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28 Days – (Chapter: Rumble in the forest (chap5))
Ashley awoke in the still light of the early dawn. The unfamiliar noise of birds and wildlife, with the absence of traffic and the din of city life left her feeling strange. Sometime in the night her mattress had shifted in from the walls of the tent. Probably when she realized that the condensation seeped through. It was warm and cosy, so long as you didn’t touch the walls, where the sodden wet canvas felt slimy and COLD. Ashley shifted, on to her side, and realized she wasn’t the only one who had drifted into the middle of the tent. The gap that once lay between their mattresses had closed, and Spencer Carlin, gorgeous blonde and brand new friend, now lay fast asleep, inches away from her. Ashley thought about getting up, getting out, going for a hell of a long run but she couldn’t tear her eyes away from the face in front of her. Instead she lay as still as she could, taking in every simple nuance of the girl in front of her. In her sleep, her face was relaxed, her lips were parted slightly, and Ashley watched their ripe fullness move ever so slightly with each breath that moved in and out. She felt her stomach flip over, still she didn’t move. It was like she was memorizing this face, this madonna in front of her. She was still staring when Spencer moved, and Ashley started backwards, hitting the edge of the tent and was rewarded with a suddenly sodden slosh of water straight down the back of her top. When she looked back, Spencer was up on one elbow regarding her quizzically.
“Wet tent” she mumbled, like it was an explanation. She bolted out the front, grabbing her things on the way, and making for the toilet block. She didn’t stop to look at the blonde, she’d probably seen enough for the day.
Ashley was up so early she got the shower block all to herself. The upside of this was that there was plenty of hot water. She was halfway through when she heard the next shower go up next to her. Some sixth sense told her it was Spencer, and she turned away from the other cubicle, despite the expanse of board and locked door separating them, trying to rid the image of the blonde, naked with hot water running over her, from her mind. She slammed the taps off, rather violently, and dressed quickly and left like she was fleeing the scene of a crime. By the time Spencer returned to the tent, the rest of the camp was stirring, and Ashley was cramming the last of her belongings in her backpack.
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lol… I love goober’s first comment. You are such an awesome writer. I look forward to your stories everyday. PMS please!!! I need a distraction from studying.
DO IT DO IT DO IT!!! TO IT!!!!YEAH! lol. more romance…bring it on. lol Sorry, im a wee bit hyper. But yeah. i really like the story in the way its going. It kind of takes the characters from their normal LA high school living situations.PMS
just kiss her come on! i love your stories PMS!
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lol… I love goober’s first comment. You are such an awesome writer. I look forward to your stories everyday. PMS please!!! I need a distraction from studying.
DO IT DO IT DO IT!!! TO IT!!!!YEAH! lol. more romance…bring it on. lol Sorry, im a wee bit hyper. But yeah. i really like the story in the way its going. It kind of takes the characters from their normal LA high school living situations.PMS
just kiss her come on! i love your stories PMS!
Love it, though fear you might be losing your mind, lol. Look fwd to reading the next one v muchly, and I wish Ashley had knocked the shit out of Madison!
Love it, though fear you might be losing your mind, lol. Look fwd to reading the next one v muchly, and I wish Ashley had knocked the shit out of Madison!
Yes, YES! A perfect time! A perfectly perfect time! Good thinking, Ashley! And Madison TOTALLY needs to be eaten by a bear. Or a cougar. I’ve decided Aiden can live. Maybe he can just be slightly mauled.
Yes, YES! A perfect time! A perfectly perfect time! Good thinking, Ashley! And Madison TOTALLY needs to be eaten by a bear. Or a cougar. I’ve decided Aiden can live. Maybe he can just be slightly mauled.
Well, glory be! I forgot to mention what an intriging SUMMARY you have for this chapter, my dear! Evil gremlins, gnomeland, an evil Russian circus. It has EVERYTHING! Everything except….CHRIST ON A BICYCLE! ….or bears. ::grumble grumble::
Well, glory be! I forgot to mention what an intriging SUMMARY you have for this chapter, my dear! Evil gremlins, gnomeland, an evil Russian circus. It has EVERYTHING! Everything except….CHRIST ON A BICYCLE! ….or bears. ::grumble grumble::
Please when I get back from work I want to find out what happpens
Please when I get back from work I want to find out what happpens
a perfect time!!! lol post more SOON SOON SOON please?!!!?!?!?!
a perfect time!!! lol post more SOON SOON SOON please?!!!?!?!?!
Sorry for the insane comment leaving…I do not own the phrase “christ on a bicycle”, though it is a favorite of mine. It is free for use for all who may enjoy it and the very insane image it puts in one’s head. :)
Sorry for the insane comment leaving…I do not own the phrase “christ on a bicycle”, though it is a favorite of mine. It is free for use for all who may enjoy it and the very insane image it puts in one’s head. :)
Ashley needs to beat the shit out of madison. Ashely needs to kiss spencer. Post more soon.
Ashley needs to beat the shit out of madison. Ashely needs to kiss spencer. Post more soon.
I absolutely love this story.. Please post more soon!! Really! Hurry! ^_^
I absolutely love this story.. Please post more soon!! Really! Hurry! ^_^
This is getting good!!! I love how this one is from Ashley’s POV. Keep up the super fast updates, ’cause you know we love ’em and can’t live without ’em!!!
This is getting good!!! I love how this one is from Ashley’s POV. Keep up the super fast updates, ’cause you know we love ’em and can’t live without ’em!!!
yes Ashley’s brain you are 100% correct. Right now would be the right time to kiss her!
yes Ashley’s brain you are 100% correct. Right now would be the right time to kiss her!