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How Hard The Rain Falls
Ashley sat in the Guidance office for the fourth time that week. She kept her head turned to the window beside her. Dark clouds started to spread along the sky. Mrs. Jordan sat behind her desk and waited yet again for a confession to come out of the brunette’s mouth. A pen was held rather tightly in her hand and a blank sheet of paper was lain in front of her.
Mrs. Jordan: "Come on Ashley. You gave that young man a very serious head injury. There is obviously something behind all of your anger."
Ashley: "….Who said it was anger? Maybe he just made me mad.."
Mrs. Jordan: "That would be anger dear."
Ashley: "..*sigh* No. I don’t think so. The anger your talking about is the kind that’s built up."
Mrs. Jordan: "So you don’t have any built up anger?"
Ashley: "Not that I know of. Besides, wouldn’t you bash a guys head against a locker if he called your Mom a whore?"
Mrs. Jordan jotted something down on the peice of paper.
Mrs. Jordan: "Okay Ashley. We have a whole hour left in here.."
Ashley: "Have you ever noticed how hard the rain falls sometimes?"
Mrs. Jordan: "No, I don’t think I have."
Ashley: "…Me and my…."
Mrs. Jordan: "What? What were you going to say?"
Ashley: "…Me and my Mother are very close."
Mrs. Jordan: "well that’s a good thing Ashley. Not many teenagers your age have a very close relationship with either parents."
Ashley: "You don’t understand….When I say we’re close. I mean we’re..very close."
Mrs. Jordan: "Elaborate, please, Miss Davies."
Ashley: "I was only 12 when I realized how hard the rain really fell.."
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Ashley rolled over on her back and stared up at the ceiling. the soft drum of the rain beggining to fall on the roof of the house was keeping her awake. She knew she was to old to go into her Mother’s room for comfort, but she was beggining to consider it. After laying there for a few minutes, she heard her door open. She hid herself under the covers and tried to pretend she was asleep.
Christina: "Ashley?"
Ashley continued to be "asleep". She felt her Mom crawl into bed next to her.
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‘mouth WIDE open’ holy shit that was um just wow it was really good and ashley and her mom? i still cant get my head around it. u left me speechless. DAMN i dnt think a story has ever really put me in a state of shock but ur writing was so captivating. BRAVO
THAT WAS FUCKING DISGUSTING!!! EWWWWW!!! Remind me not to read anymore of your stories.Sicko
forgot to add that even if some may think it is disgusting and dont get me wrong it made me cringe alittle but your writing was fantastic and u took a chance with writing a story like this. i mean i didnt put to much thought into the sex part cause i didnt need the image but the way you express ashley’s emotion and used the rain was awsome
yeah i kinda already knew some of…well one of you would think it disgusting. doesn’t bother me really, i myself don’t think i’m a sicko. i took a chance, i’m stickin to it!
thanks AberFitch14 that means alot to me. Thanks to everyone else who saw past the sex part too.
I thought it was a good story. Do not even bother with sonxluffer2. It’s a mind of matter. You don’t mind, they don’t matter.
Wait, I typed so quick what I said came out wrong. I think your writing is great, not so much the story. It was a little cringe worthy, but the topic is not something new. Stuff like that does happen.
Girl! U have some balls to be posting that! Bold! I like it! hahahaha
Ok I wasn’t going to comment on this story but I had to…that was extremely disturbing to say the least. What would make you write something like that? All I have to say is WOW.
That was wired, but a good kinda of wired. It was not much of a story , but its a good story line. I really liked it.
wow i just have to say your an amazing writer. i mean yes it is a disturbing topic to think about but i have read stories on this site about rap, and that is also a disturbing topic but yeah. i got to say it again awesome story. i have read most of your writting and your really good
Wow!!! Speechless is what I am. It took a lot of courage to post that. It really did.
Wow, altho it WAS disturbing, it was definitely well written. That took a lot of courage to post and i have lot of respect for you Cinwin, keep on writing!
wonderfully written.
really great, i loved the end where ashley said it was going to rain hard that night sounded like she was trying to tell her it was going to happen again but it was excellent