Tina is resisting this way too much. So when she finally tumbles for Bette it’s going to be hard! I can hardly wait to read about it. A piece of advice, Tina honey – GO FOR IT!!! Tall dark and gorgeous in a skimpy bathing suit – LOL!
You have pick up a bad habit already for the other writers Abig tease,cliffhanger Love Tina thinking about Bette. Then running into her, Keep up dating asap Love the chapter Yhanks
I really like where you’re going with this.. it’s interesting and different. It’s nice to picture their beginnings somewhere other than the CAC all the time.., Good job!
I am with all the others, great chapter. If I were Tina and she is this timid with Bette that they don’t find her and sara and sit next to them.It could be hotter than hot.
Ow please ow please more more need next chapter quickly.
What a tease I thought we were gona get some Bette & Tina romance. Please post soon…
Sweeettt… can’t wait for the next one. C’mon.. you’re teasing us…
You’re a great writer, Elvish1! Love your story
niceeeeeee…very very niceee…moreeee
mmmm…. bette. if tina doesn’t want her, send her my way. i won’t put up a fight.
Tina’s internal dialog Friday night was pretty funny.
Tina is resisting this way too much. So when she finally tumbles for Bette it’s going to be hard! I can hardly wait to read about it.
A piece of advice, Tina honey – GO FOR IT!!! Tall dark and gorgeous in a skimpy bathing suit – LOL!
OK…could you possibly send me a picture of them in their little bathing suits? YUMMY!!!!!!
Excellent story so far, please continue soon!
excellent story – please write and post soon
You have pick up a bad habit already for the other writers Abig tease,cliffhanger Love Tina thinking about Bette. Then running into her, Keep up dating asap Love the chapter Yhanks
I love the dramatic tension. Everything is not falling into place automatically. Thanks!
I really like where you’re going with this.. it’s interesting and different. It’s nice to picture their beginnings somewhere other than the CAC all the time.., Good job!
Great first time, Welcome to the fanfic team. Tina is fighting a bit too hard isnt she. I’m looking forward to tne next chapter. Again Good start!
I absolutely love it…you have to continue soon. Great job.
I like it ,post soon!
Keep going! Keep going!! This is great!!!
great ch. I love the B & T beginning stories.
Oh please post soon, very soon. Great chapter.
I am with all the others, great chapter. If I were Tina and she is this timid with Bette that they don’t find her and sara and sit next to them.It could be hotter than hot.
LMAO! Yep, I have a feeling Bette is practically drooling at this point! :D
Funny about Alice and let see the game began!!!!!!!!!!!