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Completely Incomplete – (Chapter: 49)
We got off to a slow start, but we did make it to SoHo, and spent a couple hours shopping around. Ashley insisted on buying me a few things, which I only agreed to because she threatened to take advantage of me in the dressing rooms if I didn’t. I wasn’t quite sure whether she was joking or not, but I didn’t want to take my chances.
For some reason, Ashley got recognized quite a few times by fans on the street or in stores; I guess she had a pretty big following amongst the area’s hipster population. One guy even said he thought her second album (the taboo album, which we’re not supposed to bring up) was even better than her first… needless to say, he received a couple weird glances.
We left by 4:30, and I successfully avoided Ashley’s attempts to spill about what I had planned. I had advised her to dress comfortably, and to bring a sweater or a sweatshirt, just in case. Yes, we were going to be outside.
By 5, I was out shopping for the necessary items. I was terrified that I would take too long and we’d be late, but I managed to get everything I needed, even with a few minutes to spare. I was back at the apartment by 6.
“Ash?” I called out, once I’d walked in.
“One sec,” she replied from my bedroom. I waited around in the living room for a little, fidgeting around nervously, until she finally emerged. And I could see what kept me waiting.
“Wow… Ash, you look amazing,” I remarked, blushing nervously mostly because I looked like a homeless person compared to her right now. “I need to go change-“
“No. You look beautiful.” She smiled and kissed me lightly. “But what’s all this for?” She waved her hand inquisitively at the various items I was holding.
“Tonight.” She rolled her eyes, grinning, and slipped her arm through mine as my hands were full. We left the apartment and quickly found a cab, after I convinced Ashley that it wasn’t a good idea to drive there. I made her cover her ears while I told the cab driver where to bring us, just so the surprise wouldn’t be spoiled yet. I was jittery the whole cab ride, partially out of excitement but largely out of nerves. What if something went wrong? What if my idea was more corny and less cute? I wanted tonight to be the perfect second first date.
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HA HA HA that was great Keep up the good work. PMSP
Someone’s going to have to type out my comment for me because I just melted into a puddle on the floor. I don’t know what I liked more, the cuddling during the movie or the I love you’s afterwards. The whole update was a Spashley fluff fest and I loved every second of it. I’m sad that this story is ending but I’m happy that it’s ending happily for them. Anyway, I’ll just be here on the floor, reveling in my Spashley fluff, if anyone needs me.
oh my, how cute, how sweet, how wonderful. if those are the kinds of dates you plan….what are you doing next weekend? hahaha im joking
a little late but i just wanna say i really enjoy your fic! nice update!
I’m really missing this story. Is the last chapter coming soon?
WHERE did you go??
This is an awesome story, but unfortunately you have left us hanging. PLEEEEEEEEEEASE finish this fanfic and the other ones as well…What do we have to do to get you to finish? You’re a great writer…I could go on all day long, but I say again…FINISH!
are you coming back? or are you on some awesome summer vacation…i miss your writing!
Oh noes, is this the end? ;o;
HA HA HA that was great Keep up the good work. PMSP
Someone’s going to have to type out my comment for me because I just melted into a puddle on the floor. I don’t know what I liked more, the cuddling during the movie or the I love you’s afterwards. The whole update was a Spashley fluff fest and I loved every second of it. I’m sad that this story is ending but I’m happy that it’s ending happily for them. Anyway, I’ll just be here on the floor, reveling in my Spashley fluff, if anyone needs me.
oh my, how cute, how sweet, how wonderful. if those are the kinds of dates you plan….what are you doing next weekend? hahaha im joking
a little late but i just wanna say i really enjoy your fic! nice update!
I’m really missing this story. Is the last chapter coming soon?
WHERE did you go??
This is an awesome story, but unfortunately you have left us hanging. PLEEEEEEEEEEASE finish this fanfic and the other ones as well…What do we have to do to get you to finish? You’re a great writer…I could go on all day long, but I say again…FINISH!
are you coming back? or are you on some awesome summer vacation…i miss your writing!
Oh noes, is this the end? ;o;
So so very cute!! *sigh* Beautiful chapter love…PMS!!
So so very cute!! *sigh* Beautiful chapter love…PMS!!
Great chapter! The date was adorable and the i love you’s were perfect! Update soon!
Great chapter! The date was adorable and the i love you’s were perfect! Update soon!