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Completely Incomplete – (Chapter: 19)
“Mmm Ash, whatever you’re making, it smells so good!” I exclaimed as I walked in the door and put my bag down. The smell in my apartment made the air almost edible, and as I entered the kitchen, I couldn’t help but smile at the sight of Ashley cooking in an apron in front of my stove.
“Chicken marsala.”
“My favorite!”
“I know,” she replied, grinning. “I don’t forget things that easily.” I reciprocated the smile and went to pour some food in Benny’s bowl. “Already done. And taken out.”
“Ash, you didn’t have to.”
“Don’t worry about it.” I then remembered that I was supposed to meet Carrie at the dog park tonight. I whipped out my cell phone and sent her an apologetic text; she replied a few seconds later, assuring me I shouldn’t worry about it. “Who’s that?”
“Oh, just Carrie,” I answered. She raised her eyebrows, not moving her gaze from the pan on the stove. “I just had to tell her I couldn’t make it tonight.”
“Where were you two going?”
“Dog park… remember?”
“Oh yeah,” she said. Feeling strangely confident, I decided to take this opportunity to shake her up a little.
“Usually after we go to the dog park, she comes back here and we hang out. Normally, it’s just friendly and everything, but sometimes it gets to be a little more than that.” She stared at me, her eyes wide as if she’d just seen a ghost.
“Are you serious?”
“No!” I laughed. “God, you shoulda seen your face!”
“That was evil, Spence. But good one… nicely executed,” she smiled.
“Thank you.” I watched as she flipped a piece of chicken over, allowing its other side to cook. “Can I help with anything?”
“Nah, it should be ready in just a sec.”
And true to her word, a couple minutes later we were sitting down and eating. The food was better than practically any restaurant I’d ever been to. Ashley smiled as she watched me eat… I found that just a little bit odd.
“What?” I asked.
“Nothing… just glad you like it.”
“Like would be an understatement,” I told her. She smiled again as she pierced her fork through a piece of lettuce, followed by a carrot and a tomato. I then remembered that I had some good news to share with her. “Oh I forgot to tell you!”
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onyxeyes says
As always, great post. Nice to hear from you. I think that probably my favorite thing about my story is that, eventhough it’s told from spencer’s POV, it is still clear what ashley’s feelings toward her are. Like the little things that ashley does, arm linking, longer than normal hugs and subtle innuendo, it all lets us know exactly how she feels about spencer. Anyway, post more soon. i can’t wait to see what happens next.
tylo says
sweetttttttttttt longer
ngasi_lei says
Hi, Clark here again. I must say the only that pulled me out of bed was this update. wanted to give it a read. and tell you once again how great you are. would go into more detail, but this migraine is killing me. wish i had some one to spoon me.
onyxeyes says
As always, great post. Nice to hear from you. I think that probably my favorite thing about my story is that, eventhough it’s told from spencer’s POV, it is still clear what ashley’s feelings toward her are. Like the little things that ashley does, arm linking, longer than normal hugs and subtle innuendo, it all lets us know exactly how she feels about spencer. Anyway, post more soon. i can’t wait to see what happens next.
tylo says
sweetttttttttttt longer
ngasi_lei says
Hi, Clark here again. I must say the only that pulled me out of bed was this update. wanted to give it a read. and tell you once again how great you are. would go into more detail, but this migraine is killing me. wish i had some one to spoon me.
cheeralstar13 says
Oh my, I absolutely loved it. Your posts always brighten my day! But I’ve decided that they need to get it over with and just get together already. Lol. UD SOON!
cheeralstar13 says
Oh my, I absolutely loved it. Your posts always brighten my day! But I’ve decided that they need to get it over with and just get together already. Lol. UD SOON!
clomle44 says
Excited wriggle de clomle! Spooning Yeah. Oh no, Ash has to go home in the morning. That sucks. That sucks so much. Oh oh oh oh oh oh how I don’t want that to happen. And how much I feel it has to for the flow of the story. Sigh. I love you kozmic, for posting, for writing this incredible story, and for making me forget about my splitting headache for the time it took me to read it. Can I market you as a headache cure?
clomle44 says
Excited wriggle de clomle! Spooning Yeah. Oh no, Ash has to go home in the morning. That sucks. That sucks so much. Oh oh oh oh oh oh how I don’t want that to happen. And how much I feel it has to for the flow of the story. Sigh. I love you kozmic, for posting, for writing this incredible story, and for making me forget about my splitting headache for the time it took me to read it. Can I market you as a headache cure?
smile_sadly says
i was just thinking about hows there was no way you could get any more amazing, and then you go and post that! gosh, way to prove me wrong time after time!
smile_sadly says
i was just thinking about hows there was no way you could get any more amazing, and then you go and post that! gosh, way to prove me wrong time after time!
dddisfunctional says
kidnap her! haha. great post dawgy.
dddisfunctional says
kidnap her! haha. great post dawgy.
_barely_breathing_ says
Great chapter! I really wish ash didn’t have to leave soo soon! They’re still totally inlove with each other, it’s driving me nuts! In a good way though =D I can’t wait for the next chapter!
_barely_breathing_ says
Great chapter! I really wish ash didn’t have to leave soo soon! They’re still totally inlove with each other, it’s driving me nuts! In a good way though =D I can’t wait for the next chapter!
PM76 says
Man, I simply love this story. Every time I read your latest post I think “she can’t get any better”, and then you do!
PM76 says
Man, I simply love this story. Every time I read your latest post I think “she can’t get any better”, and then you do!
slayerfan101 says
ooo america next top model is one of my guilty pleasures too. heh. i so love when ash said this was her second best decision and then told spence what was the first. so so sweet. and isnt it much sweeter when you have the second chance to start over or be friends again with someone you lost before? :D
slayerfan101 says
ooo america next top model is one of my guilty pleasures too. heh. i so love when ash said this was her second best decision and then told spence what was the first. so so sweet. and isnt it much sweeter when you have the second chance to start over or be friends again with someone you lost before? :D
Kyden says
Very nice but what are they gonna do Ashley goes home the next day
Kyden says
Very nice but what are they gonna do Ashley goes home the next day