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Story written on August 15, 2004 by Shakennotstirred.
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I’m so glad you’re continuing with this one! Great chapter!!
i really love this story. i couldnt be happier that you started writing it again.
Girl am so addicted to this story, don’t even think on give up, I love a begging Bette and a Tina on control. you’re an awesome writter keep yourself on this road, we will follow. :D ps: love your other stories also.
I love it when she’s impossible…thanks
ok next chapter…
Lovely as always,Olives. Poor Bette and Tina.When will you let them finish loving each other? I know it is hard for you to write a love scene.But, I like to tease you though.Hope to see another chapter soon.
Lovin’ it! Great job and I cant wait to read more.
hey you do a good job at it as always. I’ve always enjoyed your writings and like techgal said.. yes you do it with taste and style. keep it coming..
Another lovely chapter! Poor Bette.. Busted by mom!LOL! Loving it!!
Wonderful as always Olives
heeeeeeee!!! my mom would expect me and Wolfy to be doing something. That is when I bring Wolfy for a visit for the first time, with the actual reality of our true relationship being revealed. Great story, start another. MORE Bette/Tina SMUT, PLEASE! :D
Bette and Tina are so cute in this chapter. I love having happy thoughts of these two. Please continue.. and don’t forget The Chase okay? ;-) I love both of these stories.
Only you can capture the true essence of us getting to know bette mother. Getting to understand bette better. It going to be interesting to see tina and bette mother interact.
Glad to see this story back on,Great chapter.Write more soon.
Good Job! Love this story. Keep it going. thank you
It may be hard for you to write ‘this stuff’, but you do it so tastefully and well, in your own way.
I really glad that you have started writting for the story again. Look forward to more. Excellent as always.