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life101 – (Chapter: one)
Spencer’s POV
Chapter One:
 
I was sitting at a local coffee shop like I always do on Sunday morning. Before I head to the rents house for Sunday dinner.
And I couldn’t help but look up and catch the most amazing brown eyes I have ever seen. And when I smiled she just looked
down but I could still see that she was blushing and I thought that is was really cute. I started to get up to leave and I turned
back around and are eyes meet again and I started walking over to her. When I got to the table she was looking right at me
with a red tent to her cheeks. I smiled and said hi I’m Spencer and you are, I’m Ashley “its really nice to meet you Ashley” I
stuck my hand out and as soon as our hands touched I bolt of electricity shot through me and I know she could feel it to cause
we both are starring at each other. How are you I ask her , I’m fine and you not to bad I say so Ashley it is that’s a really
beautiful name. and there is that blush that I’ve come to really like. So Ashley I know that this is really forward but I was
wondering if you wanted to go and get some drinks with me tonight. She looks at me with a look I don’t know how to put it and
smiles she hands me her cell phone and I put my number in it. Well we say are goodbyes and I can’t get rid of the smile that is
on my face. I take one more look over my shoulder and smile and wave. All I can hope is that she calls so we can get some
drinks tonight. I’m still not sure its been so long since I’ve gone out. As I’m heading to my moms and dads house I can’t help
but think about Ashley and the way that she maid me feel. When I pull up a little or boy about four runs out of my parents
house and is yelling mommy mommy I smile and pick up my four year old hey baby what are you doing did you have fun are
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I understand where you are trying to go with the story but you really need a beta reader. The grammatical errors takes the reader out of the story and doesn’t make the reading pleasurable. Good luck.