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Set Me Free – (Chapter: 1)
If only, I could stop. Just stop. It never seemed like it would be this hard in the beginning. I’ve tried to stay away. I’ve even lost some good friends. So why does this still plague my mind? Why do I continue to wrestle with my thoughts, with my desires? She has a boyfriend. She looks so happy. What is my obsession with her? Each day I watch. I know everything about her. Her popularity is enough to make anyone jealous. Everyone just loves her. When she laughs, she takes a sweet little breath before letting it out. And her laugh is so precious and delicate, yet solid and real. Can you say genuine? Her heart beams out to everyone. I’ve never seen her get angry or mad at anyone. I wonder if she ever has any problems.
I know what you’re thinking. You’re thinking that I must be desperate. Watching her like this. Well, I am. I’m desperately in love. But how can I be? We’ve never even met. But I know everything about her. In so many ways, she’s the exact opposite of her parents. She’s affectionate. She’s loving. She’s always taking care of her friends. Rubbing their backs when they sit next to her. Hugging them as they come and go. I wish I was her friend. Her hugs look so soft and tender. She even closes her eyes when she hugs them. She really means it.
I’m so lost in her and I haven’t even talked about her beauty yet. I have to pause a second because it just takes me away. Her hair slightly passes her shoulders. When she walks, it bounces like it’s just so happy to be with her that it can’t sit still. Her eyes sparkle when she smiles and when she sits still. I bet they sparkle even when they are closed. She’s so beautiful. There is one thing that we have in common. We are about the same height…almost. I am so happy about that. I wonder if she would hug me if she knew. Her body is so fit. I heard that she used to be really into sports. It’s hard for me to imagine something so petite and delicate getting rough. But they said that she did and that she was phenomenal. I often wonder why she doesn’t do that anymore. I suppose that it was her boyfriend that thought it was too manly or something.
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Ashden needs to die. Now. If Aiden does somehow mysteriously dissappear in the next post I’m forcifly taking him by the neck and strangilng him to death. And I like the story btw. :) Keep it up.
haha (laughs at what NotTwinny said) i love it, absolutley, i cant wait to see where you take it. im hopeful. eeek i cant wait. :]:]
ahaha i love this! it’s so cute/funny, yet kind of creepy if you look at it from another point haha. oh well. i love it.
New fic already? YAY. And I like these characterizations. Im so tired of everyone writing Ashley as the loner, bitch, or stalker. I like it when we see Spencer in a completely different personality. Im already ready for an update. Updaaaaaaaaate.
Ashden needs to die. Now. If Aiden does somehow mysteriously dissappear in the next post I’m forcifly taking him by the neck and strangilng him to death. And I like the story btw. :) Keep it up.
haha (laughs at what NotTwinny said) i love it, absolutley, i cant wait to see where you take it. im hopeful. eeek i cant wait. :]:]
ahaha i love this! it’s so cute/funny, yet kind of creepy if you look at it from another point haha. oh well. i love it.
New fic already? YAY. And I like these characterizations. Im so tired of everyone writing Ashley as the loner, bitch, or stalker. I like it when we see Spencer in a completely different personality. Im already ready for an update. Updaaaaaaaaate.
Oh man, this is a great beginning, I like how its written through the thoughts of Spencer, love the story already, pms!!
Oh man, this is a great beginning, I like how its written through the thoughts of Spencer, love the story already, pms!!
hahahaha spencers a stalkerrrr! of sorts. great start!! blech. ashden needs to end. now. and ashley giving friends hugs? what?! lol.
hahahaha spencers a stalkerrrr! of sorts. great start!! blech. ashden needs to end. now. and ashley giving friends hugs? what?! lol.
omg. honestly, no need to be nervous. this chapter was great, and your a great author. Like honestly i read all your stories so far :] and their really amasing. Keep doing a super job!
omg. honestly, no need to be nervous. this chapter was great, and your a great author. Like honestly i read all your stories so far :] and their really amasing. Keep doing a super job!