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hmmmm??? (part 2)
As Shane and Dana are walking through the parking lot to Danas car, they barely make it there before Shane gently pushes Dana against the drivers side door. She can feel the want coming from between her legs and as far as shes concerned shes waited for so long that this can happen right here. She begins to run her tongue over Danas neck, searching for the spot that will drive her wild. She knows shes found it when she hears the moan escape Danas mouth. She cant help the smile that graces her lips as her tongue continues its magic. She moves up Danas neck to her mouth, and as she gently begins to kiss her lips she feels Dana tense up. The only thought racing through her mind before she speaks is, ***** what happened?
Dane, are you alright? she cautiously asks, afraid the answer is going to send the pure bliss she feels crashing down.
Dana pushes Shane away from her slightly and immediately her eyes find the ground.
UmI think this was a mistake.
And with that single phrase Shanes fears are confirmed.
What are you talking about, it doesnt feel like a mistake to me.
Of course it doesnt feel like a mistake to you, this is what youre used to, this is what youve made your life of.
What are you talking about?
I cant do this Shane. I dont want to be another one of your one night stands. I dont want to wake up tomorrow to an empty bed and nothing but a memory.
Dane
No Shane, Im sorry but I cant do this. I want more then what you can give me. Maybe if you get back inside you can still take that other girl home. Or Im sure you can find someone else.
And with that Dana got in the car and drove off, tears streaming down her face that was hot with embarrassment from her confession.
Shane stood in the parking lot and watched Danas tail lights grow smaller as she drove away. She was confused but she was also hurt and angry. She should have known better then to think that Dana could ever see her as anything but the one night stand crusader she had let herself become. And once again Danas words had hurt her more then anyone would ever know.
As Shane walked towards her truck she realized this wasnt the first time she had been turned down, but it was the first time she wasnt going to try and find someone else. She was going home alone because the women she wanted to take home didnt want her.
Sitting in her truck drumming her fingers against the steering wheel Shane begins to have a debate with herself.
SHANE
Should I go after her?
What good is that gonna do, she thinks you only want ***** from her.
*****, what am I gonna do?
Maybe you should just let it go.
I could, but..
But what?
What is this feeling I have, this feeling of almost physical pain of seeing her walking away from me crying. I made her cry. Thats the last thing I ever wanted to do.
So I guess you should come up with a plan then huh genius?
Sometimes I hate that voice in my head. Am I really that much of a smartass in real life?
PLAN!
Ok, ok I got it. Damn.
Ill just go see her tomorrow and tell her I feel about her. Of course Ive never done that before, but how hard can it be?
Shane, being the layed back person she is, and satisfied with that idea started her truck and headed home, a little nervous about how she was going to manage this but counting the hours till she could see Dana again and win her heart.
ALICE
Walking to her car,
You just wait till I see those ***** ***** again! Leave me in a bar. So not cool!
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oooooooo please continue ASAP.
I’m lovin’ this fic!
Dane and Shane, huh? interesting combo. But you’ll definitely have to convince me some more…
Sexy couple, very opposites attract sexy. Can’t wait for more.
Still lovin’ it! Shane’s inside voice is a riot.
Heeeeeeeeee!!!! Yeah, if Dana isn’t going to be Lara and has to hook-up with one her friends (the whole long-term commited thing) I want it to be with Shane! :D
“very opposites attract sexy.”
Nichole Kelly,
You’re exactly right about that.
That’s what I was thinking, but couldn’t actually think of the words when I posted my comment.
sup dawg. awesome story keep it going. i WANT more! (p.s. i’m gonna hurt you for getting me into this.)