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Completely Incomplete – (Chapter: 31)
“Okay, now if you don’t like it, let me know and I can switch it.”
“Spence, I’m sure I’m gonna love it,” she assured me. I held the wrapped box behind me, having last-minute doubts that it was going to be good enough. “Come onnnnn!”
“As if we don’t have another 23 hours and 56 minutes of your birthday, dork.”
“Exactly… the clock is ticking,” she replied. I relented and handed her the small box. She eyed it for a minute before she began to unwrap it. Inside the box was another box, and inside that box was yet another box. “A bunch of boxes… you shouldn’t have!”
“Keep going,” I told her with a smile. Finally, she came to the final box. She opened it and pulled out the items, reading them carefully.
“Shut. Up.” she began. “Are you kidding me? Spence, these are amazing!!” I had gotten her 2 tickets to a Ray LaMontagne concert in L.A. next month. “I love Ray!”
“That’s why I got them,” I laughed, happy she liked it.
“Thank you so much!” She gave me a hug and a brief peck on the lips. “You totally didn’t have to get me 2, though.”
“Oh yes I did,” I told her. “Otherwise, how am I gonna be able to go, too?”
“You’re not…”
“I already booked my flight,” I declared with a grin. The room almost went silent for a minute, as I assumed Ashley was trying to process what exactly this meant. I knew, though. I knew that next month, I was taking 2 days off from work to come to L.A. To come see her.
A moment or two later, I found myself pinned underneath Ashley, her smiling face inches from mine.
“You are amazing, Spence,” she told me. “Thank you. Thank you so much.”
“No problem,” I replied, my voice raspy.
“This is the best birthday present ever. And I’m being totally serious. I mean, you surprised me and flew out here for me, and then on top of that, you’re telling me that next month, I’m gonna get to see one of my favorite singers with my favorite person in the world.” I blushed as I realized what she’d just said. “So, yeah… thanks.” She looked down nervously as she eased her grip on me, and I wondered whether she was just caught up in the moment and didn’t mean it, or was just embarrassed that she threw it out there already.
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NotTwinny says
Yeah BABY! This is what I’m talking about. So far it seems like Ashley is having a VERY VERY VERY good birthday. :) OMG. Whooo-Boy. This was hot. In fact, it was smokin. Haha. You’re a great writer. Update soon, would ya? I would really like that. I mean a lot. Hehe. Please and Thank You!!!
NotTwinny says
I’m the first to comment? DUDE! Awesome. Everybody follow my example. Comment! Love, :)
ngasi_lei says
*swoosh* all is right in the cosmos. *zoom*
tay0720 says
hahaha oh man. what a happy birthday it is for ashley!! amazing update as always. i love this story. ugh. so awesome. and SO excited for the next update…even if it is so so far away :-(. oh well. i can just reread this over and over hehe.
cheeralstar13 says
Hey!!! Ok so I know that I’ve said it before but, I LOVE LOVE LOVE this story!!! Everytime I see that you updated I do my little happy dance and squeal…lol. Anyways, I’m glad that you brought Michelle back into the story, we hadn’t heard from her in a while and I thought that it was time so yay! Lol. Please UD soon!!!
mymusic_mylife says
yeah this one is hot lol please update soon
schminda says
oh how i just love this story!!! and i am not going to lie…that was pretty darn hot!!! seriously. you rock and i can’t wait to read more!
tylo says
hottttttttttttt
sache says
i literally screamed in joy when i noticed that u have updated!!!! totally love this story~ PMS!! Both your story and ashley~ Smokin’ HOT!
insertcleveranswer says
Leave it to Michelle to get right to the point. I love Spencer and Ashley together…especially when Ashley isn’t running away scared. Great update! PMS!
hdgallant says
Wonderful update. Can we say ashley is having one hell of a b-day. I cant wait to see whats going to happen next. PMS
dddisfunctional says
yeah, definitely best birthday ever
SON_CRAZY15 says
k so basically..i love this story… they r so cute together…
NotTwinny says
Yeah BABY! This is what I’m talking about. So far it seems like Ashley is having a VERY VERY VERY good birthday. :) OMG. Whooo-Boy. This was hot. In fact, it was smokin. Haha. You’re a great writer. Update soon, would ya? I would really like that. I mean a lot. Hehe. Please and Thank You!!!
NotTwinny says
I’m the first to comment? DUDE! Awesome. Everybody follow my example. Comment! Love, :)
ngasi_lei says
*swoosh* all is right in the cosmos. *zoom*
tay0720 says
hahaha oh man. what a happy birthday it is for ashley!! amazing update as always. i love this story. ugh. so awesome. and SO excited for the next update…even if it is so so far away :-(. oh well. i can just reread this over and over hehe.
cheeralstar13 says
Hey!!! Ok so I know that I’ve said it before but, I LOVE LOVE LOVE this story!!! Everytime I see that you updated I do my little happy dance and squeal…lol. Anyways, I’m glad that you brought Michelle back into the story, we hadn’t heard from her in a while and I thought that it was time so yay! Lol. Please UD soon!!!
mymusic_mylife says
yeah this one is hot lol please update soon
schminda says
oh how i just love this story!!! and i am not going to lie…that was pretty darn hot!!! seriously. you rock and i can’t wait to read more!
tylo says
hottttttttttttt
sache says
i literally screamed in joy when i noticed that u have updated!!!! totally love this story~ PMS!! Both your story and ashley~ Smokin’ HOT!
insertcleveranswer says
Leave it to Michelle to get right to the point. I love Spencer and Ashley together…especially when Ashley isn’t running away scared. Great update! PMS!
hdgallant says
Wonderful update. Can we say ashley is having one hell of a b-day. I cant wait to see whats going to happen next. PMS
dddisfunctional says
yeah, definitely best birthday ever
SON_CRAZY15 says
k so basically..i love this story… they r so cute together…
_barely_breathing_ says
Yay Spencer will be returning to LA, Yay for Spashley love! But I don’t won’t Spence to leave LA at all! Update soon!
_barely_breathing_ says
Yay Spencer will be returning to LA, Yay for Spashley love! But I don’t won’t Spence to leave LA at all! Update soon!
country girl says
Man, I love Ray too! What an awesome birthday present. That was a HOT update! Con’t wait for the next. PMS.
country girl says
Man, I love Ray too! What an awesome birthday present. That was a HOT update! Con’t wait for the next. PMS.
slayerfan101 says
awesome update!! sweet and smokingly hot as well!! cant wait till you get back and post some more.
slayerfan101 says
awesome update!! sweet and smokingly hot as well!! cant wait till you get back and post some more.
jules paxton says
I usually just read and don’t comment, but I do comment on music stuff. I love a good Ray shout out. I saw him a few years ago and he is wonderful, as is this story.
jules paxton says
I usually just read and don’t comment, but I do comment on music stuff. I love a good Ray shout out. I saw him a few years ago and he is wonderful, as is this story.