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Bette and Tina:The “Missing” Scenes.
Scene 1
Bette, come here!
What? Bette asks as she enters the bathroom.
Tina holds the test stick up for Bette to view.
Youre ovulating, Bette states as she puts her hand on the back of Tinas head and begins to kiss her lovingly.
Im ovulating, Tina responds as she kisses Bette back.
Lets make a baby, Bette states and kisses her again.
Lets make a baby, Tina responds, breaking the kiss for just a second.
They continue to kiss as Bette reaches down and gently rubs Tinas *****.
Tina lets out a low, barely audible moan just as Bette removes her hand and instructs, Why dont you get dressed and Ill drop you off on my way to work.
As Bette is walking away, Tina glares at her back and with raised voice, Where the ***** do you think youre going? You cant get me all worked up and just walk away. Now get your hot body back here and finish what you started.
Whoa, Bette started, Where did that come from?
You do this all the time, you kiss me, touch me and then leave me all hot and bothered. Now get your ***** over here and work your magic.
Bette smiled seductively, she liked this side of Tina. She hadnt realized it, but Tina was right, and from now on she would make a point of letting her fingers do the talking.
Tina had her hands resting on the sink and her butt leaning on the edge as Bette made her way back to her. She was inches away from Tinas mouth when she offered in her most throaty voice, lets get this off of you, as she removed Tinas pajama top, leaving her now completely naked.
Tina felt herself growing wetter by the moment and the anticipation of what was to come was becoming too much.
***** me Bette, Tina ordered as she grabbed Bette by the neck and locked her lips onto Bettes. Tina parted Bettes lips with her tongue and dove in full force. Bette grabbed Tinas tongue with her lips and sucked hard, eliciting a moan from Tina that seemed to start in the pit of her stomach. Their tongues danced as they continued their assault on each others mouths.
Bette lifted Tina onto the sink while Tinas hands remained wrapped around Bettes neck.
Bette leaned down and latched onto Tinas very erect right nipple and squeezed hard with her lips. Does that feel good, baby? Yes Bette, now the other one Tina answered, throwing her head back. Bette complied and soon Tina had her feet resting on Bettes hips. Baby, I need your mouth down there, please, please Bette, I cant wait, Tina pleaded nodding her head to her now dripping wet core.
Bette put her hands under Tinas knees and lifted them up and spread them apart, giving her a Bettes eye view of Tinas slick center. Tina leaned back against the sink and felt the faucet digging into her spine. But the pain she felt in her back would not compare to the pleasure Bette was about to instill on her front. Bette lowered her head between Tinas legs and with rigid tongue, licked her from her opening to her pulsating *****.
Oooooh Tina moaned as she grabbed Bette by the hair and held her head to her.
Bette began to suck on Tinas ***** while she moved one of Tinas legs onto her shoulder to free her fingers so they could, as Tina put it, work their magic. She continued licking, sucking and nipping at Tinas ***** as she entered her with her fingers. Tina was so wet, her fingers easily slid in and out. Tinas breathing was becoming labored as she said harder Bette, faster Baby, ***** it feels sooo good! Bette sucked hard on her ***** as she quickened the pace of her fingers and pushed just a little harder as Tina began to moan loudly. Bette knew she was close.
Yess, Baby, yes.oh god Bette, Im cumming. Bette felt Tina contract around her fingers and gently bit down on her ***** eliciting an erotic scream from Tina as she came hard. She held her fingers inside Tina as she lifted her head to meet Tinas. Tina grabbed her around the neck again and kissed her tenderly, tasting herself on Bettes lips. Mmm baby, that wasthat wasI cant even descriiibe how good that was. Im glad you liked it, and it was my pleasure Bette responded as she finally removed her fingers from within Tina licking each one as if they were beaters just removed from the cake batter.
As Bette helped her off the sink, she touched her back where the faucet had been pressing into her and thought, It might bruise, but it was so ***** worth it.
They both got ready and continued on with the regular script!!
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I just saw this eppy last night and I would have loved seeing this version……..Great Start.
I had always wanted a continuation of that scene. Great just amazing.
I’ll pay to see that on TV.
Good. Thanks for filling in the blanks. Take your time with the details and just let it flow. Don’t be afraid to linger longer.
The action you described was good. Including their inner thoughts will help convey their emotional responses. Thanks!
really nice…hot…
that scene always leaves frustrated..like why didnt tina call her back or how could bette stop once she started. so thanks for clearing that up. that would have made for a very interesting start to the series. great job!!
Could have definitely used that on the show…dayum…very hot and nicely done…how about some alternatives to their fights…hot sex!!!
I always felt that scene was cut abruptly…like your version much better :) Keep writing –
Thanks for this. Everytime I see the pilot it is so clear that Tina wanted to be f****d but Bette just left her high and dry or high and wet as the case was. Jus another way for IC to show us that something was seriously wrong in their world.
You gave Tina exactly what she wanted. Good work .
If you have Showwwtime you would be paying for it.We all would love to see that,but IC would not let us enjoy something like that.Enjoyed the chapter,just you keep writing,any give us more.
welcome!
and as techgal said, linger longer. always better to linger, makes the finish so worth it! good job!
short, but great for your first- it was hot! Looking forward to more..
I agree with everyone, your version is definitely better! Great job for your first fic!! I hope to see more from you!
good one!
don’t we all Tina included that this actually happened. T was so frustrated and in the doc’s, hope you do that one next but have her finish the job before the doc comes back.
Uh Hunh! MORE……there’s that whole after Bette finds out Seans’s Jism is no good thing…….she had already gotten Tina started……….Shit, I might write something. Like where Bette comes back, locks the door, throws the paper sheet off of Tina’s lower half, slid out the shelf, get on it-on her knees between Tina’s legs, after she’s removed her pants, and proceeds to lean down and lower Tina’s gown off her shoulders…..to eventually remove it altogether, and fuck Tina ravenously and get herself off, too! :D 5-Stars
If they wouldve showed that part on tv I will still be in a cold shower right now.