Fan Fiction
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what if – (Chapter: best friends for ever(not))
A:hey when your brithday
M:june 25
A:gemni my moms a gemni and so was the frist girl i kissed she was so hot.
A:ok big changes are a head but are you going to be redy to deal with them
M:i am not sure if i belive in tht suff
A:but its funny how they know what going to happend
M:ash you should really try out for the squad with
A:i think all the the sun is going to youe head
M:come on ash i mean we can cheak out all the cute
girls thats what high school is all about and you totaly write the cheers
A:madison not my thing
A:hey try one one me
M:give me a c
madison does her cheer
M:omg guest who made basketball team
A:who
M:spencer carlin
A:yeah she was flirting with me the other day
M:no
A:yeah her locker is right next to mine and we were both runnig late
and we satred talking or more like wispering
M:how could noy tell me this ash
A:she kinda asked me out we were talking about a tribe called quest
and she said that they wre having a consert and that we should go togather
and i said yes
M:ok
Should i keep postin
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i agree with dawniekey, give some action to it, not just dialogue. other than that i like the story so far.
yeah totally interesting concept, try adding more detail in the story though and instead of the first letter of their name for a speaking part you could try it like this….”OMG guess who made the basketball team?” Maidison said.”Who?””Spencer carlin!” It’s better on the eyes. but i really do like where this is going so continue please