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Best For Me – (Chapter: You. You’re best for me.)
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She’d never shaken so much in her life. Not when she first appeared at Ashley’s door, and not that night they’d made love for the first time ever. She’d been made of jelly both times but this was new to Spencer, the human earthquake. There was no hesitating, she hit the ground running and drove at a barely legal speed. She cursed the traffic lights and anyone who got in the way; she was closer to road rage than ever. Nothing was going to keep her from Ashley, not this time.
Spencer was out of the car so fast that she nearly forgot to lock the door. Racing across the bitumen she threw out a prayer of thanks to anyone listening that there were no cars and pounded up the stairs of Ashley’s front porch. Steadying herself for a few seconds on the door frame she took a deep breath and knocked on the door. The time for indecision was over.
Unfortunately the time for Ashley to open the door didn’t appear to be now. She knocked again. Still no response. She eventually gave up on knocking when her knuckles felt raw. If Ashley was home, she wasn’t answering the door. Tentatively Spencer tried the doorknob. Locked. Finally waking up a little from her buzzing head and to her surroundings, Spencer checked out the house. It was locked up tight and dark. Ashley wasn’t home. Oh hell… now what.
She’d been so fired up, so ready to go in there and fight until she got her girl. And now the deflation was setting in, because there was nothing around to fight for. Wait, that wasn’t true. She just didn’t know where it was!
Spencer slowly slid down to sit on the porch steps. She leaned wearily against the rail post and sighed. Closing her eyes she let the soft air of the night wash over her.
How long she sat there she did not know. It was only when the crunch of gravel startled her that she opened her tear stained eyelids and took a shuddering breath. The crunch stopped.
Ashley. She was back; looking radiant in the moonlight, her hair cascading down around her shoulders in luscious curls and her body taut in jeans and a denim jacket. Spencer knew that she’d find Ashley attractive in sack cloth and ashes but damn if the sight of her love didn’t take her breath away every single time.
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OMG! I absolutely loved it! You’re such an amazing writer and I am so sad that you’re ending this story! I’m really gonna look for those one shots now. Ever thought of maybe doing a sequal? I know that we DEFINITELY wouldn’t mind! Anyway, I love this story…and it was such a great way to end it…and I just have to add…VERY HOT! Lol…anyway, you definitely made my day!
OMG that was BALLIN that was hot, your story was awesome and still is even though it ended you did a great job your just awesome and I love you for the story ur the stuff
whew! intense ending there, lady. the last few chapters had my heart breaking, absolutely wrenching… you are amazing! they figured things out, thank god, ashley was driving me nuts! doesnt she get that their destined? thank you for this amazing fic, and i sincerely hope you grace us with your presence as often as possible.
God, this is a really wonderful story. You’re a great writer! You make me “see” it, if you know what I mean, as if I’m watching a movie. Really, truly wonderful!
Hahahaha, your girlfriend rocks for asking that and playing the “if you loved me you would” card. Hahaha. And you rock even more for not giving in, ’cause just because it’s funny doesn’t mean I wouldn’t have thrown a freaking chair through the window if you had. :PThank you so much for dedicating your time and brainwaves to this story! I’m sure I’m not alone in finding it perfect and am already looking forward to a one shot. Or maybe five one shots… or ten. :DOh and can I just say: “Could we pick them up and then go home?”
Oops, partial comment-age alert. It was supposed to say: Sooo f*cking adorable after that. :P
clom…you are a god. seriously…a god. i’m sitting here reading this and completely balling because it was just so beautiful! seriously…this is ridiculous. i am freaking out in pure joy after reading this and that they are finally together and a family! oh man…you were right when you said ultimate chapter. this is the ultimate chapter of anything. it is going to be hard to beat yourself – but i have faith that you will do it. much love!
I have fallen in love with this story, I think you can join the staff of writers of SON and make our serie the best, great work, congratulations!!!
*sigh* Man, i wish I was in love…something to fight for is much needed in my life these days, lol.What can I say, S…this fic was such a wonder. Full of twists and turns, my heart was just on a rollercoaster the whole time. You put so much thought into it…just as you do all your fics. These girls are finally together without regret and confusion, and that fills me with joy. I am so happy you came on board and shared your wonderful tales of Spashley woe. I will definitely miss this fic immensely. There was something haunting about it and I loved how mixed up it made me feel, lol. What can I say, I’m a sucker for punishment. You have inspired me to get my ass moving on updates, seeing as I have neglected for like months, lol!Nothing more to say here…you know how your words make me feel ;) xxo
Ok. So right now I’m at my most emotional. I’ve read this story from the very beginning and I could not love it more than if I were its creator. You are personally my FanFic god/all-powerful deity/superhero/tear-inducer/passion inspirer/soul searer/heart wrencher/pulse pounder/hand trembler/maker of joy/bringer of pain/effigy of bliss/the supernatural being that lights me on fire. Even those names cannot fully describe what you are. I could keep naming you. You are an amazing writer and an astounding author. But if I tried to name all the wonderful things you were I might just be here for days and that just doesn’t suit my schedule. What I’m trying to get across in this overly long comment of mine is that I’m sad that this story is over and yet at the same time over-joyed to see all the complications that had arisen in the Spashley relationship resolved. Only you could elicit two emotions in me, who btw are at opposite ends of the spectrum, and make them come together in harmony and melt my very being. Time has passed quickly on the construction of this story and I left to wonder where it went. My feelings are becoming overwhelming and words now are just not enough to make my intentions clear. Luckily I’ve had the privilege to be a reader of your story and give you comments that hopefully supported you in times of need. This was possibly the best story I’ve ever read, FanFic or not. My conclusion to this comment is that I hope you continue to write more stories (seeing as you are so good at that). Time will only make you better and right now you’re absolutely perfect. :] Life is unfair to me, if life was fair then this story would go on forever but an ending is needed for all great things. I’m eternally yours, to do with as you please. I’m a humble slave that asks for only one kindness in return, FanFic. I love you with every fiber of my person and from the bottom of my tiny heart I declare you to be forever in my good graces. Sometimes I fear I love you too much Clom, far FAR too much. YOU FUCKING ROCK. KICK-ASS DOESN’T EVEN BEGIN TO DESCRIBE YOUR AWESOMENESS. Love!!! …xoXOxo…
Oh who am I kidding? I can’t just leave one single comment. You are too amazing to do that and you deserve to know the full extent of my feelings. I’ve never been this happy before. I’m smiling and the tiniest little thing makes me laugh. Some of the people around me are pissed but I don’t care. People just don’t get it. I’m so in love. I’m going to start dry-humping the desk any minute now because I so . . . emotional right now. WOW!!! Whoa… dude, I LOVE YOU. You are just to cool for school. Mm, mm, mm, mm, GOOD! *sigh* Love ya!!! Please, update on your other story. I need my Clomle fix.
that had to have been the most perfect ending. did i not tell you it was going to be magnificent, marvelous, extraoridinary, some other adjs. and it was, it was every bit i said it would and 3407598235X more. you are so talented its absolutley stunning, and from now on you cant argue me when i say you are talented, every single piece you have wrote stands as proof. *claps* now take a bow. i lug you mucho AT, for numnerous reasons, i can list them later if you want. so ill be except more great things for your sexy lingerie wearing self, so hop to. *hugs* :]
Best story on any fanfic site ever I hope theres a sequel I love how you ended this story you got to admit have you seen any other author get this many comments you’re THE BEST author I love love love this story please continue on writing please
i watch sad movies all the time, right…?! and i cry everytime, right…?! well, i’ve never cried that hard over any movie i’ve ever seen. even the notebook… even loving annabelle… even imagine me & you. none of them made me cry as hard as i cried when i read the post before this one. all the pain that she felt… girl, you nearly pushed me over the edge. hahah… wow, you’re amazing. thank you so much…
I would just like to say that YOU, my dear are the one and only reason that I have joined this wonderful, glorious, little community. You inspire, doll. This rocks, my only regret in reading all of them, is that now I actually have to do work when I am at my 9 to 5. Sigh. You are an inspiration. When’s the book coming out (insert sheepish grin here)? You rock my universe, darling. KEEP WRITING!!! PLEASE!
WOW!!!!!!!!!!!Ashley blushed and rested her forehead on Spencer’s. “Could we pick them up and then go home?”Spencer’s own vision blurred with tears. Oh my god could this woman get any sweeter?”You want to go home?””Yeah” Ashley whispered. “With my family.”Spencer smiled, the tears sliding down her cheeks and landing on their naked bodies. She stooped down briefly to pick up some of their clothes, handing Ashley hers.”Yeah. Lets go home.” And they did….And thats all she wrote!!!(has to be more):)..Thank You so much for a Wonderful story!!! YOU ROCK!!
I absolutely loved this fic!!! Each update left me hanging on a thread and wondering if they would end up together. Thank heavens they did or I may have had a nervous breakdown. The drama always stresses me out but if you think about it, it’s the drama that always makes you realize what you need, want or don’t want for that matter. Your characters are so real and alive in fact, I think you should start writing for the show then maybe I won’t be left so frustrated with the storylines!! I will miss this fic immensley and hope you will be doing some one shots so we can catch up with Spencer, Ashley and the rugrats!!
Just when I thought I couldn’t be any happier that Spence and Ash were reunited…Ashley asks if they can go home to the kids. Clome-you brought me to tears, which..believe me, does not happen often. Awesome update, awesome story. I am now going to go back and read the whole thing in its entirety. You are the best!
Perfection. Loved how Ashley made her work for it…loved how Spencer persisted. ah…one day :-) Thanks so much for this fiction. And thanks for the happy ending…in time may we all have happy endings. Updates are appreciated. Your writing/storytelling is great. And… thanks for getting caseygurl writing again. I tried for months. Please never make me beg you to write!
all I can think and say is thank you!!! so it’s the end and I fell in love with this story…feeling sad knowing it was the end . love the way you write and looking for the next one
I absolutely adored this story. The ups and downs…I always searched for this story and was excited to see a new chapter had been posted. I am so glad on how you ended the story; Spence finally realized exactly how important Ash was to her and how other things just couldn’t matter as much as her love. Thanks for a beautiful story, and you must post more little One Shots for us!!! Thank you again!
Darn you and your perfect stories which make me completely and utterly emotional, and sometimes even get me to believe in love ;)I never thought I would love this story as much as I do. But there are days where I can’t get it out of my head, and what a joyous escape it is. Thank you for sharing your brilliance!!!
this was one of the most AMAZING fics I’ve ever read! I could hardly wait in between instalments, I dropped all else to able to read them. YOu are an amazing writer and I can’t wait for the next!
okay, so i’ve not really one to post comments often, but i think this last post warrants one. I adore this ff. It’s easily the best one i’ve ever read. I’m so so so thankful that you thought of this story. It’s easily unlike any other I’ve ever read. It’s rare for a story to actually take the time to build a spashley relationship on more than just sex. You actually recreated the chemistry that we saw in spashley during those moments in season 1(and even rarer moments in season 2). So anyway, thank you for greatest story. I can’t help but expect more like it.
I CRIED!! I want to have a family with Ashley!! Hey you are a genius!! I loved every chapter of your story… your pace… you timing… the drama… the wait… the angst! I hope you can continue to read many more of your wonderful stories!
That was so wonderful. I hate to see it come to a end. You have made me very happy. I would like for you to write more to see how they are doing in the furture. I loved your story. Great job.
BEST STORY EVER! Loved every update. The ending was so perfect and I’m incredibly glad you didn’t take your gf’s advice and kill them off ;)Keep posting your wonderful stories, will definitely be reading them!
OMG! I absolutely loved it! You’re such an amazing writer and I am so sad that you’re ending this story! I’m really gonna look for those one shots now. Ever thought of maybe doing a sequal? I know that we DEFINITELY wouldn’t mind! Anyway, I love this story…and it was such a great way to end it…and I just have to add…VERY HOT! Lol…anyway, you definitely made my day!
OMG that was BALLIN that was hot, your story was awesome and still is even though it ended you did a great job your just awesome and I love you for the story ur the stuff
whew! intense ending there, lady. the last few chapters had my heart breaking, absolutely wrenching… you are amazing! they figured things out, thank god, ashley was driving me nuts! doesnt she get that their destined? thank you for this amazing fic, and i sincerely hope you grace us with your presence as often as possible.
God, this is a really wonderful story. You’re a great writer! You make me “see” it, if you know what I mean, as if I’m watching a movie. Really, truly wonderful!
Hahahaha, your girlfriend rocks for asking that and playing the “if you loved me you would” card. Hahaha. And you rock even more for not giving in, ’cause just because it’s funny doesn’t mean I wouldn’t have thrown a freaking chair through the window if you had. :PThank you so much for dedicating your time and brainwaves to this story! I’m sure I’m not alone in finding it perfect and am already looking forward to a one shot. Or maybe five one shots… or ten. :DOh and can I just say: “Could we pick them up and then go home?”
Oops, partial comment-age alert. It was supposed to say: Sooo f*cking adorable after that. :P
clom…you are a god. seriously…a god. i’m sitting here reading this and completely balling because it was just so beautiful! seriously…this is ridiculous. i am freaking out in pure joy after reading this and that they are finally together and a family! oh man…you were right when you said ultimate chapter. this is the ultimate chapter of anything. it is going to be hard to beat yourself – but i have faith that you will do it. much love!
I have fallen in love with this story, I think you can join the staff of writers of SON and make our serie the best, great work, congratulations!!!
*sigh* Man, i wish I was in love…something to fight for is much needed in my life these days, lol.What can I say, S…this fic was such a wonder. Full of twists and turns, my heart was just on a rollercoaster the whole time. You put so much thought into it…just as you do all your fics. These girls are finally together without regret and confusion, and that fills me with joy. I am so happy you came on board and shared your wonderful tales of Spashley woe. I will definitely miss this fic immensely. There was something haunting about it and I loved how mixed up it made me feel, lol. What can I say, I’m a sucker for punishment. You have inspired me to get my ass moving on updates, seeing as I have neglected for like months, lol!Nothing more to say here…you know how your words make me feel ;) xxo
Ok. So right now I’m at my most emotional. I’ve read this story from the very beginning and I could not love it more than if I were its creator. You are personally my FanFic god/all-powerful deity/superhero/tear-inducer/passion inspirer/soul searer/heart wrencher/pulse pounder/hand trembler/maker of joy/bringer of pain/effigy of bliss/the supernatural being that lights me on fire. Even those names cannot fully describe what you are. I could keep naming you. You are an amazing writer and an astounding author. But if I tried to name all the wonderful things you were I might just be here for days and that just doesn’t suit my schedule. What I’m trying to get across in this overly long comment of mine is that I’m sad that this story is over and yet at the same time over-joyed to see all the complications that had arisen in the Spashley relationship resolved. Only you could elicit two emotions in me, who btw are at opposite ends of the spectrum, and make them come together in harmony and melt my very being. Time has passed quickly on the construction of this story and I left to wonder where it went. My feelings are becoming overwhelming and words now are just not enough to make my intentions clear. Luckily I’ve had the privilege to be a reader of your story and give you comments that hopefully supported you in times of need. This was possibly the best story I’ve ever read, FanFic or not. My conclusion to this comment is that I hope you continue to write more stories (seeing as you are so good at that). Time will only make you better and right now you’re absolutely perfect. :] Life is unfair to me, if life was fair then this story would go on forever but an ending is needed for all great things. I’m eternally yours, to do with as you please. I’m a humble slave that asks for only one kindness in return, FanFic. I love you with every fiber of my person and from the bottom of my tiny heart I declare you to be forever in my good graces. Sometimes I fear I love you too much Clom, far FAR too much. YOU FUCKING ROCK. KICK-ASS DOESN’T EVEN BEGIN TO DESCRIBE YOUR AWESOMENESS. Love!!! …xoXOxo…
Oh who am I kidding? I can’t just leave one single comment. You are too amazing to do that and you deserve to know the full extent of my feelings. I’ve never been this happy before. I’m smiling and the tiniest little thing makes me laugh. Some of the people around me are pissed but I don’t care. People just don’t get it. I’m so in love. I’m going to start dry-humping the desk any minute now because I so . . . emotional right now. WOW!!! Whoa… dude, I LOVE YOU. You are just to cool for school. Mm, mm, mm, mm, GOOD! *sigh* Love ya!!! Please, update on your other story. I need my Clomle fix.
that had to have been the most perfect ending. did i not tell you it was going to be magnificent, marvelous, extraoridinary, some other adjs. and it was, it was every bit i said it would and 3407598235X more. you are so talented its absolutley stunning, and from now on you cant argue me when i say you are talented, every single piece you have wrote stands as proof. *claps* now take a bow. i lug you mucho AT, for numnerous reasons, i can list them later if you want. so ill be except more great things for your sexy lingerie wearing self, so hop to. *hugs* :]
Best story on any fanfic site ever I hope theres a sequel I love how you ended this story you got to admit have you seen any other author get this many comments you’re THE BEST author I love love love this story please continue on writing please
i watch sad movies all the time, right…?! and i cry everytime, right…?! well, i’ve never cried that hard over any movie i’ve ever seen. even the notebook… even loving annabelle… even imagine me & you. none of them made me cry as hard as i cried when i read the post before this one. all the pain that she felt… girl, you nearly pushed me over the edge. hahah… wow, you’re amazing. thank you so much…
I would just like to say that YOU, my dear are the one and only reason that I have joined this wonderful, glorious, little community. You inspire, doll. This rocks, my only regret in reading all of them, is that now I actually have to do work when I am at my 9 to 5. Sigh. You are an inspiration. When’s the book coming out (insert sheepish grin here)? You rock my universe, darling. KEEP WRITING!!! PLEASE!
WOW!!!!!!!!!!!Ashley blushed and rested her forehead on Spencer’s. “Could we pick them up and then go home?”Spencer’s own vision blurred with tears. Oh my god could this woman get any sweeter?”You want to go home?””Yeah” Ashley whispered. “With my family.”Spencer smiled, the tears sliding down her cheeks and landing on their naked bodies. She stooped down briefly to pick up some of their clothes, handing Ashley hers.”Yeah. Lets go home.” And they did….And thats all she wrote!!!(has to be more):)..Thank You so much for a Wonderful story!!! YOU ROCK!!
I absolutely loved this fic!!! Each update left me hanging on a thread and wondering if they would end up together. Thank heavens they did or I may have had a nervous breakdown. The drama always stresses me out but if you think about it, it’s the drama that always makes you realize what you need, want or don’t want for that matter. Your characters are so real and alive in fact, I think you should start writing for the show then maybe I won’t be left so frustrated with the storylines!! I will miss this fic immensley and hope you will be doing some one shots so we can catch up with Spencer, Ashley and the rugrats!!
Just when I thought I couldn’t be any happier that Spence and Ash were reunited…Ashley asks if they can go home to the kids. Clome-you brought me to tears, which..believe me, does not happen often. Awesome update, awesome story. I am now going to go back and read the whole thing in its entirety. You are the best!
Perfection. Loved how Ashley made her work for it…loved how Spencer persisted. ah…one day :-) Thanks so much for this fiction. And thanks for the happy ending…in time may we all have happy endings. Updates are appreciated. Your writing/storytelling is great. And… thanks for getting caseygurl writing again. I tried for months. Please never make me beg you to write!
all I can think and say is thank you!!! so it’s the end and I fell in love with this story…feeling sad knowing it was the end . love the way you write and looking for the next one
I absolutely adored this story. The ups and downs…I always searched for this story and was excited to see a new chapter had been posted. I am so glad on how you ended the story; Spence finally realized exactly how important Ash was to her and how other things just couldn’t matter as much as her love. Thanks for a beautiful story, and you must post more little One Shots for us!!! Thank you again!
Darn you and your perfect stories which make me completely and utterly emotional, and sometimes even get me to believe in love ;)I never thought I would love this story as much as I do. But there are days where I can’t get it out of my head, and what a joyous escape it is. Thank you for sharing your brilliance!!!
this was one of the most AMAZING fics I’ve ever read! I could hardly wait in between instalments, I dropped all else to able to read them. YOu are an amazing writer and I can’t wait for the next!
okay, so i’ve not really one to post comments often, but i think this last post warrants one. I adore this ff. It’s easily the best one i’ve ever read. I’m so so so thankful that you thought of this story. It’s easily unlike any other I’ve ever read. It’s rare for a story to actually take the time to build a spashley relationship on more than just sex. You actually recreated the chemistry that we saw in spashley during those moments in season 1(and even rarer moments in season 2). So anyway, thank you for greatest story. I can’t help but expect more like it.
I CRIED!! I want to have a family with Ashley!! Hey you are a genius!! I loved every chapter of your story… your pace… you timing… the drama… the wait… the angst! I hope you can continue to read many more of your wonderful stories!
That was so wonderful. I hate to see it come to a end. You have made me very happy. I would like for you to write more to see how they are doing in the furture. I loved your story. Great job.
BEST STORY EVER! Loved every update. The ending was so perfect and I’m incredibly glad you didn’t take your gf’s advice and kill them off ;)Keep posting your wonderful stories, will definitely be reading them!
and that’s all you have to say. *shakes head* thats the last time I put effort into anything. *chuckle*.
and that’s all you have to say. *shakes head* thats the last time I put effort into anything. *chuckle*.
I can’t believe this story is over. I’m so sad now but, I’m happy that they’re going to live happily ever after. Thank you so much for not killing them. OMG! Was your girlfriend serious? Remember what I told you about mine? Is it like that? My gf would tell me to kill Spencer if I wrote fic because she hates that I think she’s so perfect. I’m sooo going to stalk you for the one shot. And please give us one shots every blue moon or often. I wanna see what happens now that they finally happy. I can’t wait to see you’re next Spashley story but, I’m going to miss Elly, and Mr. Ruffles. And I want more Alex/Ashley and famliy time…..This story is one of the most original and you’re more than talented. Your girlfriend is lucky, too. Because if that good at writing sex on paper……….(face getting red) Please Please Please Please give us one shots. I’m like a crack head on this story. Its so addictive. Please with cheese…whips, good sex and carpet burns:) I
I can’t believe this story is over. I’m so sad now but, I’m happy that they’re going to live happily ever after. Thank you so much for not killing them. OMG! Was your girlfriend serious? Remember what I told you about mine? Is it like that? My gf would tell me to kill Spencer if I wrote fic because she hates that I think she’s so perfect. I’m sooo going to stalk you for the one shot. And please give us one shots every blue moon or often. I wanna see what happens now that they finally happy. I can’t wait to see you’re next Spashley story but, I’m going to miss Elly, and Mr. Ruffles. And I want more Alex/Ashley and famliy time…..This story is one of the most original and you’re more than talented. Your girlfriend is lucky, too. Because if that good at writing sex on paper……….(face getting red) Please Please Please Please give us one shots. I’m like a crack head on this story. Its so addictive. Please with cheese…whips, good sex and carpet burns:) I
YAY!!!!! WAHOOO!! *cheers* YEAHHH!!! *claps* WHOOOO!!!! *wipes away tear* YEAAHHH!!! Damn girl. You are amazing. I seriously cried when ashley took spencer back. Like, not a dramatic sob, but more like a single tear. But who cares. YOU ROCK MY FLUFFIN SOCKS! Although, i wish it werent over. you did end it VERY well, though. I’m so incredibly proud of my big sis. =D not to mention, that was HOTT! haha. you know i have to throw that in there. HAHA!
YAY!!!!! WAHOOO!! *cheers* YEAHHH!!! *claps* WHOOOO!!!! *wipes away tear* YEAAHHH!!! Damn girl. You are amazing. I seriously cried when ashley took spencer back. Like, not a dramatic sob, but more like a single tear. But who cares. YOU ROCK MY FLUFFIN SOCKS! Although, i wish it werent over. you did end it VERY well, though. I’m so incredibly proud of my big sis. =D not to mention, that was HOTT! haha. you know i have to throw that in there. HAHA!
i’M THE FIRST TO VIEW AND READ. yyyaaaayyy!!!
i’M THE FIRST TO VIEW AND READ. yyyaaaayyy!!!
LOVED IT AND I EFFIN LOVE YOU!!! awww that was a perfect ending!!!! too cute for words… YAAAAAY!!! made my friggen day i was already in a good modd wen i cam to work now i doubt the smile will leave my face
LOVED IT AND I EFFIN LOVE YOU!!! awww that was a perfect ending!!!! too cute for words… YAAAAAY!!! made my friggen day i was already in a good modd wen i cam to work now i doubt the smile will leave my face
OMG! I was in the middle of posting a story and went back to look and OMG there it was. An update! I have loved this story from it’s beginning. This was great!!! And when Ashley said family. My heart just went out to them. Wonderful, once again. Loved it!
OMG! I was in the middle of posting a story and went back to look and OMG there it was. An update! I have loved this story from it’s beginning. This was great!!! And when Ashley said family. My heart just went out to them. Wonderful, once again. Loved it!
Hey Clome,That was my comment before I read the post, lol. You know me better than that. I’m your stalker! Don’t forget it! Oh, tell your girlfriend I say hi:)
Hey Clome,That was my comment before I read the post, lol. You know me better than that. I’m your stalker! Don’t forget it! Oh, tell your girlfriend I say hi:)
this has been one of my absolute faves! sorry to see it end–though i loved the ending–and i can’t wait to see what you’re going to write next.
this has been one of my absolute faves! sorry to see it end–though i loved the ending–and i can’t wait to see what you’re going to write next.
I phucking loved this story, awsome ending, cavity sweet lol, thanks for a great story!!
I phucking loved this story, awsome ending, cavity sweet lol, thanks for a great story!!
Damn what a way to wake up! This can’t be the end though! *please* write a million (maybe not a million…) little one shots, I need more Elle and Alex, and even Gray…well maybe not Gray. Awesome story, ace ending! Loved it :)
Damn what a way to wake up! This can’t be the end though! *please* write a million (maybe not a million…) little one shots, I need more Elle and Alex, and even Gray…well maybe not Gray. Awesome story, ace ending! Loved it :)
That was the perfect ending to the greatest story ever! I’m glad it finished all happy with them going home to be a family, but i’m also upset that this story is finished, it’s my all time favourite lol I hope you do a oneshot ^^ Can’t wait to read your next story!
That was the perfect ending to the greatest story ever! I’m glad it finished all happy with them going home to be a family, but i’m also upset that this story is finished, it’s my all time favourite lol I hope you do a oneshot ^^ Can’t wait to read your next story!
I never cry , I mean when it comes to moving movies or stories…..Some of my friends say it’s because I don’t care about anything/anyone or because I just don’t have a heart….But this was just full of emotions, I could feel their pain and then I was let out a small cry when Ashley uttered the words “god yes”….I was just happy for them…..I love this story….I have since whn you started it…..and I hope there are many more of your amazingly writen stories to come!There’s one thing I’m confused about though….Where the hell is Mr.Ruffles?? ;)PS: You can not believe how much I grinning like a total goof right now , because I’m so happy for them….
I never cry , I mean when it comes to moving movies or stories…..Some of my friends say it’s because I don’t care about anything/anyone or because I just don’t have a heart….But this was just full of emotions, I could feel their pain and then I was let out a small cry when Ashley uttered the words “god yes”….I was just happy for them…..I love this story….I have since whn you started it…..and I hope there are many more of your amazingly writen stories to come!There’s one thing I’m confused about though….Where the hell is Mr.Ruffles?? ;)PS: You can not believe how much I grinning like a total goof right now , because I’m so happy for them….
it’s late at night and i was about to go to sleep before i check on this site and wham! i saw your final chapter. i was so excited to read it but sad at the same time. it’s like reading a book that you loved so much and when you almost reach the ending, you’re reluctant to continue because then the amazing story is really gonna be over. but you def end it brilliantly. the speech that spencer made, how ash took her back, the scorching hot scene and how ash wants to take the kids and go home. perfect! so now what… i’m gonna have to stalk you for another new fic. even tho you already have a lot of stalkers i see. i’ll def read anything you write!! LUG YOU AT!!!
it’s late at night and i was about to go to sleep before i check on this site and wham! i saw your final chapter. i was so excited to read it but sad at the same time. it’s like reading a book that you loved so much and when you almost reach the ending, you’re reluctant to continue because then the amazing story is really gonna be over. but you def end it brilliantly. the speech that spencer made, how ash took her back, the scorching hot scene and how ash wants to take the kids and go home. perfect! so now what… i’m gonna have to stalk you for another new fic. even tho you already have a lot of stalkers i see. i’ll def read anything you write!! LUG YOU AT!!!
heyy there! Okay, I am kinda the ultimate lurker and never leave comments, but I have to say I am totally addicted to this story and your writing! I check this story probably about 10 times a day to look for an update, and I absolutely looooved this one!Keep up the amazzzzing work! PMS!!! =)
heyy there! Okay, I am kinda the ultimate lurker and never leave comments, but I have to say I am totally addicted to this story and your writing! I check this story probably about 10 times a day to look for an update, and I absolutely looooved this one!Keep up the amazzzzing work! PMS!!! =)
WOw…that was a perfect finish to a perfect story. I logged on this morning hoping the final chapter would finally be here and low and behold!!! It is definintly standing ovation worthy. I love how Spencer didn’t just run away, she stayed and put up a fight for her girl! You go Spencer! Anyway…I can’t wait to see what you have in store for us next…with the occasional BFM update! :-)
WOw…that was a perfect finish to a perfect story. I logged on this morning hoping the final chapter would finally be here and low and behold!!! It is definintly standing ovation worthy. I love how Spencer didn’t just run away, she stayed and put up a fight for her girl! You go Spencer! Anyway…I can’t wait to see what you have in store for us next…with the occasional BFM update! :-)
ok i think this fic is the most comments ive ever seeen…have fun feedbacking on feedback :P it took me longer to read the comments (as i do read evry1s comments lol) than this post… anywho on to the loving LOL… that was DEAD SET awesome update to an even more amazing story. I have followed all the way, even tho i may not have commented much ive had a sh*te month or so…annnd after finding out today about a person in my family i love having advanced cancer…id say you cheered me up a hell of alot!! so thankyou. loved the story. :) Cant wait to see what else sprouts from that imaginative brain :D
ok i think this fic is the most comments ive ever seeen…have fun feedbacking on feedback :P it took me longer to read the comments (as i do read evry1s comments lol) than this post… anywho on to the loving LOL… that was DEAD SET awesome update to an even more amazing story. I have followed all the way, even tho i may not have commented much ive had a sh*te month or so…annnd after finding out today about a person in my family i love having advanced cancer…id say you cheered me up a hell of alot!! so thankyou. loved the story. :) Cant wait to see what else sprouts from that imaginative brain :D
Well, you know they say ‘save the best for last’. So I saved my one and only comment til the last chapter. Clomle you have made my night shifts worthwhile going to work for the last 6 months. I actually looked forward to going in at 11pm and remaining wide awake reading your fic until 7am. (Well with actual work inbetween) I have cried it seems at every corner, and have literally needed a cold shower at every block. I beleive my entire family and makeup of friends know your stories, and have read them as well. “And I am talking about folks who dont even watch SON” and they too have loved your fic with just as much affection. I just want to say thank you, and you have definitely made an admirer of me. I looooved this expereince and look forward to many more looooooong ones. YOu are my Hero, in my book.
Well, you know they say ‘save the best for last’. So I saved my one and only comment til the last chapter. Clomle you have made my night shifts worthwhile going to work for the last 6 months. I actually looked forward to going in at 11pm and remaining wide awake reading your fic until 7am. (Well with actual work inbetween) I have cried it seems at every corner, and have literally needed a cold shower at every block. I beleive my entire family and makeup of friends know your stories, and have read them as well. “And I am talking about folks who dont even watch SON” and they too have loved your fic with just as much affection. I just want to say thank you, and you have definitely made an admirer of me. I looooved this expereince and look forward to many more looooooong ones. YOu are my Hero, in my book.
GAH! FINALLY! geeeeez. i thoguht you were gonna like..keep them apart. i was like oh HELL no! NOT happening! if she does i’ll friggin redo the ending and put them together damn it! haha. AMAZING story as always.
GAH! FINALLY! geeeeez. i thoguht you were gonna like..keep them apart. i was like oh HELL no! NOT happening! if she does i’ll friggin redo the ending and put them together damn it! haha. AMAZING story as always.
God, I’m feening for a one shot. I wanna see them go home and get the kid’s together. It’s been, what 3 hours since you posted the end of this story and I’m feening for the one shot!
God, I’m feening for a one shot. I wanna see them go home and get the kid’s together. It’s been, what 3 hours since you posted the end of this story and I’m feening for the one shot!
This story made the piece of shit that was season 2 worth tolerating. This was my season 2, clomle. Your updates were constant, and just so so good. They were everything that a fanfic fan could want, but more importantly, your fic was everything that a Spashley fan could ever ask for. You always surprise me, and you always amaze me with your style, your characterizations, your plot and pacing. I loved everything. And if you’re not writing a novel of some sort on your downtime, then you’re crazy! But please still write Spash, because honestly, we probably couldn’t live without you!!!!!!! Thanks a million for being so generous. =D
This story made the piece of shit that was season 2 worth tolerating. This was my season 2, clomle. Your updates were constant, and just so so good. They were everything that a fanfic fan could want, but more importantly, your fic was everything that a Spashley fan could ever ask for. You always surprise me, and you always amaze me with your style, your characterizations, your plot and pacing. I loved everything. And if you’re not writing a novel of some sort on your downtime, then you’re crazy! But please still write Spash, because honestly, we probably couldn’t live without you!!!!!!! Thanks a million for being so generous. =D
OMFG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! that was great, hottttttttttttttt man u have got to do another story please man you had me saying yesssssssssssss to the screen
OMFG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! that was great, hottttttttttttttt man u have got to do another story please man you had me saying yesssssssssssss to the screen
ah…i’m basking in the genius that is SEZ. (had to post here to…even if only briefly.) good on ya mate!
ah…i’m basking in the genius that is SEZ. (had to post here to…even if only briefly.) good on ya mate!
holy ashley, i thought you’d make it sad. and i am freaking relieved to know you didn’t. Seriously, i loved how it ended. I’m depressed it ended, i mean, now i’ll be deprived of this wonderful story. Meh, you better make a new one. But like i said, i loved it. BRAVO!
holy ashley, i thought you’d make it sad. and i am freaking relieved to know you didn’t. Seriously, i loved how it ended. I’m depressed it ended, i mean, now i’ll be deprived of this wonderful story. Meh, you better make a new one. But like i said, i loved it. BRAVO!
*le sigh* finally, they’re going home. *grin*. so I was thinking. how can you let these two go, right? in this capacity? i feel kinda lost, what with that other story from that other place gone (7 days) and now this. maybe, someone, somewhere can convince you to do a pure fluff piece? maybe from mr.ruffles POV, or, or Elly’s. I just loved their interaction through this story, just loved Elly. Maybe like just a Christmas one shot. I’m not willing to let this go that easy, not at all. Hmmmm, maybe…I’ll keep thinking, there’s gotta be something.
*le sigh* finally, they’re going home. *grin*. so I was thinking. how can you let these two go, right? in this capacity? i feel kinda lost, what with that other story from that other place gone (7 days) and now this. maybe, someone, somewhere can convince you to do a pure fluff piece? maybe from mr.ruffles POV, or, or Elly’s. I just loved their interaction through this story, just loved Elly. Maybe like just a Christmas one shot. I’m not willing to let this go that easy, not at all. Hmmmm, maybe…I’ll keep thinking, there’s gotta be something.
yo clomle, i’m certainly bit late in reading the rest of this fic but i had to comment on it – seriously awesome stuff. ah i loved all the fluff and the hippyhoppyhappy ending. YAY! XD(you know… just today i reread ‘circles and circles’! yes cos its that awesome)
yo clomle, i’m certainly bit late in reading the rest of this fic but i had to comment on it – seriously awesome stuff. ah i loved all the fluff and the hippyhoppyhappy ending. YAY! XD(you know… just today i reread ‘circles and circles’! yes cos its that awesome)