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    Story written on July 21, 2004 by Shakennotstirred.
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    2. oh-oh… My fav couple has so much to work through, still.. Tina not trusting Bette, that Sylvain guy… Slime!! Mari’s story is so sad… Thank you so very much for this chapter. Can’t wait for the next one! I love this fic so very very much!

    3. First Post: Olives – Thank you for the time and effort you put in all your fan fic. I enjoy and appreciate your interpretation of these two characters and their struggles. They seemed “real” and plausible. Great writing as well.

    5. I’m a big fan of this series. I always look forward to your posts. Tina and Bette have a lot of work to do to trust each other again. Bette didn’t need to over react like that without knowing what really was going on. I sure can’t wait until they get their stuff together. This is great. I’ll be waiting for the next chapter.

    11. excellent chapter no disappointments here. I hope that we will not have to wait too long for your next chapter.Will be looking forward to it.

    12. Verrrrry Good Story, but holy cow..isn’t their relationship ever going to stablize…guess I am just impatient to see them back together and secure in their relationship. Isn’t it true how one mistake can escalate to the point that their isn’t trust on either side? Art imitating life.. keep up the good work!

    14. I LOVE THIS STORY!!! I love your writing…everything. I’m trying to read it at work and people keep interrupting me! Can’t they see I am busy with my fanfic addiction!!!??

    15. Wooow wasn’t expecting that I guess Tina was having a little fun on this trip before Bette got there. Please go on can’t wait to find out.

    16. Olives, I LUUUUURVE THIS STORY!! , but hate the cliffhangers!! :-) I don’t know if I can wait another month before you post the next one. Please continue ASAP ;-)

    17. I am enjoying this story . You are in the league with Petoria and Canon and Marie and Seahurst . I only follow a few and those are the authors who I always look for when I have time to read. So I hope that You don’t keep us hanging to long. I also have taken the time on slow posting days when I have time read your other stories. Are you going to finish the Umbrella Series? You weaved it in this story very well.

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