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    The New Commer

         I stood there at the bottom of the stairs, just waiting. Everyone bar Alice and Carlisle seemed to be leaving, we just stared into each others eyes from across the room, her gorgeous face; so white, so pale. Her Pixie like hair pointing out in all directions, she stood their so sweet, so innocent. She shifted herself to the sofa and nodded to Carlisle. He walked me to her, tapping my shoulder just before he walked out the front door. I watched him leave, I heard every foot step he made, even when he was a few hundred metres away. I stood curiously above her for a few minutes then slowly sat down. I faced the window watching the birds making a nest outside. It was silent but then she started talking,

         "Hello, I'm Alice Cullen. And you are?" Her eyes widened as she finished the sentence.

         "Hi, I'm umm well I'm not sure. I don't remember my name, the last thing I remember is the forest." She looked curiously at me, thinking of the forest I started to see the flashing green trees sprinting past me like I was in a dream.

         "Carlisle!, Carlisle!" Alice shouted, I didn't understand. He wouldn't be able to hear her from where he was now, right?

         A couple minutes passed with utter silence, I gazed once again out of the window as did she, at times I felt her eyes gaze upon me and scan me from left to right. I watched her in the corner of my eye, watched her breathe in and out, I looked at my own chest, waiting to see my chest increase and decrease, but nothing! Why wasn't I breathing? The door suddenly flew open and in walked Carlisle, with Esme behind him. I frowned thinking how did they hear Alice yell, why did she want them?

         "Yes Alice, What is the problem?" Carlisle looked concerned as he spoke to Alice,

         "Well, she can't remember her name. Did I do something wrong?" Alice widened her eyes as the words came out, she looked worried but I didn't understand! Why would it be her fault if I couldn't remember my name?

         Carlisle started walking towards a closed door, I watched as he gracefully glided into the room. A few seconds later, Carlisle came out of the room, holding what looked like a tool box. He walked towards me and kneeled beside the sofa, he opened the tool box and started digging through the items. He got out a light, a kind of doctors light,

         "Ok, follow the light with your eyes please." Carlisle instructed, He winked as I looked up to see his glimmering face. I moved my eyes from left to right, up and down, following this radiant light. Carlisle sat beside me on the sofa, he put his hand to his face and kept moving his head as if he was thinking. Esme sat beside me on the arm of the sofa, stroking my arm for comfit. "Now, can you tell me the last memory you have please." He looked at me with a plain face.

         "I remember the forest, the trees rushing past me. I thought I was dreaming! Am I dreaming?" I ask curiously

         "No, your not dreaming." Esme smiled sweetly as she finished her sentence. I put my head into my hands, trying to remember what had happened before that. Esme put one arm around my shoulder and whispered "It's ok, don't hurt yourself." I don't know if that was a joke or could I hurt myself? There was so much I didn't understand, like how was it Alice's fault I couldn't remember my name? Why had they all crowded around the child? Why were they all so beautiful?

         "Ok, Alice don't worry! It's not your fault, I think she forgot everything when she was dieing. We will have to give you a name, would you want that?" Carlisle seemed happier now, he had a big cheesy grin on his face. I thought about what he said for a second or two, but then it clicked! Vampire, what Carlisle had said before when the surreal pain was flowing through my body, wait! did he just say name?

         "What, like your pet?" I sarcastically said to Carlisle, Esme sighed and started shaking her head.

         "Ofcourse not, I mean we want you to be part of our family." Carlisle smiled, he grabbed my hand and whispered, "lets start from the beginning!"

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