LesFan

Lesbian Fan Social Network

    Fan Fiction

    This story has been set to a rating of PG-13. Age verification is required to proceed.

    Age Verification

    I am years of age as of today, October 27, 2026

    Enter your current age into the field provide above. Stories with a rating of R or NC-17 may contain material not suitable for children. LesFan requires that all individuals wishing to read these stories confirm they are of at least 17 years of age. LesFan uses the MPAA rating labeling system for all stories.

    LesFan will also make a best attempt to filter profane words in stories that are not rated R or NC-17 unless the individual confirms they are of at least 17 years of age.

    LesFan uses the following rating scale for stories.






    Submit

    ..

    Story written on June 15, 2004 by Shakennotstirred.
     Login to add story to favorites
     Login to add author to favorites
    40 votes, average: 2.88 out of 540 votes, average: 2.88 out of 540 votes, average: 2.88 out of 540 votes, average: 2.88 out of 540 votes, average: 2.88 out of 5 (40 votes, average: 2.88 out of 5)
    You need to be a registered member to rate this post.     Loading ... Loading ...
    Genre(s):
    Rating:
    fanfiction(s):
    Character(s): N/A
    Number of Comments: 17
    Words: 0
    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=48473
    Author Notes:

    ..

    ..

    «
    FF Main Page
    »

    Comments

    1. This story is truly something amazing. It brought tears to my eyes and tugged on my heart as I read your descriptions of how these two lost souls are trying to find their way back to each other. Bette is doing a good job of trying, but she needs to learn she has to open up and talk to Tina and Tina needs to learn that she has to let Bette in and break down her own walls. Trust, friendship, love. These things are not formed overnight but they can be lost in an instant. I like how both Tina and Bette have their own guardian angels looking out for them, even if they are in disguise. Excellent writing. Please continue soon.

    3. aaTnB just said EXACTLY what I wanted to say…thank you for letting Bette be patient and for allowing Tina to let go and open up…bravo to you…can’t wait for more.

    9. Olives, what can I say..except..why the hell did you stop?? I’m with Mari “it’s about fucking time” (the kiss!) Can’t wait for chapter 8!.

    11. wonderfully done. this is just an amazing story and you are doing a great job. thank you for writing something different, i’m enjoying every bit of this story.

    13. well written… is it still going to continue. I love the details and it’s good. I’ve always find your stories to be rich… it’s great. I loved it.. always do. I like the one that you wrote about when Bette & Tina met… it was good too.

    16. So nuanced, so textured and detailed!
      And thanks for the tour of Pest! Your words create a world that the reader can step into and inhabit with the characters.

    17. You show a lot of depth and intelligents in your writing, it runs like a beautiful novel. I love the scenery and stmosphere you add to your storylines. Makes me feel like I am there with them. I forward to your next chapter.

    Leave a Reply