LesFan

Lesbian Fan Social Network

    Fan Fiction

    This story has been set to a rating of R. Age verification is required to proceed.

    Age Verification

    I am years of age as of today, October 27, 2026

    Enter your current age into the field provide above. Stories with a rating of R or NC-17 may contain material not suitable for children. LesFan requires that all individuals wishing to read these stories confirm they are of at least 17 years of age. LesFan uses the MPAA rating labeling system for all stories.

    LesFan will also make a best attempt to filter profane words in stories that are not rated R or NC-17 unless the individual confirms they are of at least 17 years of age.

    LesFan uses the following rating scale for stories.






    Submit

    It’s PRIVATE! Sequel to What have I done? Chapter 53

    Story written on June 11, 2004 by lsrenaski.
     Login to add story to favorites
     Login to add author to favorites
    44 votes, average: 2.75 out of 544 votes, average: 2.75 out of 544 votes, average: 2.75 out of 544 votes, average: 2.75 out of 544 votes, average: 2.75 out of 5 (44 votes, average: 2.75 out of 5)
    You need to be a registered member to rate this post.     Loading ... Loading ...
    Genre(s):
    Rating:
    fanfiction(s):
    Character(s): N/A
    Number of Comments: 29
    Words: 807
    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=48418
    Author Notes:

    GENERAL meets PRIVATE! But it was supposed to be a nap! Sometimes naps just don’t turn out like you’d think!

    Chapter 53

    Dana and Alice finally left Bette and Tinas house. The party had been planned – but only under the direction of Tina. If it had been left to Bette and Alice, Tina was sure that plans never would have been finalized.

    Jackie began preparing the food for the party as Jake looked on and begged.

    Jackie smiled at Jake. Now Jake – not too much or youll cramp up when you go surfing later. She threw Jake a carrot. He scampered off happily to eat it – and – as dogs will do – to leave pieces of it on the living room rug for some poor unsuspecting human – a barefoot human – to step on later!

    Tina came into the kitchen. Let me help you mom

    No..noTina. I have things under control. Why dont you go take a shower and get ready?

    Youre sure?

    Yeah Sweetie – you go ahead – and take your time – relax a little. Its going to be a late night. Maybe you should consider a nap. Jackie seemed suddenly concerned that the stress of having the party might get the best of Tina.

    I guess a short nap would be a good idea. I am a little tired. Ill see you in an hour or two. Tina turned and left the room. When she got into the bedroom, she could hear Bette singing in the shower. Tina sat on the bed and listened.


    If a picture paints a thousand words,
    Then why can’t I paint you?
    The words will never show the you I’ve come to know.
    If a face could launch a thousand ships,
    Then where am I to go?
    There’s no one home but you,
    You’re all that’s left me too.
    And when my love for life is running dry,
    You come and pour yourself on me.

    If a man could be two places at one time,
    I’d be with you.
    Tomorrow and today, beside you all the way.
    If the world should stop revolving spinning slowly down to die,
    I’d spend the end with you.
    And when the world was through,
    Then one by one the stars would all go out,
    Then you and I would simply fly away

    While Bette sang – Tina made her way into the bathroom, shed her clothes and quietly opened the shower doorshe stepped inside. She stood behind Bette and pressed her body into hers.

    Sweet Baby – really sweet Tina pulled away slightly and ran her hands up and down Bettes back. Bette reacted to Tinas touchher body trembled. Bette raised her arms – placed her hands on the tiled wall and leaned forward. She didnt speak. Warm water cascaded down both of their bodies. Tina leaned back into Bette – putting her arms around her and bringing her hands to rest on her *****. She gently teased Bettes nipples. These are mine – right baby?

    Bette whispered – Yes Tina all yours Bette placed her hands on top of Tinas – their fingers intertwining. Im all yoursall yours TI love the way you touch meincredible

    Tina pulled her hands away from Bettes and ran them down to Bettes tummy and then up and down her sides.

    Tina whispered to Bette, Youre so soft – so beautiful. I cant stop touching you

    Tina pleasedont stop touching meGod Tina

    Tina began kissing Bettes back – soft gentle kisses. Bettes body continued to tremble as Tina worshiped it with her mouth and her tongue.

    Bette, turn around so I can kiss you – so I can see you.

    She twirled her body around until she was face to face with Tina. They shared a passionate kiss. Tina could see the need in Bettes eyes – she could tell how bad she wanted to have her release – to let go. Tina whispered to Bette. Turn back around Baby.

    She did as she was told. Tina used one hand to spread Bettes wetness open – while she used her other hand to bring Bette to ***** – a powerful *****.

    Bette turned around and drew Tina into her arms – she was still breathless. She held Tina tight for several minutes – just enjoying the closeness.

    So – General Kennard – when do you think youll be disciplining the troops again?

    Next time theyre NAUGHTY Private Porter – next time theyre NAUGHTY!

    TBC







    «
    FF Main Page
    »

    Comments

    3. Thanks. So far this has been a great year. My Mom told me to do it all while you can. Great advice. Been doing just that. Whithout hurting anyone. I always worry about everyones feelings. Thanks again, you are great!!

    5. Great as always. I’m looking forward to your next installment. I like the Bread bit. I just turned 40 this year, it brought back memories. Thanks!!

    6. Nice, lisa! very nice! If the prep for party is this….I can only imagine, or can I? how will the party go…and the post-party at Kennard-Porter would be…..

    8. I found myself singing along to Bread, is that a good thing? Dating myself?? One thing I do know, someone like me should not have an aircard for her laptop because driving while reading your story is not condusive to good driving. Thanks for a great chapter, sooo looking forward to the next!!

    12. Seal – someone inspired me!
      Ande – 40 was the year I had my knee replaced. That was the high point. The terrible pain before – the low! Old Olympic Figure Skating injury – yeah right. PROUD is fine – I’d hate to answer for the people I live with!

    15. tigerDE – Grrrrr! I promise both. The GENERAL and the PRIVATE will meet again. See Bette’s like me – always knows exactly how to get on her significant others shit list!

    18. Hi Lisa
      Count me in with all these fun chat. Love your stories. You’re too hot to be a grandmom.
      Gosh, I wish you’re my grams. If I mention the word sex – she’ll have a heart attack. That’s why I don’t dare to even touch that side with my stories. LOL. she’ll spank me. Ha! ha! :) Keep writing. Love it.

    19. FriendsForever – I better not be a grandmother – my son is only 12. He’s a dead man if I am. Yeah – the chats are fun. I have a feeling though that when I am a grandmother my mind will still go in the same direction! WINK!

    23. bvhall – you’re a way cool grandmother! Kabby – you can count on Bette and Alice doing something. I’m in love with their annoyance with one another. Very close bond they have!

    24. Thank you BTLuver – you can call me Lisa – believe me – growing up with my last name sucked – and you spelled it wrong – but hey I said it wrong until I was 13!

    28. The LOML stays on my SL.NOt all the time 10percent.BnT are so cute Love Jake and Jackie.Hey my oldest grandson is 30 .So i’m dated LOve yor story

    Leave a Reply