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5 Years Later – (Chapter: Chapter 10….)
As we entered the theatre the movie began me and Ash sat in the back in the darkest corner. When we sat down im not sure what come over us but hands began to wander and we ended up making out the entire movie and it shall continue when we get home. Ash kept trying to bring it futher in the theater but I would just push her hand away. Telling her she had to wait…..
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The movie ended rather to quickly for the both of us, as we both exited the theater with flushed faces we began to dicuss what we did see of this paticular movie. As we made our way out to the parking lot looking for where we had parked, suddenly a car flew around the corner of the building and hit Ashley who was walking directly in front of me. The driver stopped the car and got out apologizing and asking if she was okay, but when I looked at her I noticed that she wasnt concious and that it didnt seem as if she was breathing. I began to become frantic as I yelled for someone to call an ambulance. I got down beside her checking to see if she had a pulse and luckly she did. I began to attempt to do CPR on her to get her to start breathing again but nothing I was doing seemed to work. As the ambulances pulled up they rushed over to her and made me move. I was watching off to the side and I began to cry asking them if she was gonna be okay. They would only respond to me that they were doing all they could for her and that they could promise nothing to me but they got her breathing again. I rode in the back of the ambulance with her and held her hand the entire way. She wouldnt wake up for no one so when they got her to the hospital they rushed her to a room ordering all types of test and procedures for her. Once the test come back the doctor said that she would require emergancy surgery due to the fact that her rib cage punctured a lung and her live when it shattered. Also, that she had swelling of the brain and that she has slipped into a coma. The doctor began explaing the possiblities of the procedure that she required and the chance of it being worse because of her being in the coma. But, there was nothing I could really do I mean if she didnt have it she would defintly die and if she did she could eventually get better. A police officer then come over to me to take a statement and told me the man that hit her would be put in jail and charged with vehicular man slaughter. Once, she was in surgery I paced the waiting room crying waiting to hear something. After, about seven hours the doctor come out and told me it went as well as it could and she would be sent to a room in the CCU part of the hospital. Also, he informed me that the next couple of days are very critcle for her and that if i notice anything odd myself that i should get a nurse immeditly.
It has been days and she is still in a coma they tell me that if she doesnt wake up soon the chances get less likly that she will. I think this as i notice…..
TBC
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I don’t know what to say, this chapter was intense but can’t remember what ur story was about, could u some how post a summary of ur story thus far. Good Job.