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    Fall From a Star – (Chapter: California Dreaming)

    Story written on October 28, 2008 by Dreamer.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=19239
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    Though she said she would be mine, her heart is in L.A. all the time.

    Ashley sat outside with her back against the brick house enjoying a freshly lit cigarette. The last two days had passed on quietly for her and everyone else under the Carlin roof. She continued waking up early and heading outside for a cigarette where Paula always found her. They exchanged small talk until the older blonde invited her inside to make breakfast. The rock star wouldn’t hesitate walking over to the fridge and grabbing whatever ingredients she needed to make a wonderful meal. Paula started helping less and less as they days passed on, preferring to stand and talk to the cooking teen rather than pick up a knife. Ashley didn’t mind. She enjoyed the extra work. She was finding cooking to be very therapeutic. It took her mind off most her problems and was fun, especially when Spencer joined. The groggy blonde would always walk in yawning and kiss her cheek after greeting her mother. Predictably, Paula would choose that moment to leave. Ashley was becoming suspicious of the older blonde as she became suspicious of her and Spencer. To Ashley’s relief, there was never any tension to go along with it. After hanging out in the kitchen, the rock star would usually be dragged away by either Denny or Caitlyn. The siblings surprisingly wanted her for the same reason. Her guitar playing was something they both enjoyed, with Spencer’s help, she managed to give Caitlyn lessons while giving Denny her opinion on his playing. Ashley would spend the rest of the day either hanging out with Spencer or her cousins.

     

    The door opening got her attention. She turned her head and watched a very tall darkly dressed teenager softly close the door. There was no doubt in her mind that the figure was Denny. Her eyes scanned him from head to toe as she took a long drag off her cigarette. “Where are you going?” She asked before he could step off the porch. His long frame froze for a good 30 seconds, Ashley wondered if it had anything to do with the cold weather. She got her answer when he turned around. His face held nothing less than fear but it eased up when he looked hard and realized it was just her.

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    4. I love this story! I definitely like the long updates. Poor ashley, she seems to be warming up to the idea of going to see Pops though, even if its just to say goodbye. I really like how the story isn’t rushed and everything is happening at a gradual pace. Well..keep ’em coming because I love this story and your writing lol!

    5. man another update that just keeps you enthralled, spencer needs to start pushing i think or ashley may end up taking something beside cocaine and saying its alright cuz it wasn’t the white stuff and she’ll lose spencer…i feel like something big is up with denny and i don’t like it…i vote for slightly shorter chapters cuz i just don’t have the time to read the long chapters in a day but long chapters are fine too.

    6. I still love this story even though I know its not going to go well for Ashley. Unfortunately, she and Spencer are naive enough to think that love alone can cure Ashley’s addictions and that’s not the case. Ashley has way too many triggers and is so damaged that she’s not going to have a choice but to succumb back to her old habits. I do have one question that had been on my mind since Fame. Why did you change Spencer’s eye color from blue to grey? I don’t ave a problem with it, I was just wondering. Every once in a while when her eye color is mentioned, I have to remind myself that its Spencer. Anyway, great update. PMS!

    7. a month its been like 5 months!!! lol i love your stuff, its awesome… i have been obsessed with this story since it started… i think… anyways a long time!!! I have missed it so much!! I want to be able to read it more often, but i love looking and seeing 80 pages or whatever, it gets me SO EXCITED!!! But please dont keep us waiting this long again.. i’ll take the shorter chapters if u plan on making the inbetween time be more than like a month… thats about as much patience as i have…lol so ya… can’t wait to hear from u again!

    10. You do know you’re torturing us, right? I wish you would post updates more often..I rather have shorter updates than no updates in months. So yeah, haven’t forgotten about this fic and hope you’ll update soon! This is my fav after all…

    11. So with musicismylife! I just reread this fic for like the third time and I so haven’t forgotten about it. And I don’t think its a coiencidence that we both commented only weeks apart, I’m sure there are a lot of readers out there interested in this fic. I really hope I hear from ya soon cause I love this story!

    12. ok u know u are torturing us now right. i was addicted to this story and now u havent post anything in a while. It makes me sad. please stop our suffering and post more soon!

    13. it has been like 6 months!!! This is not fair. I hope you’re okay and everything. Cuz this is taking forever. I tried giving u as much time to update before checking it. I tell u I was hoping I missed it. But sadly I was disappointed. So please hurry up and post. We miss you and your wonderfully amazing story!!!

    15. oh no… plz dont give up…. i have been following this story for too long for it to end like this… there are way too many lose ends so plz… PLEASE!!!! dont stop now…. come back!!!!!!!!!!

    18. Wow, it’s been over a year. So that’s really it, hmm? No update? Not ever again? That’s too bad ’cause this fic has been one of the most brilliant ones I’ve ever read. Knowing me I’ll still be checking for updates even in a year from now…

    20. GOD PLEASE COME BACK!!!!!!!! please please please come back with more!!!! i cant take it anymore, i need more!!! please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please !!!!!!

    23. I had this bookmarked and finally sat down and read it all (and it’s 340 am I might add I couldn’t stop it was too addicting). It was fantastic and I can’t wait for more. Whether they are short or long, doesn’t matter, I’ll read. Keep up the great work!

    24. Loved it, as always :)I’d rather have shorter more regular updates than extremly long updates which you only post every few months…I can’t wait that long ;)

    28. it may just be wishful thinking but im sort of addicted to this story and i hope you come back. i keep checking to see if there is new posts everyday. :(

    29. these comments show dedication… 1 year, 1 month, and a day since u last posted…. sad… all of these fans are wishing, and hoping for an update, most are still looking regularly… please Dreamer……. please dont let this story end like this…. incomplete. please come back :(

    30. ^I couldn’t possibly agree more. From all the stories I have ever read, this one is my all-time fav and I do not want it to end like this. Please come back :(

    32. Just making sure that if u check this… I’m still waiting… I have not given up hope of this story getting finished… So please even if its just one last chapter, come back and finish it. =) Please?

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