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Nowhere to Hide
Chapter One
Spencer listened intently to the rhythmic clicking of the clock. She closed her eyes as if that would somehow block out the sound but it echoed even louder like a well hit drum. Eyes burning with fatigue blinked away tears, exhaustion plagued Spenser’s body but she gazed at the clock for the hundredth time that night. 4am, the minutes passed like hours. Using the sleeve of her jacket she wiped under her eyes and stared at the black smudge of makeup that now stained the fabric. She closed her eyes once more; but Aden lying in a pool of blood confronted her forcing them abruptly open. Spencer choked out a sudden sob, but her tears weren’t for Aden.
Restless she moved across the room to the window. Resting her hands on the sill and leaning forward, filling her lungs with the fresh morning air, not a single star hung in the night sky only a wall of blackness. Spencer slowly made her way to the picture frame on the draws, her hands trembled but she embraced it with both hands to obtain a better view nonetheless. The room was dark but she knew it was a photo of her and Ashley. Taking the picture closer to the moonlight she intensified her stare, they had just been to the beach, both shivering like children on the first day of school. It was Spencer’s favorite picture; they had spent the afternoon kissing under the pier in the afternoon sun. Even now Spencer could remember the taste of Ashley’s lips, they were so soft, and the surge of heat that ignited through her body at the sensation of Ashley’s tongue entwining with hers, even now sent a shiver down her spine.
Like an addict seduced by the warmth of the drug, Spencer’s eyes drifted back to the clock. 4:40am, her parents had been gone for hours now, but how long does it take to identify the body of your son?
Discarding the picture she closed the window, releasing the Venetian slats and watching them fall like dominoes. Pulling the thick curtains completely closed so not even a slither of moonlight remained, Spencer felt some comfort in the darkness. It was almost like the outside world no longer existed and she was invisible, but the spasmodic bark in the distance from a neighborhood dog reminded her it was all a feeble attempt to hide. Still, it felt better than the numbness that had crept in her chest.
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amazing
amazing
that was really good…great post.
that was really good…great post.
I’m a lurker, its what I do. I never comment on a fic unless it truly has an effect on me, and this one certainly did. First off I want to thank you for posting. For a first time SoN writer you did a wonderful job, very commendable. Secondly, the descriptiveness of this piece was breath taking! The pain Spencer felt, *I* felt. You actually were able to bring tears to my eyes. And Ashley’s desperation to get Spencer to listen… ugh I loved it! Honestly I think my favorite part was when Ashley chased after Spencer and confronted her. Theres so many other stories I wish would do that, probably would screw with the plot but still, lol. Again I just want to thank you for posting this wonderful piece. Well worth the read!! And I hope to read more from you in the futures to come!
I’m a lurker, its what I do. I never comment on a fic unless it truly has an effect on me, and this one certainly did. First off I want to thank you for posting. For a first time SoN writer you did a wonderful job, very commendable. Secondly, the descriptiveness of this piece was breath taking! The pain Spencer felt, *I* felt. You actually were able to bring tears to my eyes. And Ashley’s desperation to get Spencer to listen… ugh I loved it! Honestly I think my favorite part was when Ashley chased after Spencer and confronted her. Theres so many other stories I wish would do that, probably would screw with the plot but still, lol. Again I just want to thank you for posting this wonderful piece. Well worth the read!! And I hope to read more from you in the futures to come!
i have read A LOT of stories… i’ve written one myself, lol… but i can say that without a doubt this is my all time favorite. It sux that it is so short, but there isnt a single thing i would change about it. Like Andie1987 said, i felt everything that the characters felt. It brought tears to my eyes, and i laughed out loud at some parts. this story has really been inspiring, and makes me want to write more on mine. you r one of the most amazing writers i’ve ever seen, and it was a pleasure to read this. My favorite parts were the shower an paula an spencer in spencer’s room. at least those were the first to come to mind. The comfort yet numbness that u conveyed while the girls were in the shower was amazing. And just how you wrote the part about paula using her belief to mask her pain, and spencer calling her out on it… amazing. i hope to get to read more of your work soon. well done. this story gets 10 stars in my book, but i can only click the 5 an hope it makes u feel good.
i have read A LOT of stories… i’ve written one myself, lol… but i can say that without a doubt this is my all time favorite. It sux that it is so short, but there isnt a single thing i would change about it. Like Andie1987 said, i felt everything that the characters felt. It brought tears to my eyes, and i laughed out loud at some parts. this story has really been inspiring, and makes me want to write more on mine. you r one of the most amazing writers i’ve ever seen, and it was a pleasure to read this. My favorite parts were the shower an paula an spencer in spencer’s room. at least those were the first to come to mind. The comfort yet numbness that u conveyed while the girls were in the shower was amazing. And just how you wrote the part about paula using her belief to mask her pain, and spencer calling her out on it… amazing. i hope to get to read more of your work soon. well done. this story gets 10 stars in my book, but i can only click the 5 an hope it makes u feel good.
that was soo good. great job :}
that was soo good. great job :}
This is by far the best fanfic I have ever read. Every eloquent word gracefully hovered in my imagination and captured my heart and laid it bare, exposed and left me hungering for more. They say a picture paints a thousand words, but in a few short chapters you painted a thousand unforgettable pictures, and that my friend, is a gift that should never go unnoticed. Spencer & Ashley have never been written so beautifully. Brilliant writing to say the least!
This is by far the best fanfic I have ever read. Every eloquent word gracefully hovered in my imagination and captured my heart and laid it bare, exposed and left me hungering for more. They say a picture paints a thousand words, but in a few short chapters you painted a thousand unforgettable pictures, and that my friend, is a gift that should never go unnoticed. Spencer & Ashley have never been written so beautifully. Brilliant writing to say the least!
Loved it wish I could express the depth of love for this story but their are no words, totally loved it.
Loved it wish I could express the depth of love for this story but their are no words, totally loved it.
Firstly I’d like to thank everyone for there wonderful comments. You guys will never realise how much your warm words have meant to me and they touched me more than you’ll ever know. I was really nervous about putting my story online (as its my first), but from all the positive feedback and support I have had so far, I am ready to begin my next story. I have got a few interesting ideas so please check back on me from time to time. :)
Firstly I’d like to thank everyone for there wonderful comments. You guys will never realise how much your warm words have meant to me and they touched me more than you’ll ever know. I was really nervous about putting my story online (as its my first), but from all the positive feedback and support I have had so far, I am ready to begin my next story. I have got a few interesting ideas so please check back on me from time to time. :)
That was really amazing, can’t wait for another story from you.
That was really amazing, can’t wait for another story from you.