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Satin Sheets – Part 3
Tina couldnt believe how amazing she felt right now. No matter how many times she and Bette made love, her body responded in ways that had her shivering days later in remembrance. Feeling Bette move those impossibly soft lips along her skin, teasing her with barely there flicks of her wicked tongue, Tina was helpless against her bodys reactions. The hair standing up along her arms only served to make her more aware of the exquisite softness of the sheets beneath her. Her nipples tightening almost painfully as they danced with the cooler air of the room, cutting in from the heat of Bettes mouth. The tickle of Bettes curls, a torture in and of themselves as they played across the sensitive nerve endings firing along her chest and stomach. And the wetness coating Bettes fingers, helpless to stop the liquid expression of her love as it bathed her wifes fingers in appreciation.
Holding her breath, Tinas ears picked up the moans coming from Bette as she kissed across her stomach and spreading her legs just a bit wider, Tina could hear the soft, wet sounds of Bette moving her fingers slowly inside her. The simple knowledge of what Bette could do with her fingers was enough to cause a little spasm in Tinas lower belly but knowing that her mouth would soon join those talented fingers was enough to set off a low, keening sound from deep within Tina.
Oh god, Bettepleaseyes, yesI love the way you feelmoving inside me, Tina whispered, the pressure in her chest growing the more Bette worked the soft velvet of her inner walls.
Her thighs flexed and trembled as she struggled to find purchase somewhere, anywhere to ground herself against the magic Bette was casting with her fingers. Tina settled for one arm bent across her forehead, grabbing the pillow behind her and the other arm down across her body, her left hand settling along Bettes cheek. Her thumb subconsciously stroking in time to the movement of Bettes fingers. She was rewarded with a kiss to her palm as Bette shifted her body further along the bed, using her free hand to move her hair back from her face and coming to rest at the delicious juncture where thigh meets hip. Placing a tender kiss there as well, Bette stroked the smooth length of Tinas thigh, all the while maintaining the loving rhythm of her fingers, quickening the pace slightly as she felt Tinas stomach tighten.
Baby, look at me. I want to see your faceyour eyes, T. I love you. I want you to see me touching youI love how wet you get for me, Bettes husky voice called to Tina.
With her brow wrinkled in concentration, Bette’s breath came faster, as the pleasure of loving Tina ignited a fire along her own body. When Tinas eyes finally came to rest on her own, the passion and love and trust she saw there almost robbed Bette of the ability to draw her next breath.
Bette, Tina moaned, rocking her hips now to the rhythm Bette was setting. Her eyelids fluttering and then closing briefly as a bead of sweat raced down her forehead. Bette used this moment to glance down, swallowing hard as she watched her wet fingers withdraw and then disappear into Tina. Bettes thumb brushed upward, exposing Tinas *****, glistening and begging for her attention.
Without another moments hesitation, Bette brought her mouth over Tinas center, nudging her soft hair with her nose and softly dragging her bottom lip across Tinas *****, expelling a rush of warm air as Tinas hips bucked towards her mouth. Stilling her fingers for the moment, Bette took just the tip of her tongue and flicked it lightly, bringing her lips close, softly kissing and sucking Tinas ***** into the warm haven of her mouth.
The moment Bettes tongue touched her, Tina knew she was lost. Her hands instinctively came down and tangled in Bettes tresses, planting her feet and curling her hips closer to that talented mouth. Her inner muscles unwittingly tugging on Bettes fingers, still motionless inside her. Bette followed her lead and began thrusting against Tina, a little harder and a little faster than before. In contrast, her tongue moved maddeningly slow. Soft and flat, Bette lapped at Tinas wetness, feeling her ***** harden with each pass of her tongue. Humming low in her throat, Bette groaned each time her tongue brushed across her own fingers moving inside of Tina, the taste of Tinas deep wetness causing Bettes own ***** to throb painfully.
Feeling Tina moving her hips faster, her fingertips tugging and releasing her curls in jerky motions, Bette decided to love her wife good and proper, bringing an end to the torment expressed in staccato breaths, ***** moans and shaking thighs. Curling her fingertips higher into Tina, Bette laid her other hand palm-down just below her wifes bellybutton, pulling up slightly. Sparing one last glance up, taking in the erotic sight of Tina staring down at her, mouth parted in panting breaths, stray locks of hair caught in the sweat running along the side of her face, the skin across her chest flushed, further accentuating the dusky nipples still vying for attention, Bette breathlessly pleaded with her wife.
Tinashityou feel ***** incredibleI want you to come for me. I want to feel yougod, I can feel you clenching against me. I want my tongue all over youIfuck. Bette didnt bother to finish.
She quickly wrapped her lips around Tinas ***** and flicked her tongue as fast as she could. Thrusting in and out, flicking Tinas hard ***** over and over and over again, Bette felt Tinas legs start to tighten and raise up, a split second before she sat up towards Bette, her head falling back, fingers flexing across Bettes scalp.
Tina felt her ***** rushing like wildfire, prickling her scalp, coursing through her body, pulsing and throbbing quicker and quicker until her whole universe centered on Bettes tongue moving and Bettes fingers moving. Her breathing hitched, everything getting pulled towards Bette, her body having no choice but to rise up towards her as well. As if curling in on herself, Tina could contain the pleasure seeming to explode in all directions at once. But she couldnt contain it. She could only focus on crying out Bettes name over and over again, trying to temper the inferno with words.
BetteBette, yespleasedont stopjust dont, I needgodyesBette!
Tina finally started to relax her body, releasing her stranglehold on Bettes hair and the sheets beneath her and easing the tension in her thighs. Soon, she became acutely aware of Bette moving up her body. Sliding warm and wet hands across her back and up under her shoulders, pressing her warm and wet mouth against her neck, softly kissing the skin there, murmuring endearments that traveled straight to Tinas heart, she felt Bette rest her body back against the bed. Settling Bette a little firmer against herself, letting the aftershocks run their course against Bettes thighs, Tina smoothed and stroked her hands over her lovers back. Thinking about how the morning had started with just this simple caress. And as she felt the soothing kisses being placed across her collarbone, Tina once again allowed her fingertips to trace along Bettes caramel skin. It was only right that they came full circle and it was time for Tina to show Bette where those fingertips were intending to go.
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(65 votes, average: 3.42 out of 5)
Oh, yes! Bette’s getting a reciporication! BTW: You and Tavy…….are the smut story tellers………Tavy better get back with more B/T SMUT……..and you better NOT Stop with the B/T SMUT! :D 5-more-stars
that was incredible. wow so fucking hot!!!
WOW!!!
Amazing, just amazing!
That’s me in the refigerator getting an ice pack.
Eeeeeee! Don’t stop now!
*high five*. that’s what i’m talkin’ about. beautifully writen. YOU rock.
Wow, just wow!!
oh WOW.
Gorgeous writing and sexy as hell!! I bow down to you!
WOW, and very very nice! Now its time for T to get to work :)
THANKS ALOT!!! Now I have to go to work after reading that. I knew I should of just left it until this evening. But hopefully when I get home there will be another chapter posted. BUt EXCELLENT writting keep it up.
That has got to be the most sexy, erotic, sensual and loving piece of I have ever read, and there are some gals here who can write…you are simply amazing…so very well written…I felt like I was in the room with them…hell on the bed with them…simply amazing…great wayt to start the day!!!
Is it HOT in here? Excellent chapter. Now it’s Bette’s turn to get some. Can’t wait.
I told my wife about you and she starting reading them. At dinner she kindof hinted that we both should call in sick tomorrow. I have you to thank
wow, that was something
DITTO to downlow95 WOW!!!! Cramit I see your a riter I’m gona have to becarful reading at work.. MY GOD!!! please continue…
Dammit…Cramit, that was the bomb. In the infamous words of Bette Porter, “I need a cigarette”!
i agree with almost everyone commenting, except gargy. this is not smut, it is out and out love, emotion and feeling. and totally erotic.
I am so happy you all are enjoying this. I have to guiltily admit that I’m having a wee bit of fun writing it. :) I’ve found such inspiration reading some of these fan fics for all these months and I’m glad that my attempt to emulate them is going okay. The writers on here take my breath away more than I can count and I’m glad I’ve gotten the opportunity to return the favor. :) Part 4 should be up later today, tonight at the latest. Thanks again for reading!!
What an erotic chapter! Now, we are waiting for Bette’s turn.
I… I… Good gawd I’m speechless – and frustrated. I really need a g/f!!!
Argh!!
All joking aside – great stuff, you take the reader right along their sexy and love filled journey – BLESS YOU!!!
Okay I am in Kinkos because I needed to print some things and I just happened to check the site and I have one thing to say ” I have never been this hot in a copy shop.” God what a story.
Beautiful writing cramit. I’m straight and you got me wanting a girlfriend. :>)
I should have learned from yesterday not to read this at work but I couldn’t resist. All I can say is “OH MY”!
wow…your use of words and imagery is absolutely amazing. your description of things and feelings and movements is like wow! keep it up! thanks for writing! i can go to bed now and see if this replays irl! :)
This is so good, I just read all three and you are wonderful!!! Thanks and keep going…
I’m with everyone else. WOW!
Just started reading your story…FUCKING HOT, is all I have to say!
um um um um…I can just imagine the sensations