Fan Fiction
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Story written on August 30, 2004 by Shakennotstirred.
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I am experiencing sheer erotic frustration mixed with sensual love…holy shit…how about more?
Daaaammm…this was gooooood!!!
Okay, you said, “ass” but that was the comic relief.
Can I be in your stories? I want to experience life as what your characters do.
Thanks!
Excellent! This is my favorite interpretation of Bette. Thank you.
Sounds like sexual frustration mixed with lust. Luv Bette’s POV. Please continue…
What a turn on this story is.
Well I know that someone is giving us a Tease. Very soothing and relaxing to read, almost like watching fireflies out on a summers night, or a gentle wind lettong the corn talk to us, or a gentle rain falling from the sky. Excellent chapter.
Wow what a night of seduction Bette gave to Tina. Please continue.
that was really sweet. i like how you looked at it from bettes point of view. i love this story.
Do you know what these kinda stories do to someone sexually frustrated. Ow forget it I love every minute. Sizzle.
How is it that your writing arouses us without mentioning even one explicit word or phrase?
How?
tech said it all.
all said… that was skillfully written
You had me at “Tell me what you want,” I couldn’t stop replaying that sentence in my head the whole story. I love it!
That was perfect SNS! Plenty there to arouse…but leave the rest to my imagination!
Beatiful, sensual, loving… Thanks, Olives!
Nice to see Bette’s POV. Lovely Olives
Loved it! Every detail was just sooo…. it was beautiful. Can’t wait to read more.
Thanks for Bette POV. I can’t believe that we get to read two sexy chapters in a row.
SNS you just get better and better. I could read this all day, oh wait I do read this all day. Thanks again.