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Tell me to go and I’ll go…
Ashley’s gaze was fixed on Spencer’s and for the first time since Spencer had burst in Ashley’s room, she was nervous. At this very moment Ashley had the power to crush her. If she told her to leave she would have no choice but to go. With nervous anticipation Spencer waited.
Ashley pulled away and began walking to the other side of her room.
Ashley: You do realize that on our first date your boyfriend showed up and proposed to you?
Spencer nodded.
Ashley: And you also realize that you said yes, right?
She nodded again.
Ashley: Do you also realize that this is the second time you’ve broken into my house?
Spencer smiled.
Spencer: With good reason…
Ashley: Yes or no?
Spencer: Yes.
Ashley: One more. You are completely and total aware that I was about to get some when you barged in correct?
Spencer’s face went red with jealousy.
Ashley: I’ll take that as a yes.
Ashley was silent for a moment as she continued her walk around the room.
Ashley: Did you also know that I saw you last night? With HIM?
There was venom in Ashley’s voice that did not go unnoticed by Spencer.
Spencer: You said “one more” and that makes two…
Ashley approached Spencer quickly and was standing mere inches away now.
Ashley: I make the rules this time and I asked you a question.
Spencer stepped back. This wasn’t a game anymore. Ashley was not only hurt, she was livid.
Spencer: I didn’t know you saw us.
Spencer voice was barely above a whisper.
Ashley: Ah, but I did. I like to call that part of last night “salt in a wound”. What do ya think?
Spencer opened her mouth to speak but nothing came out.
Ashley: Yup that’s what I thought.
Breezing by Spencer, Ashley made her way out onto the terrace. She reached down onto the table and grabbed her pack of cigarettes. Lighting one, Ashley inhaled deeply.
Spencer spun around so as not to lose eye contact with the brunette.
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oh damn! talk about burn!! ughh!! how could she forget that she was still wearing it!! Spencer had better get her ass in that shower with her!! ok that sounded all pervy but u knw wht I meant. lol.. n kk I.ll take the two updates today buut! ya owe me lol please!! post again soon!!!
Well Flair – It’s not so much where we will go, but where i can take you that counts ;) this chapter… what else can I say but… wow. Just… wow. Quite possibly the most dramatic, tension filled scenes I have ever read. I love the way you built it and built it and then had it tension snap, so perfect! And if you go back and read the beginning of the chapter through the sex and then the end, you can almost feel when Ashley makes the decision to use Spencer’s lust against her. LOVE IT! Its like you really could see the signs, even when they were having sex and Ashley wouldn’t speak to her, like Ashley knew it would just make it that much harder to kick her out once they were done. Can’t wait to read more!!
BURN Spencer! That’s what your ass get. Have some respect for yourself and do the right thing for everyone involved. I skipped over the sex part because I didn’t want them to do it just yet because I knew it would just be a fuck and it was…. sort of. Great update! You always have us on our toes and I love it, even when I hate it. PMS!!!!
oh my what was spencer thinkin and why would ash just kick her out like that spencer should go run in that shower and tell ash that she does not want danny and that she will give him the ring back its going be hard if she tries later when feelings get involved.
I can’t believe she actually kicked her out. That last line was so powerful. Spencer need to through that ring in the garbage NOW! update soon i love this…
oh wow. thats so heartbreaking. great update. i’m acutally in the middle of reading your l word stories, they are amazing also. oh yeah, yes and thank you for not making me wait too long for another update, that is greatly appreciated :]. youre writing is amazing, can’t wait till the next update.
I usually don’t read NC-17, but I couldn’t resist. Lol. The last part was a shocker. Ashley is a confusing girl, but yet I get her…. sometimes. Awesome update. And as for what you responded back to my comment… =D PMS
ok that was HOT! but like always good things must come to an end. I really think Spence might of actually cost her the chance with Ash. If Spence was smart she would just end it with Danny because god knows I would lol I mean come on you have a beatiful girl in Ash right in front of you and you say yes to someone you really don’t even love. Tsk Tsk on Spence. Hey but the “sex” part was OMG WOW =) Great job as always and it was a Merry X-mas for me! PMS!
Oh Shit! Damn! Thats Fucked Up!!! I knew that was about to happen!… all those was just some of the stuff i was screaming when I was reading this chapter. :) Spencer better throw that fucking ring in the trash or something, call that danny guy and tell him to fuck off… on second thought he seems nice, she can just call him and let him down easy. Anyways, as always this was an amazing update.
i was reading this in the beginning and was all ‘why is this NC-17?’ then i got to that part. but i feel so bad for spencer :( i wouldn’t want that to happen to me thats for sure. i’d be scared shitless.
Aww mannnn!!!! This cant happen! man that was so hot then it just got depressing. Fix it! Pms =)
Aww mannnn!!!! This cant happen! It was getting so good. Now its just depressing lol. Can’t wait to see what happends next so post more asap!!!!
yes, last comment was a compliment. spencer deserves what ashley did to her. but i still hope that you can fix this mess soon, so that we can go back to happy spashley. :)
oh what?! seriously…is she on meds, after that she is still a bitch to spencer, just have them talk it out already and set things right…c’mon! i’ll totally forgive you if ya do:)
I don’t know who to have more sympathy for, so I’m sticking with the middle. Lol. Ashley’s a bitch and Spencer’s indecisive until it’s too late. What a great couple!! Haha. PMS.