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Preciosa – (Chapter: Chapter Thirteen)
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Chapter Thirteen
Marco felt his heart nearly explode as he heard the voice he had been trying to forget since the last time they had visited the Carlin home. ‘Let’s see what new nickname she has for me this time…I mean she’s called me Shiloh, Leo, Marcus, Alfie, and the best one yet…Pancho…Woman you are the worst person I have ever…’
“Mrs. Carlin…how wonderful to see you again.” Marco quickly said to Paula as she entered the house.
“Oh…Jose…how nice of you to join us.” Paula said with a weak smile.
“Oh it’s ALWAYS a pleasure to be in your company, dear…though I’d much rather be sticking sharp objects in my eyes” Marco muttered through a cheesy smile. He turned around rolling his eyes and praying for the homicidal instincts building within him to dissipate.
“Grandma, Grandma!” Thomas and Tamara cried as they rushed to their Grandmother.
“How are my grandbabies?” She said hugging them to her tight.
While Paula was listening to her grandchildren’s banter, Spencer and Ashley entered the living room. Marco looked at them both and pretended to shoot himself in the head mouthing “Kill me now!” Ashley laughed at Marco’s antics and Paula looked up to see her daughter with a girl she had never seen before.
“Spencer, I’m glad you came.” Paula said giving Spencer a semi-affectionate hug. Paula looked at Ashley with a hard look as if she were trying to size her up. Feeling a bit uncomfortable, Ashley averted her eyes from Paula’s looking at Marco. Sensing that something was going to go down soon, he decided to take the small children out of the “danger zone.”
“Kids…how bout we go out back and harass your granddad? Who wants to play keep away with the lighter fluid? Whoever wins gets to light the other on fire!” Both kids started laughing and cheering.
“Marco!” Spencer cried giving Marco a surprised look.
“I was just kidding Spence. Geez, give me a little credit. Come on kids.” Marco picked Thomas and Tamara up and carried them through the hallway to the backyard.
Silence filled the air as the three women exchanged glances. Paula waited for someone to break the silence but when no one did she spoke. “I don’t believe we have met. Paula Carlin.” She said while extending her hand out to Ashley.
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I skipped class for this?? Hell yes! Well, actually I swapped class for sleep and this was my reward :D Which brings me to my next point: what sane person wakes up @5:30?! Haha, obviously I’m in the habit of refering to my afternoons as mornings… Anyways, somebody must’ve peed in Paula’s cheerios or something ’cause that was bitchy. Poor Spence but hurray for Ashley in shining armour. Your fic is becoming increasingly addictive so I look forward to your next post anxiously :)
I skipped class for this?? Hell yes! Well, actually I swapped class for sleep and this was my reward :D Which brings me to my next point: what sane person wakes up @5:30?! Haha, obviously I’m in the habit of refering to my afternoons as mornings… Anyways, somebody must’ve peed in Paula’s cheerios or something ’cause that was bitchy. Poor Spence but hurray for Ashley in shining armour. Your fic is becoming increasingly addictive so I look forward to your next post anxiously :)
Yeah! I did it. I was the first to comment. Now I am can say a little more. I love how your story is making feel so many different little emotions (as I always say, I love that in a story). Paula was oh so cruel and rude. My mother never liked my girlfriends at her house but at least she waited until they left to talk mean about them. Geez Paula! I think that she just wants to have control of Spencer the rest of her life. And then you can tell how much it hurts poor Spencer. I’m glad Ashley stepped up. I was dying laughing when Paula called Marco…Jose. Too funny. Keep it up…this is some great work…
Yeah! I did it. I was the first to comment. Now I am can say a little more. I love how your story is making feel so many different little emotions (as I always say, I love that in a story). Paula was oh so cruel and rude. My mother never liked my girlfriends at her house but at least she waited until they left to talk mean about them. Geez Paula! I think that she just wants to have control of Spencer the rest of her life. And then you can tell how much it hurts poor Spencer. I’m glad Ashley stepped up. I was dying laughing when Paula called Marco…Jose. Too funny. Keep it up…this is some great work…
Wow. I’d better hurry and write this. I can’t believe I beat Tay with the first comment. Hurry Hurry… Loving your story immensely… Great Update…
Wow. I’d better hurry and write this. I can’t believe I beat Tay with the first comment. Hurry Hurry… Loving your story immensely… Great Update…
hahahaha yeah aug you beat me! but ughhh i so wished it would’ve been a full on smackdown. oh well, theres always other chapters for that :-D hehehe. either way, it was, of course, an AMAZING update! love this freaking storrry. love love love. paula is SUCH the bitch. its like dude, get your head out of your ass and be a REAL mother to your only daughter. for piss sakes. i mean honestly. its pure poppycock. ughhh. let me smack that bitch up haha. it’d be SO fun! gah. anywho, cant waaaait for the next chapter.
hahahaha yeah aug you beat me! but ughhh i so wished it would’ve been a full on smackdown. oh well, theres always other chapters for that :-D hehehe. either way, it was, of course, an AMAZING update! love this freaking storrry. love love love. paula is SUCH the bitch. its like dude, get your head out of your ass and be a REAL mother to your only daughter. for piss sakes. i mean honestly. its pure poppycock. ughhh. let me smack that bitch up haha. it’d be SO fun! gah. anywho, cant waaaait for the next chapter.