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Loving Annabelle, Alternate Ending
Story written on January 31, 2007 by viveamore.
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Annabelle sees everyone in the courtyard lined up for graduation. She feels this is a good time to leave without being noticed and calls for a cab.
Annabelle looks again at the courtyard before getting into the cab. She takes one long last look and enters the cab.
Simone is in the courtyard with all the girls. She is anxious because this is the first time she will see Annabelle. She longed to see her and wondered if Annabelle still loved her. Simone continues to look around for Annabelle
Kat: She’s not here.
Simone: What?
Kat: Annabelle. She’s not here.
Simone: Well…where uh….
Kat: She left to go back home this morning
Simone is distracted by Mother Emaculata
Mother Emaculata: Well girls, today is the day you all become adults and start a new chapter in your life
Simone sneaks away and goes to her room. She grabs the letter of resignation she wrote, looks at it…folds it up and puts it in the envelope. Her bags are already packed. She begins to walk down the hall and stops at her classroom. She new this would be the last time she would be walking into her room. She enters her classroom, leaving her suitcase at the door.
The room is empty (she glances out the window and sees the girls at graduation, she hears the noise from the courtyard. She looks around her room and stares at Annabelle’s desk.
She sees that Annabelle’s Buddhist prayer beads are on her desk. (She walks over to them. To Simone- she felt like she lost Annabelle forever- it was like Annabelle left them for her like Amanda left her the cross necklace. She began thinking about Annabelle holding the beads in her hand and playing with them. (The scene that was deleted where she was crying would be played here with music)
Simone takes the beads puts them around her neck, and walks to Mother Emaculata’s office and puts her letter of resignation on her desk. She walks to her car and begins to drive away.
Mother Emaculata in the meantime was looking to see where Simone was and looks toward the school seeing her drive away in her car.
In the meantime…..
Annabelle: To taxi driver…Could you go this way? She directs him to Simone’s beach house. She new she had to let Simone go and she wanted to say goodbye down by the beach.
Simone’s beach house – morning
View of the ocean with birds flying over, and sound of waves banging against rocks.
Annabelle takes a taxi or drives her car to Simone’s beach house. She is walking on the beach at Simone’s beach house crying, she sits down (water coming onto her feet) she is holding a picture of Simone in her hand, playing with the sand and is having some flashbacks about her and Simone . She takes her sandy hand and rubs Simone’s picture affectionately. She lets it go in the water-(symbolic of Simone letting Amanda’s picture float away in her bathtub). She stares straight ahead as she watches it drift. She has thought she’s lost Simone forever. She gets up turns around and makes a long stare at the beach house.
Simone walks out from the patio door.
Annabelle can’t believe her eyes, she wiped them to make sure she was seeing clearly. Annabelle runs toward the beach house and Simone runs towards Annabelle
They run to each other and embrace.
Simone: I thought I’d lost you forever
Annabelle: Me too.
Simone: I am never going to let you go…..I am never going to let you go…..
~The end
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