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Story written on September 13, 2004 by Shakennotstirred.
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It is wonderful to see Bette being so vulnerable. Wonderful chapter.
fabolous as always! thank you and keep it coming! :)
that’s it! the communication factor will cure all. well that and alot of love. excellent olives!
Wow..thank you for the happy ending. Olives, you can write any story that your heart desires, I will read them all regardless, because I loved your writing! and I don’t care how long it is, the longer the better :-)
as usual, very impressed and hope that you don’t move over to the Umbrella series for too long…
Loved it!
Loved it!
Very intense…Bette is having a breakdown of sorts…Tina is staying strong which impresses me…so nicely done shake…love your writing…always have!
One of the best chapters EVER!
moreeeeeeeeeeee…
Two things you shouldn’t do, wait too long to post and apologize for a post being too long.
I’ve said this before but I have to tell you again, I love this story. It just runs the gamut emotionally. It breaks my heart and gives me hope all at the same time.
what else is there to say – TWoPlurker said it all. GREAT writing, SNS!!
Haha.. I’m right with you TWoPlurker on the writer’s block with. Hey, I’ve always loved your series and would wait however long it might take you. Yeah.. I agree.. Mari and other peripheral characters are nicely woven into the story. Well, well, finally Bette is having a breakdown. Good in a way because it gives an opportunity for her to live without her facade and finally let Tina in. Beautiful chapter. Waiting for the next one.
This story amazes me. I can totally feel the chemistry between Bette and Tina as you slowly paint this beautiful picture. I am absolutely captivated by this story line and your ability to relay it. As a straight girl (well at least I was until I saw JB in the L-word)I am shocked at how obsessed I have become with this whole B & T relationship. This chapter just made my week. Please don’t take too long to post as I am addicted. :)
I’m actually sitting here lost for words! That was so incredibly good – thanks!
Gorgeous…. Thanks so much Olives. As always looking forward to more.
Very Nice, I love this story. Keep up the great writing, please post soon.
Olives, your story is never long enough.I always lose myself in your writing.Thank you for giving us hope for B&T love.
you so deserved that award..u r good..and i am loving this…