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Story written on August 13, 2004 by Shakennotstirred.
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Hey SNS, I’m with everyone else…so glad you are continuing with this story. It is a lovely “beginning story” and has been one of my favorites!
Thank you for taking me on this Southwestern vacation! It’s good to get away. Love your umbrella, even when it’s used to shield us from the desert sun! I’m glad it’s back.
I’m so happy you haven’t ended this story, which I’ve missed lately. I loved it since way back when you started it, and I still love it now. Great updates!
BTW, I’m totally diggin’ “The Chase†too. Actually, I stumbled upon it when this site was down one evening, prompting me to venture to the other site for a TnB fix; I read all 18 chapters in one sitting! You hooked me right away in classic SNS fashion. :-)
Hope to see another update for both of these stories soon!
Wonderful as alway’s Olives! The umbrella story was the first fanfic I read and still remains my favorite as well!! Just great!
I’ll just follow in line. Excellent. Thanks.
Woohoo! A chapter of “Umbrella!” Fab, as always Olives.
So glad you you are writing “umbrella” again. It tell so much of Bette and Tina happer times. Thanks so much.
Hey Shake…glad to see you’ve decided to give us some more on the Umbrella story…always love your writing…wonderful as always!!! bravo…10
Thanks for starting up the story again. I’ve really loved reading it. Great chapter and I can’t wait to read more.
Umbrella is one of my all time fav’s. Thanks for updating Olives.
this story is one of the best fanfics…Undeliavable…more
I can’t believe my eyes when I saw your post.What a treat for Friday!I always love your stories.Glad that you are introducing us to Bette’s mom.Like I said before I like your writing better than TLW.Hope to read more soon.
olives I love umbrella is my #1 B&T beginning so where is the next 5 chapters… This was good glad u back with this.
im so happy to see this story go on.
Umbrella is my fav too. Thanks for revisiting this again. Wonderful.
Wonderful!I love your stories! I can’t wait for a next chapter (of either sotry, I’m hooked!!!).
Nice surprise on a dreary Friday! Keep it going!
It may be Friday the 13th, but I’m feeling pretty lucky now.
THANK YOU!!!! This is my favorite series of all and I’ve been dying for another chapter – did I say THANK YOU?
! As always, it’s wonderful and I’m very anxious to see what happens from here.
Cheers!
I can’t wait to see how tina and bette mom interact.Wondering if bette is more like her mom?
Olives, thank you for re-visiting this story. This is one of my favorite fic of all time! Please continue with this story….