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Darkened Silence – (Chapter: ch 3)
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Ashley shook me awake, opening my eyes rubbing the sleep out I didn’t understand but she wasn’t looking at me, no her eyes wide with fear stared at the front of the truck where Charlie, Joe and Mark all stood with hand guns. I gulped and cowered feeling stupid at letting them get to me. Joe barked an order which I assumed was something like get up because they all jumped up with Ashley pulling me to my feet. We followed them out of the truck, Sean and Aiden helping us girl’s down.
Joe was the leader, this I was sure of, but what did he want from us…what could five teenagers get him besides money. Because there was no way I lost my hearing and went thru that pain for some stupid cash, there had to be more at stake than just that.
Licking my lips I felt Ashley intertwine are hands, not just cup them like I was used to no she went all out, running her thumb over the back of my hand. My heart slowed considerable that is until Mark pushed me to the ground with Sean, Chelsea and Ashley while Aiden was handcuffed…his hands raised above his head put on a hook, his legs shackled to the floor. I noticed we were in a hanger like the last one, a private plane sat toward the far end of the building.
Sean leaned over and whispered to Chelsea while Joe talked probably telling us that if we moved he would die same thing he told them about me when I was locked up. My eyes darted around looking for the machine that they would use but saw nothing until Charlie wheeled over a barbeque which I have to say sparked my attention, what could they…..ohhhhhh! My mind quickly put two and two together as Aiden’s shirt was ripped off and a flat metal rod was placed in the flames dancing high in the pit of the barbeque.
It seemed Charlie was the one who enjoyed the actually action as he was the one with a sick smile as he walked over to the teenager hanging and helpless. Aiden shot off his mouth earning a smack across the face as the hot rod placed on his stomach, his mouth opened but I couldn’t hear, my eyes transfixed on the smoke traveling off his flesh. His body shook trying to dislodge himself but the chains held fast, in the corner of my eye I saw Sean holding Chelsea’s head into his chest covering her eyes and ears while he screwed his eyes shut tight almost turning his lids white. Ashley too glanced away staring at the ground but I couldn’t, I watched as he jerked….as flesh seared into a bright red and the rod sunk in before it was pulled away.
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wwhhoooaa. im going to need to get to the bottom of this story. the kidnnaping and all, you got to exsplain it. pms
Great update. Keep up the good work. I can’t wait to read the next chapter. PMS real soon.
wwhhoooaa. im going to need to get to the bottom of this story. the kidnnaping and all, you got to exsplain it. pms
Great update. Keep up the good work. I can’t wait to read the next chapter. PMS real soon.
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this story is mad intense i really like it pms!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:)
you’re a genius
you’re a genius
more more!!!!! that was soo good!!!!! pms pleazze!
more more!!!!! that was soo good!!!!! pms pleazze!
Uh-oh! I missed a chapter, but now that I’m all caught up I’ve gotta say that even though this story only has three chapters it’s one of my favorites. In the last chapter I really like how all of them pretty much came together in order to help Spencer out. Also liked the fact that Ashley tried to verbally reassure Spencer even though she knew that she wouldn’t be able to hear her. It really shows how much she cares for Spencer. I like how the relationship between Spashley is forming, and the fact that Ashley torments her because she likes her. Spencer clinging to Ashley as a way to try and gain some control that she’s lost with her hearing is too cute. I’m hoping to get some more insight on why they were kidnapped in the first place. If it has to do with more than just getting money. Which I think it does seeing as how they burned Aiden when his parents already agreed to pay… of course it could have been done for their own sick please. It does seem as if Charlie gets a kick out of it. And I’m assuming each one of them is going to be tortured in some way. So maybe the roles will be switched between Spence and Ash. And I really love how they seem to be connecting so much more now that Spencer can’t hear… although I am hoping cleaning the blood out of her ears was useful… I never thought I’d say it but a part of me is actually feeling sorry for Aiden! Gah! I love this story sooo much. You’ve got me very intrigued. You NEED to update this very, very soon!
Uh-oh! I missed a chapter, but now that I’m all caught up I’ve gotta say that even though this story only has three chapters it’s one of my favorites. In the last chapter I really like how all of them pretty much came together in order to help Spencer out. Also liked the fact that Ashley tried to verbally reassure Spencer even though she knew that she wouldn’t be able to hear her. It really shows how much she cares for Spencer. I like how the relationship between Spashley is forming, and the fact that Ashley torments her because she likes her. Spencer clinging to Ashley as a way to try and gain some control that she’s lost with her hearing is too cute. I’m hoping to get some more insight on why they were kidnapped in the first place. If it has to do with more than just getting money. Which I think it does seeing as how they burned Aiden when his parents already agreed to pay… of course it could have been done for their own sick please. It does seem as if Charlie gets a kick out of it. And I’m assuming each one of them is going to be tortured in some way. So maybe the roles will be switched between Spence and Ash. And I really love how they seem to be connecting so much more now that Spencer can’t hear… although I am hoping cleaning the blood out of her ears was useful… I never thought I’d say it but a part of me is actually feeling sorry for Aiden! Gah! I love this story sooo much. You’ve got me very intrigued. You NEED to update this very, very soon!