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Story written on August 29, 2004 by Shakennotstirred.
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glad to see you add another chapter to this one. i like how you worked the other story in here too. youre definately one of those writers that are missed when you you get into that “wrtier’s something or other”.
As always worth the wait.
Been waiting – thanks for another great chapter. Should have sent the virtual wine earlier. : – )
Where were you, I was worried sick, HA. F5,F5,F5, and BAM, there it was, “The Chase.” Thankyou, thankyou, thankyou.
Olives, that was exquisite! You have woven a tale so rich and detailed, so vivid and yet so subtle. And I love the way you have seamlessly intertwined the two stories. Absolutely fantastic writing, as usual, but then again, we’ve learned to expect nothing less than perfection from you. Glad you pushed past your block to bless us with beautifully drawn chapter. Thanks!
Definitely worth the wait!!! Love every word of this entire series…can’t wait for the next chapter(s)!
A really excellent chapter, Olives. God, that was great…
SNS, this was so wonderful to read…I am always a bit sad when I reach the end of one of your chapters. Love all the things Bette is working through…can’t wait to find out what her solutions will be.
oh thank you so much for update, was a good chapter, troubled for Bette’s mind, was nice the way you link it, Umbrella with this one, kinda make it more real. so give us more when you can, ok. bye :D
All of your stories are worth the wait SNS. You just have this way for writing that is soo addicting. You have me checking the boards just waiting for a post from you. Great job and Umbrella is fab by the way.
Thank you Olives for another great chapter! I’ve been anxiously waiting, was getting worried about you, thought maybe you had abandoned the story. I can’t seem to get enough of Bette and Tina. Please continue soon….
Fabulous chapter as you always have written and yes JadedRogue, I agree with ya. Every writer has different style and illuminate different sides of B&T’s relationship and it’s all worth readin.
An excellent chapter, as always. Definitely was worth the wait..
I’ll just go with everyone else. Excellent job. Will be waiting for more from you. Thanks
Thanks.. Glad your back….
Nice cross-over from Umbrella SNS. This was well worth the wait – pls keep going I love your style.
Yay! The chase is back! Excellent chapter as always! I’m really looking forward how this will all develop.Loving both your stories! Thanks!!!!
Great Olives it was worth the wait.
Love the way you are weaving Umbrella into this one. Such great flashbacks and flashforwards. Thanks for an always-worth-the-wait update.
thanks for countinuing writing of this incrediable story…BRAVO!!!
Each of your chapters is like a meditation upon a topic. This one has an inner stillness that is centered and peaceful. It’s like watching the inevitability of life, like the future is watching the past play out.
Thank you.
Thank you for another wonderful chapter.I agree with everyone. Your exquisite writing is always worth the wait.