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    My Loch Ness Monster

    Title: My Loch Ness Monster
    Author: SnarkySweetness on LJ / SchwartzyLogainne on FanFiction.net  / PixieMaryAlice at TwilightFanCenter
    Characters: Edward, Bella, Jacob, and Nessie. Each chapter is told from one of their perspectives.
    Rating: PG-13
    Warnings: Breaking Dawn book spoilers.
    Set Post: Right after the epilogue. 
    Summary: Mindless mush about everyone’s different take on love for the little ‘monster’. 
    Disclaimer: I bow down to Stephenie Meyer. 
    Author's Note: I wrote this the day of the book release, right after I finished. I was feeling gooey on the inside, and I needed to get this out. It was very hard to wait to post this, but I didn’t want to put it up the day of. There are four chapters planned for this, one from each characters perspective.

     

    Chapter: 2: Edward

     

    She was the most beautiful thing I’d ever laid eyes on, even more beautiful than Bella, which still seemed nearly impossible in my eyes. Her eyes were my favorite part about her; Bella’s eyes from when she was still human; I would never lose them now.

    “Daddy?” She asked, with her sweet innocence that made melt.

    “Yes baby?” I asked her, kissing her forehead.

    I still hated myself for ever wanting to kill her; I would forever be grateful to Bella’s stubbornness and to Rosalie’s selfishness. I was the most blessed man on this earth, and the beautiful little girl sitting in my lap was only half of the reason why.

    She put her hands to my temples, showing me an image of Jacob and I couldn’t help but laugh. No, my daughter couldn’t settle for talking or sending me her thoughts, she had to make sure I could see them. She was nearly as bad as her mother.

    I don’t think I would ever get over that the man who had once been my competition for Bella’s heart would be my future son-in-law.

    “Yes, Nessie, Jacob will be here later. He’s visiting with Grandpa Charlie; they need to eat human food.” Edward said to her, making a face at mentioning human food. He was glad she shared in on their diet.

    Nessie made a face back at him. That’s icky, daddy. She began giggling and threw her arms around me. I love you daddy.

    “I love you too Nessie.”

    I held her close, smiling. I could see Emmett from the corner of my eye, his face matching the amused thoughts he was sending my way.

    “Look Rose… sure fire proof Edward got laid. Isn’t it cute?”

    Figured. Emmett was never one to keep his mouth shut.

    I heard a slap, followed by an “owww” from Emmett.

    “Shut up Emmett.” Rose said, looking at Nessie fondly. “Nessie, anytime Uncle Em makes fun of daddy, it’s okay to bite him, okay?”

    Nessie giggled. “Biting is okay!?” She squealed.

    “Thanks Rose… now my daughter’s going to go around biting everyone.” I said with a groan.

    “No daddy, mommy says no biting humans; So that means Uncle Emmett and Jacob are okay.” She said, a bit stubbornly, just like my favorite brunette.

    “Of course honey, you can bite Jacob all you want.” Damn Bella, she was just encouraging her.

    “Bella Cullen… please, you’re making this worse,” I chastised, holding Nessie closer to my chest and pulling her mother into my lap.

    “No, she looks just fine to me.” Bella replied, kissing Nessie’s nose.

    “Momma!” Nessie cried happily, immediately throwing herself into Bella’s arms. I really hoped she preferred me to Jacob; I would hate to think I was number three on my daughter’s most loved list, because I knew Bella would always be her number one.

    The smile on Bella’s face made everything we’d ever been through worth it. I’d never imagined we’d make it this far; let alone with a child.

    I moved closer to them and wrapped Bella in my arms, kissing her temple and tickled Nessie’s tummy, making her giggle.

    This was my happiness, my forever, and I would never let anything get in the way of it, even if it meant letting my daughter marry Jacob Black in seven years; she’d still belong to us. She and Bella were my happiness and I would never let them go.

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