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Completely Incomplete – (Chapter: 18)
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The day was gorgeous. Spring was starting to… well, spring, and the trees were slowly regaining their greenery. The park was filled with the usual runners jogging around and toddlers playing on the swing sets while their parents or nannies yapped away on cell phones or with other parents or nannies. Almost as soon as we got into the park, Ashley had linked her arm through mine and now, an hour later, she had yet to let go. We found a free bench right around the reservoir and I unlinked us as I sat down. But Ashley wasn’t having it, because as soon as we were both seated, she linked our arms again. I gave her a questioning look.
“What?” she asked.
“Nothing.” Except for the mixed signals and constant mind-changing…
“Do you come here a lot?”
“Not a lot. Sometimes when the weather’s nice I’ll go for a run. It’s kind of a pain to get to, though.”
“It’s so pretty here. I can’t believe we’re still in New York.”
“Yeah, I know,” I replied. As if she hadn’t contradicted herself enough already today, she rested her head on my shoulder and moved closer. “Ash…”
“Hmm?”
“Friends… right?” I had to drop the f-bomb. She lifted her head up and moved back to her original position, but she still wouldn’t unlink our arms.
“Sorry,” she said.
“It’s okay.”
“Friends link arms,” she argued.
“Whatever you say,” I replied with a smile. But I didn’t move, and neither did she.
“I feel like I’ve been here for so long.”
“Gee, thanks!”
“I didn’t mean it like that,” she laughed. “It’s just… I don’t know. I feel like you and I never even stopped talking to begin with, you know? It just seems normal.”
“Yeah,” I agreed. “It does.”
“So… when do you think you’ll be coming over to L.A.?”
“You mean, like, for a visit?”
“Well, for good would be better,” she smiled. “But I’d take a visit, too.”
“I don’t know. I haven’t really been back since I moved here.”
“All the more reason for you to come.”
“We’ll see,” I said.
“Translation: ‘Not a chance in hell.’”
“Shut up!” I slapped her arm. “I didn’t say that. I can’t just take a vacation whenever I feel like it. I have clients, hearings, work that needs to be done. I’d love to come to L.A., but I can’t just… like… go.”
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awesome….once again!!!!
I love these transitional posts!! They just leave you hanging… Oh beautiful torture!!I love this story. Please post soon…You have managed to make my heart shrink everytime they brush each other off with the f-bomb. It is very touching honestly… great story… but please give my shrinking heart something… please!!
I didn’t even know you HAD drive up ATM’s. All of ours are walk up. Love the post! Love it love it love it. Spencer, you’re miserable in NY… just um… I don’t know… I have to wait and see where you’re going, cos I’m so on edge about it!
great update as usual! cant wait for more. keep it up darlin
MBTLA hahahaha PRICELESS, i loved it. cant wait for the next update. i love love love your writing.
Hi-ho, Clark here again. Wow, do i ever empathize with Spencer. All the chief has me do is work work work. But Ashley’s right. the smiling face of the woman i love gets me through all the long hours. I must admit that i my self have wondered about the braile stuff. not just drive up atm’s but on random signs on buildings in the most weird places. But anyway. *pauses to listen* Um, excuse me i need to go make a phone call *runs away decently quickly*
Awesome chapter! Can’t wait for the next chap, a nice home cooked ash meal, sounds good!
Why do we drive on a parkway and park on a driveway? Regardless, I absolutely love this story!
Lordy Lordy Lordy. You are stupendous at writing just the thing I want to read. Update soon. I can’t wait for this dinner. And the mixed signals? Loving it. And when Ashley leaves whenever or whenever Spencer is alone have Michelle call. I want to know exactly what Ashley is feeling and who better to tell Spencer then their blabbermouth friend Michelle? :) I like that Michelle will be jealous. I like jealousy. I like it a lot when Spencer or Ashley feel it about each other or people feel jealous about them or something like that. IDK. I just like it. PMS ASAP. XoXoXoXoXo LoVe~EvOl~LoVe~EvOl~LoVe.
I am soo glad that Ashley and Spencer are doing okay. I would love if Spencer decided to go back to LA because she would be with her family and Ashley. Also, I hope that she will get a better opportunity to do more in her work and get a raised in like her position. PMS and I can’t wait to see what will happen next!!!!
dang..tats nice…i read ur 2 posts before leaving this comment here.. Wishing mebe there would be more than 2 to read, but..oh well, quick!! get the new post up !! thanks..
yeah i agree with clomle idk you guys have drive up ATM. and no there’s no braille stuff on mine. hmm. ok spencer gotta quit her job and MBTLA!! come on she’s brilliant i bet she can find a kickass job in LA too. her life would be much much better with ash. she just have to see it!!! pls update soon! i wanna know how good is ash’s cooking. maybe she can win over spence’s heart with it. heh. ;)
Wonderful post. I so want them to be togethr. PMS
Love your story, just started reading it this past week. As for braille on the drive-up ATMs, my girlfriend and I were pondering that very issue a few months ago and couldn’t come up with a reasonable explanation either. Oh well.
great story again~ PMS, you story (together with clomle’s) makes my day~ i am not sure about your place, but here in mines, we do have drivers that are obviously blind as they seem oblivious to other drivers.. i think those braille on the drive up ATMs are for them… gov should consider braille road signs too… just to cater their needs.
awesome….once again!!!!
I love these transitional posts!! They just leave you hanging… Oh beautiful torture!!I love this story. Please post soon…You have managed to make my heart shrink everytime they brush each other off with the f-bomb. It is very touching honestly… great story… but please give my shrinking heart something… please!!
I didn’t even know you HAD drive up ATM’s. All of ours are walk up. Love the post! Love it love it love it. Spencer, you’re miserable in NY… just um… I don’t know… I have to wait and see where you’re going, cos I’m so on edge about it!
great update as usual! cant wait for more. keep it up darlin
MBTLA hahahaha PRICELESS, i loved it. cant wait for the next update. i love love love your writing.
Hi-ho, Clark here again. Wow, do i ever empathize with Spencer. All the chief has me do is work work work. But Ashley’s right. the smiling face of the woman i love gets me through all the long hours. I must admit that i my self have wondered about the braile stuff. not just drive up atm’s but on random signs on buildings in the most weird places. But anyway. *pauses to listen* Um, excuse me i need to go make a phone call *runs away decently quickly*
Awesome chapter! Can’t wait for the next chap, a nice home cooked ash meal, sounds good!
Why do we drive on a parkway and park on a driveway? Regardless, I absolutely love this story!
Lordy Lordy Lordy. You are stupendous at writing just the thing I want to read. Update soon. I can’t wait for this dinner. And the mixed signals? Loving it. And when Ashley leaves whenever or whenever Spencer is alone have Michelle call. I want to know exactly what Ashley is feeling and who better to tell Spencer then their blabbermouth friend Michelle? :) I like that Michelle will be jealous. I like jealousy. I like it a lot when Spencer or Ashley feel it about each other or people feel jealous about them or something like that. IDK. I just like it. PMS ASAP. XoXoXoXoXo LoVe~EvOl~LoVe~EvOl~LoVe.
I am soo glad that Ashley and Spencer are doing okay. I would love if Spencer decided to go back to LA because she would be with her family and Ashley. Also, I hope that she will get a better opportunity to do more in her work and get a raised in like her position. PMS and I can’t wait to see what will happen next!!!!
dang..tats nice…i read ur 2 posts before leaving this comment here.. Wishing mebe there would be more than 2 to read, but..oh well, quick!! get the new post up !! thanks..
yeah i agree with clomle idk you guys have drive up ATM. and no there’s no braille stuff on mine. hmm. ok spencer gotta quit her job and MBTLA!! come on she’s brilliant i bet she can find a kickass job in LA too. her life would be much much better with ash. she just have to see it!!! pls update soon! i wanna know how good is ash’s cooking. maybe she can win over spence’s heart with it. heh. ;)
Wonderful post. I so want them to be togethr. PMS
Love your story, just started reading it this past week. As for braille on the drive-up ATMs, my girlfriend and I were pondering that very issue a few months ago and couldn’t come up with a reasonable explanation either. Oh well.
great story again~ PMS, you story (together with clomle’s) makes my day~ i am not sure about your place, but here in mines, we do have drivers that are obviously blind as they seem oblivious to other drivers.. i think those braille on the drive up ATMs are for them… gov should consider braille road signs too… just to cater their needs.
that was an anwesome chappy :) fills my heart with joy lol… man i WISH we had drive up atms… they’re so hard to get a parking spot near (well the ones in town) lol… but then we would have the crisis of major car queues LOL…anyways it was good.
that was an anwesome chappy :) fills my heart with joy lol… man i WISH we had drive up atms… they’re so hard to get a parking spot near (well the ones in town) lol… but then we would have the crisis of major car queues LOL…anyways it was good.