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    Forever

    Story written on December 21, 2007 by ge97511.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=17344
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    Ashley Davies woke up because a big white light was shining on her face. She rubs her eyes and looks around to take in her surroundings. The room was completely white and cold. She had been lying on a plain cold white table. She got up and looked around for a door and there wasn’t any. She hugged herself and started to rub her arms for warmth wondering where she was and what was going on. A few minutes passed by and nothing happened. So she decides to call out.

    “Hello, anybody there?”

    No answer.

    “HELLO, LET ME THE HELL OUT OF HERE!!” Ashley screams out scared

    Out of nowhere a man materialized in the room. He simply leans against the wall with his arms crossed against his chest. He was very handsome. Blue eyes, 6 feet tall, auburn, hair muscular and he was wearing a white suit. After a few minutes of staring and uncomfortable silence he spoke.

    “Glad, you finally woke up.”

    “Who are you? Where am I? How can I get out of here?” Ashley asks quickly

    The mysterious man just raises an eyebrow and says quietly, “My name is Jay and I’m your guide. You’re in what you humans call purgatory but I like to refer to it as the waiting room. And you can’t get out of here till you agree to your mission and till your final judgment is passed.”

    “Guide? Waiting room? Judgment?” Ashley asks completely confused

    “I’m your guide for this mission. You are to return to earth and help someone. Depending on the outcome of the mission will your final fate be decided. You will either go up or go down. You’re in the waiting room because you still have unfinished business down on earth so you can’t continue on to the afterlife till it’s settled. Besides your acts on earth didn’t really define were you should go. You’re in the gray area. You did a lot of bad but you also did good so the people upstairs need a little help to make their decision to where to send you. Besides you‘re not at peace. Someone down there is keeping you from being at peace and in order for you to be able to crossover everyone has to let you go. They all have to let you go and let you rest in peace.” Jay explains patiently

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    2. Crickey, that was awesome. It was written so beautifuly, like a movie. I could see the whole thing and it made me soo sad, and then I cried and then I was happy again. Dude, that was intense. Ta for it. Cheers and now you are another one of my fav’ fic’ writers. Again, ta…cheers mate. Post anything…Soon…Aidan

    3. Wow that was so sad but im glad they get to be together inthe end dead or alive, i love it when you write long storys like this they are always so well written great job i mean i actually made me cry an i don’t do that alot :) can’t wait for your new FF PMS!!!

    5. ok i’m bawling over here! my mom’s friends are like what the hell is wrong with you? lol. this was sooo beautiful and sad then happy again. i loved it. i hope you write alot more!

    6. you just like to make me cry, ur last FF and then this one, geez, well that was really good, well written too, i enjoyed it. Cant wait to read somethin else written by you!

    7. i’m always crying with your endings! i was starting to think maybe you had a thing going with the whole dead spashley theme. yes have them be alive next time!great oneshot.pms!!

    8. im crying my nose is running that was the saddest and best story i have ever read. my god i missed ashley!!! i think i was depressed for a good portion of this story but the end made me smile. wow ur incredible

    10. just finished it…i have honestly never cried b/c of a fanfic, until now that is. This was so…beautiful, honest, just amazing. I am extremely interested in anything you might write if this one-shot is any reflection of it. This gave me hope…i think it could give everyone hope that no matter what they may think, they are not alone in this world. Beautifully written from what I’m sure is a beautiful writer with a beautiful heart. (you must be, there’s no other option) post more stories soon, it would be a crime not to.

    11. wow, amazing story you wrote there. Really sad! But I loved the ending. I was having a hard time trying not to cry but at one point I couldn’t help myself and just started to cry…I even had to stop reading for a minute. Good job, really! But I’m happy to read that in your next FF both girls will be alive! :)

    12. im about a year too late, but i just found this, and have been sat bawling my eyes out for the last 2 hoursone of the most touchin things ive ever readwas awesome, well done

    14. Crickey, that was awesome. It was written so beautifuly, like a movie. I could see the whole thing and it made me soo sad, and then I cried and then I was happy again. Dude, that was intense. Ta for it. Cheers and now you are another one of my fav’ fic’ writers. Again, ta…cheers mate. Post anything…Soon…Aidan

    15. Wow that was so sad but im glad they get to be together inthe end dead or alive, i love it when you write long storys like this they are always so well written great job i mean i actually made me cry an i don’t do that alot :) can’t wait for your new FF PMS!!!

    17. ok i’m bawling over here! my mom’s friends are like what the hell is wrong with you? lol. this was sooo beautiful and sad then happy again. i loved it. i hope you write alot more!

    18. you just like to make me cry, ur last FF and then this one, geez, well that was really good, well written too, i enjoyed it. Cant wait to read somethin else written by you!

    19. i’m always crying with your endings! i was starting to think maybe you had a thing going with the whole dead spashley theme. yes have them be alive next time!great oneshot.pms!!

    20. im crying my nose is running that was the saddest and best story i have ever read. my god i missed ashley!!! i think i was depressed for a good portion of this story but the end made me smile. wow ur incredible

    22. just finished it…i have honestly never cried b/c of a fanfic, until now that is. This was so…beautiful, honest, just amazing. I am extremely interested in anything you might write if this one-shot is any reflection of it. This gave me hope…i think it could give everyone hope that no matter what they may think, they are not alone in this world. Beautifully written from what I’m sure is a beautiful writer with a beautiful heart. (you must be, there’s no other option) post more stories soon, it would be a crime not to.

    23. wow, amazing story you wrote there. Really sad! But I loved the ending. I was having a hard time trying not to cry but at one point I couldn’t help myself and just started to cry…I even had to stop reading for a minute. Good job, really! But I’m happy to read that in your next FF both girls will be alive! :)

    24. im about a year too late, but i just found this, and have been sat bawling my eyes out for the last 2 hoursone of the most touchin things ive ever readwas awesome, well done

    25. You like making your readers cry huh? Yea, I was crying too. This story was so sad, but sweet at the same time. I agree with AIDANNE, I felt like I was watching a movie, a really really good movie. Anyways, thanks for the one shot, it helps with the wait until you get your next story out. Again, this was an amazing story, great job.

    26. You like making your readers cry huh? Yea, I was crying too. This story was so sad, but sweet at the same time. I agree with AIDANNE, I felt like I was watching a movie, a really really good movie. Anyways, thanks for the one shot, it helps with the wait until you get your next story out. Again, this was an amazing story, great job.

    27. Wow! That was such a beautiful story! I can’t believe I cried. I never cry over fanfics lol. Seriously that was really amazing. That was definitely a story about TRUE love.

    28. Wow! That was such a beautiful story! I can’t believe I cried. I never cry over fanfics lol. Seriously that was really amazing. That was definitely a story about TRUE love.

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