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Darkened Silence – (Chapter: ch 8)
The windshield shattered allowing water to surround our bodies, Ashley and Aiden quickly climbed over the dashboard with Sean between them, the three of them smashed together trying to not lose the unconscious one in the current. Nodding I told Chelsea to go first she smiled at me than started going forward, she made it out as I felt the car slid further down into the small creek we’d been left in.
I sat there in the water, feeling it swirl around me, I’m not crazy I know I should be swimming as fast as possible to the surface but at this moment…in this situation I actually felt peaceful. No one was around, the water cooling off my heated body, sounds no longer existing; life halting yet continuing at break neck speeds. In this moment I wanted to stay, I would always have the happy times, the thoughts of my parents, of Ashley and the others getting along, the way Ashley’s lips felt on mine…all my memories would get washed away in this creek forever to flow threw the forest, the world, making me live forever though the body I live in riots…okay screw that…
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Breathing out all the water that seemed to make it’s way into my mouth as Aiden and I crashed thru the surface, swinging are arms we made it safely to the shore. Laying Sean down Aiden went to work to make sure he was still breathing while I turned around to check on the other two. Chelsea popped up and started swimming toward us, I rushed forward as best I could in my wet clothes, “Where’s Spencer?” I asked helping her out as my eyes scanned the rushing creek.
“She was right behind me,” Chelsea breathed hard as she too began to look around.
“Are you sure?”
“I mean, she let me go before her so I assumed she….”
”Shit!” I cut her off as my feet started back into the water.
Chelsea grabbed my arm, “You don’t think she would….” before she finished Spencer’s head bobbed into view and we both let out a sigh we didn’t know we were holding in.
She pulled herself out of the water giving us a lop-sided grin as she yanked down on her soaking wet shirt, we smiled back, “Ladies can we hurry it up!” Aiden broke us out of the yea we survived mode.
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Great Update. Keep up the good work. I can’t wait for the next chapter. PMS real soon.
Great Update. Keep up the good work. I can’t wait for the next chapter. PMS real soon.
Wow your writing is just… wow and I love the topic you choose! nothing like hurt & comfort :) PMS
Wow your writing is just… wow and I love the topic you choose! nothing like hurt & comfort :) PMS
this was hella sick i mean fuckin awesome one of the best i’ve been reading i loved it soooooo much u gotta keep comin wit more stuff pms!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:)
this was hella sick i mean fuckin awesome one of the best i’ve been reading i loved it soooooo much u gotta keep comin wit more stuff pms!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:)
seriously! you are amamzing! holy hell! this story is freaking awesome! PMS!! im SO glad they finally got rescued. “) and spencer can hear! YAY!! PMS!!
seriously! you are amamzing! holy hell! this story is freaking awesome! PMS!! im SO glad they finally got rescued. “) and spencer can hear! YAY!! PMS!!
That was so sweet, you’re a great writer!
That was so sweet, you’re a great writer!
omg.. i freaking love this story… u better not be ending it… i really want it to keep going… but it seems like ur wrapping it up… damn, i really love it, so please if u r ending it, consider a sequel… please please please… this is an amazing story
omg.. i freaking love this story… u better not be ending it… i really want it to keep going… but it seems like ur wrapping it up… damn, i really love it, so please if u r ending it, consider a sequel… please please please… this is an amazing story