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The Ground Beneath Her Feet – (Chapter: How she made us real)
I’m in Ohio, and that’s so not what I wanted right now. I’m sure it’s not what you wanted to hear right now because I’m telling you this story in the hope you might be with me, might wish me some luck.
At least this time I’m not back here because I’m completely lost. Believe you me, that makes it even harder in a way. I’m on the luck roll of my life. I stopped in Kilgore and wham bam, thank you MA’AM! I was on her trail again. I knew she’d headed west to ***** and I even had an address.
I made my bi-weekly phone call to my parents, and that’s when Dad told me. Glen was getting married, and not only that, the bastard was doing it this weekend. Talk about spur of the moment decision. I carry a cell phone but I rarely use it for calls and it had been turned off for a couple of days. So when my parents found out they pretty much had to wait on my call and there you go.
I had to go home, he might be an ass but he is my brother and I love him. I was a little bit worried about this shot-gun wedding, especially since my brother has a history of dating completely inappropriate women. He dated Madison for Christ sakes! Oh, you didn’t know that, well, he did, in his senior year. God I hated those three months, hell in a hand basket I’m telling you. I drove home, straight, taking the whole night. I had a few days to get home but I wanted to just get there so I could spend a few days resting and adjusting to the whole thing, and to find a dress. Turns out I was to be a member of the bridal party. I think my exact response on this phone was: “WHAT?” I didn’t even KNOW the bride and I was to supposed to be a bridesmaid? Hell.
Then I met Susie. Let’s just say, that if I was a straight boy, I’d be fighting Glen right now for this girl. Oh, don’t get me wrong, I’m going to love having her for a sister-in-law and there is no one on the planet I want to be with except Ashley. I loved her straight away and I can see why Glen did.
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_barely_breathing_ says
Yay great chapter! Dammit for ending there, i hope the next chapter continues from upstairs *nudge nudge* =D Update soon!
insertcleveranswer says
I’m starting to feel as desperate as Spencer. If she doesn’t find Ashley soon, I might go crazy. I’m also going crazy with the not knowing what Spencer did to Ashley to make her run so far away. I love the flashbacks to the beginning of their friendship turned relationship. Truthfully, I love everything about the story. You made my crappy day happy again by posting, so thank you!
PM76 says
Your story is so incredibly emotionally intense, I love it! Sometimes it depresses me a bit, but I’ve never really been big on the airy fairy stuff anyways. This definitely was my fav chapter thus far
Broken_Childe says
Hey Chicka :PSorry I’m late… oh man oh man what a chapter! Loved the flashback! “There’s an absence by my side, and I feel lost again.”Loved that line… keep’em coming girl!
NDFightingIrishFan says
I am just now reading this story and I wish you’d update it again, it’s really good.
jtsec9143 says
wow, thats really all i have to say… i just found this fan fiction site a while ago, and happened upon your 28 days story… i read about a page and was hooked… since then i’ve read almost everything you’ve writen! you are an amazing writer!!! i envy your gift (i’ve always wanted to be good at writing!) anyway, i love this story and wish you would have finished it! i don’t know if you even come on here anymore, but if you do i just wanted to tell you that you’re amazing and i wish i could have been around when you first started writing one here to root you on! cheers!
_barely_breathing_ says
Yay great chapter! Dammit for ending there, i hope the next chapter continues from upstairs *nudge nudge* =D Update soon!
insertcleveranswer says
I’m starting to feel as desperate as Spencer. If she doesn’t find Ashley soon, I might go crazy. I’m also going crazy with the not knowing what Spencer did to Ashley to make her run so far away. I love the flashbacks to the beginning of their friendship turned relationship. Truthfully, I love everything about the story. You made my crappy day happy again by posting, so thank you!
PM76 says
Your story is so incredibly emotionally intense, I love it! Sometimes it depresses me a bit, but I’ve never really been big on the airy fairy stuff anyways. This definitely was my fav chapter thus far
Broken_Childe says
Hey Chicka :PSorry I’m late… oh man oh man what a chapter! Loved the flashback! “There’s an absence by my side, and I feel lost again.”Loved that line… keep’em coming girl!
NDFightingIrishFan says
I am just now reading this story and I wish you’d update it again, it’s really good.
jtsec9143 says
wow, thats really all i have to say… i just found this fan fiction site a while ago, and happened upon your 28 days story… i read about a page and was hooked… since then i’ve read almost everything you’ve writen! you are an amazing writer!!! i envy your gift (i’ve always wanted to be good at writing!) anyway, i love this story and wish you would have finished it! i don’t know if you even come on here anymore, but if you do i just wanted to tell you that you’re amazing and i wish i could have been around when you first started writing one here to root you on! cheers!
nightrida11 says
love it..i wish i grew up next door to ashley
nightrida11 says
love it..i wish i grew up next door to ashley
fivebyfive02 says
i wish I could better say how much this story just touched me…. sitting here at like 5:30 am I have tears in my eyes…. you can soooo clearly feel spencers poor little heart aching with out ashley…. i hope she finds her soon… this is truly beautiful! well done
fivebyfive02 says
i wish I could better say how much this story just touched me…. sitting here at like 5:30 am I have tears in my eyes…. you can soooo clearly feel spencers poor little heart aching with out ashley…. i hope she finds her soon… this is truly beautiful! well done
bannerman says
argh! it cut my comment short, damnit. I went on to say I wish I could write more but have another day of filming to begin! It’s been five days now, and there are a couple left to go and I think I’m going crazy with it. I leave you with lots of love and a lil’ hope you’ll post more soon, oh prolific one! Jxx
bannerman says
argh! it cut my comment short, damnit. I went on to say I wish I could write more but have another day of filming to begin! It’s been five days now, and there are a couple left to go and I think I’m going crazy with it. I leave you with lots of love and a lil’ hope you’ll post more soon, oh prolific one! Jxx
bannerman says
ahhh Clom. I have been silent and busy for too long, I feel. I love this story – you say so much with so few words… it’s awesome! I actually wanted to see that there was another page, but frowned when I realised the chapter had ended – :-(
bannerman says
ahhh Clom. I have been silent and busy for too long, I feel. I love this story – you say so much with so few words… it’s awesome! I actually wanted to see that there was another page, but frowned when I realised the chapter had ended – :-(
babygirl87 says
LOVE IT SO SO SO SO SO MUCH…. Please Post More SOON… NOW would be awesome… God do I love this story!!!
babygirl87 says
LOVE IT SO SO SO SO SO MUCH…. Please Post More SOON… NOW would be awesome… God do I love this story!!!
tay0720 says
good GOD i love this story. LOVE IT! cmonnn what happened when they were upstaaaairs?! you cant leave me therrrre :-(! cmonnn! how bout triple update. that’d be hot. haha, hmm so so so SO amazing! stay sweet yo.
tay0720 says
good GOD i love this story. LOVE IT! cmonnn what happened when they were upstaaaairs?! you cant leave me therrrre :-(! cmonnn! how bout triple update. that’d be hot. haha, hmm so so so SO amazing! stay sweet yo.
schminda says
oh baby! sooooo good! but damn that glen! spencer was soooo close! boo. can’t wait for the next post!!!!
schminda says
oh baby! sooooo good! but damn that glen! spencer was soooo close! boo. can’t wait for the next post!!!!
eyeheartmusik says
this story is beautiful. and inspiring. great job. post more soon!!! i think i’m gonna go get what i lost.
eyeheartmusik says
this story is beautiful. and inspiring. great job. post more soon!!! i think i’m gonna go get what i lost.
slayerfan101 says
oh god the way you wrote spencer. you made me feel every single emotions, from the desperation of not finding ashley to the sweet remembrance of their beautiful beginnings and the back and forth of these two extreme feelings. arghhh. you’re driving me stir crazy!! but it’s a good kind of crazy i believe. i heart you. i heart this story!!
slayerfan101 says
oh god the way you wrote spencer. you made me feel every single emotions, from the desperation of not finding ashley to the sweet remembrance of their beautiful beginnings and the back and forth of these two extreme feelings. arghhh. you’re driving me stir crazy!! but it’s a good kind of crazy i believe. i heart you. i heart this story!!
NotTwinny says
Awwww. I smiled at the flash back. Keep up the good work. I love it.
NotTwinny says
Awwww. I smiled at the flash back. Keep up the good work. I love it.
Satchel says
so even though i read all your stories, this one is getting so damn good that it’s really starting to push for a place as my favorite of your current stories (and that’s saying something because i’m obsessed with anything remotely connected to BFM)…i’m also going to be a little selfish and say that even though you posted the next 2 chapters for this one, you post an extra extra long chapter for this one again and really soon. I’m imploring that you post soon because i really don’t know if i can wait too long. patience sucks.
Satchel says
so even though i read all your stories, this one is getting so damn good that it’s really starting to push for a place as my favorite of your current stories (and that’s saying something because i’m obsessed with anything remotely connected to BFM)…i’m also going to be a little selfish and say that even though you posted the next 2 chapters for this one, you post an extra extra long chapter for this one again and really soon. I’m imploring that you post soon because i really don’t know if i can wait too long. patience sucks.