but you know I will continue to beg for you though! You are awesome girl. I look forward to a great read at work tomorrow! Love ya girl!
amazing post. i think we need some ashley and spencer lovin right about now!
I can actually believe Spencer smacked Ashley. Damnit, why’d she have to mess things up? But it was funny…the conversation between Ashley’s parents. Ahaha. That made me laugh. You make me laugh. Ahahaha. Yeah, you do. Anyway, i hope Ashley gets Spencer back. Or I might just die.
I was right there with Change thinking Madison wasn’t a complete bitch. As soon as I read “When Aiden’s car started she finally allowed herself a small smile,” a whole slew of expletives came out of my mouth aimed towards Madison. And I agree with Aiden: “Just get your damn girl back. I can’t stand to see you like this!” Go get her Ash. Ok, anways…post more soon because I thoroughly enjoy this fic.
ohh man…lol jereking off in the shower?? lmao dude that was fucking funny….but the slap..omg…lol messed up but yet so funny…ok so its settled then! After track practice ash’s dad is gonna have a talk with her about hairy hands lmao, and then shes gonna race off and try to get spence back…WOOOOOHOO lol POST MORE SOON!!!
Now I like the drama, but not sure if like what is happening with Splashley…Ashley needs to track Spencer down and make things right again!…and stop the drugs…make them happy please :)
Now I like the drama, but not sure if like what is happening with Splashley…Ashley needs to track Spencer down and make things right again!…and stop the drugs…make them happy please :)
WOW talk about drama, drama, and more drama. Ash better go find Spence and work all this out! I am glad Spence hit her she totally deserves it right now but oh you mischievous one with the small grin! Way to go girl, of course I loved it especially since I was the inspiration. You truly are an incrediable writer and person,thanks for posting for me! T
WOW talk about drama, drama, and more drama. Ash better go find Spence and work all this out! I am glad Spence hit her she totally deserves it right now but oh you mischievous one with the small grin! Way to go girl, of course I loved it especially since I was the inspiration. You truly are an incrediable writer and person,thanks for posting for me! T
Ashley needs to go talk to Spencer is all I can say. That and looks like someone has been taking some writting lessons from peglegmeg- very nice chapter!
Ashley needs to go talk to Spencer is all I can say. That and looks like someone has been taking some writting lessons from peglegmeg- very nice chapter!
I hope they really do work it out.
I hope they really do work it out.
“When Aiden’s car started she finally allowed herself a small smile.” Damn, did Madison plan this all along…and here I thought she was truly genuine with her intentions…pssh, she is cryptic!! LoL, awesome chapter, but I still can’t believe Spence hit Ash…aAAAAAA the madness…please update soon;)
“When Aiden’s car started she finally allowed herself a small smile.” Damn, did Madison plan this all along…and here I thought she was truly genuine with her intentions…pssh, she is cryptic!! LoL, awesome chapter, but I still can’t believe Spence hit Ash…aAAAAAA the madness…please update soon;)