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Phoenix – (Chapter: Hanging High)
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The sidewalk was lined with cars of all sorts. Spencer walked as casually as she could feeling anxious. Her vision was solely focused on one person, her eyes saw nothing else. The mystery man who had gone up stairs with Ashley and Glen stood inches away from her. His hands gripped tightly onto her upper arms, his voice low, but as Spencer neared them she could hear the anger in his tone. “Hey, Ash.” Her voice was friendly as she addressed her friend. The brunette’s head snapped to the left and she met frightened brown eyes.
Spencer didn’t know the situation or the angry man, but that didn’t stop her jaw from clenching. Her blue eyes turned to the man’s and her own anger flared up inside, expressing in the scowl she greeted him with. “Is there a problem?” Her voice was cold, impatient.
She watched his hands fall from her friend’s body as he took a step back. Without hesitating, she gently urged Ashley into her own. Her arms enveloped the smaller girl in a warm embrace, her eyes stayed on his as she felt Ashley’s arms tighten around her. Discomfort masked his face, without another word he left. Blue eyes closed, she could feel Ashley’s warm breath against her neck, her anger slowly started to fade.
The fear in Ashley’s eyes brought back horrible memories. She looked like a frightened little girl, the same little girl that made her heart ache. The blonde wanted to ask questions, but she didn’t. Ashley would talk if she wanted to, if not, it was none of her business. “Ashley?” The blonde whispered realizing the body in her arms had gone limp. The softness in her friend’s breathing told her she had fallen asleep.
With some brief maneuvering, Spencer managed to support both her legs with one arm, and with the other, supported her upper back. The same way a husband would carry his new wife over a threshold. “Wrap your arms around my neck, Ash.” She stared down at the brunette’s face, for a moment, brown eyes opened and stared up at her. The brunette was light and easy to carry, which didn’t surprise the strong athlete. She had lost some weight since freshman year. The disorientation in her eyes told her the reason. Of course, she knew the cause of her weight loss before tonight. “Wrap your arms around my neck.” She repeated softly. The brunette did so and she spent the next ten minutes trying to find her dark gray Porsche.
To her relief, the car was unlocked and she had no trouble getting Ashley settled in the passenger seat. Her eyes scanned the brunette’s outfit. She had changed clothes since going into the room with Glen and the other guy. She now wore a skimpy low cut black dress with big tears in the middle, showing off her flat stomach and the barest hint of a lace bra underneath. “Damn.” She muttered knowing Glen must have the keys to the Porsche.
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The story is okay. There are two things I don’t like which could influence whether I want to continue reading the story. The first is the fact that Ashley is dating Spencer’s brother. I don’t like any fic that involves Ashley dating any other Carlin besides Spencer. I can’t root for them to be together knowing Ashley is fucking her brother regardless of he is an ass and what looks like, her pimp. The second thing I don’t like is the nickname Ashley has for Spencer, Spenny. It just sounds forced and doesn’t fit Spencer. All of this is my opinion and others will definitely not agree.
OK, I do agree with the first comment but only to the extent that I HATE Glen’s influence on Ashley. This is the darkest fic that I’ve read for a while, but done well dark can be good, great even. However, I don’t think it will be to everyone’s taste and I’m sure you’ll get more mixed reviews but that in itself can be good as it challenges the author to justify their choices. I was so excited to see that you’d posted today. Really, you made my day and I loved this update. I like the way we find out a little more about what makes the characters tick with each new chapter. It’s 5 stars from me all the way!
i like this story. Ashley is def fucked up and the thought of glen and ashley makes me cringe but i like where its going. its going to take time for spashley to heal and as long as you dont rush that process im lovin the story. and spenny is different, like this story so it works :)
well i like the story…continue…good update…pms
I am so glad you posted today I really enjiy this dark version of Spashley. I had my doubts concerning Glen and Ashley’s relationship. If I read this update correctly he’s her pimp and dealer. The guys of the school seem to know this including Adien but not Spencer. If my guesses are correct I can’t wait to see how you weave the emotional response of Spencer when the blinders are removed from her eyes.
this was a great update. normally I don’t enjoy aingsty fics but this one has caught my attention! keep it up :)
i like the nickname spenny kind of gives it an air of innocence to the whole dark part…and spencer needs to up her game and start calling ashley out on some of this stuff so ashley can either get out or fall further in and what is up with glen he does seem to be her pimp, spence needs to get him away from ashley for sure
Yea I agree with the pimping thing. I didn’t catch it when I rushed through this earlier but definitely caught it now. I really don’t like glen at all in this story but that’s part of the reason it’s so great. and actually I agree with ash’s statement of “You don’t deserve my bullshit.” because spence doesn’t. but I guess it’s one of those situations where the love you have for someone is too strong and overwhelming for anything else to matter. anyway fantastic update, loved it. pms!