Fan Fiction
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Story written on May 30, 2004 by Shakennotstirred.
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This is a GREAT story…..but I do agree with Mari, Bette should have just stayed home and waited for Tina to return.
Brilliant. You write Bette especially well
this is an interesting story indeed…please continue…i love all your works
bette should have stayed home. when you are in love you want to try to be near the one you love .maybe tina needed to get away to make bette miss her more who knows but you thanks for taking time on a holiday to satisfy us/just keep us happy ..
I’m not sure why Bette is doing this but I do like what you are doing with this story…it is a new twist to the sad ending to S1…please continue.
interesting…write more please
Okay Olives, you got me hooked (again!)to one of your stories. Please hurry up with chapter 2 (no pressure).
Ditto what MyBody said.
Per usual Olives, another great story that has us all hooked. I’m really impressed!
Excellent start, Olives.. I’m loving this so much, looking forward to the next chapter.