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Bette
Im trying not to fall down, my knees are so week and I’m trembling. Tina has got me, she’s making love to me, more intense, more passionately, more real it seems than ever before. Shes down on bended knee, and I’m surrendering myself to her, all of me. Seems like lately, I’ve been able to do just that without my usual hesitation and fear, its like my guard is down and I find myself being able to share absolutely everything with her, and now were sharing this this mind blowing passion, heartbreaking closeness, unbreakable love.. I have no choice but to succumb to the feelings, the warm water from the shower is hiding the tears of joy swelling in my eyes running down my face. And to think only a few minutes ago, I thought I couldnt get any happier when I made love to her in our own bed. This sensation overpowers me again, my lips tremble and I try to forget my frustrations – happy frustrations about not being able to fully articulate just how deeply I love her. Im breathing heavily as shes making love to me with her mouth, her soft and tender tongue knowing exactly where to go and how to treat me, how to please me. Im so ecstatic right now, I can barely hold my eyes open, but I need to memorize and savour this moment.. Her kneeling in front of me, her golden hair wet from the water, her hands – one doing wonders together with her tongue and the other caressing my ***** and nipples. Our eyes meet as shes giving me the most spectacular pleasure, her expression full of desire and lust oh and mine too as Im seeing how her tongue eagerly exits her mouth to find my awaiting essence. My whole being is shaking with desire and I feel the familiar symptoms of an *****, but somehow I know this ones special, shes rocking my world, shes changing me, shes improving me, shes completing me and shes loving me.. I cant hold back anymore, shes sending me over the top, I succumb to a release so powerful I can feel my body contracting and embracing her tongue. She starts to lab of my juices and clean me up with her tongue and gently takes her hand away, placing tender strokes down my thighs and legs. I compose my self and cup her face, taking her up. She pulls me in for an embrace and I bury my head in her neck. She places kisses on my shoulder and whisper softly in my ear I love you so much, babe
Tina
I love her so much. Shes resting her head on my shoulder, Ive worn her our it seems and ops, she was supposed to be at work twenty minutes ago poor thing.. When we’re in each others arms like this, nothing else matters. The world could come to an end, still this would overshadow everything. I take it upon myself to assist her in getting ready, she needs it.. I start to soap her in, finding ever corner of her body, I wash her hair while she rests, eyes closed just enjoying my pampering, I gently massage her scalp and watch her relaxing while I place small kisses all over her face. The sound of the running water is all we hear, theres happy silence. This is a moment well cherish I know, Lord knows we have some fond memories to look back at, but this goes way up there. Shes all washed up and ready to dry, so I take her hand and lead her out of the shower – never mind me, I still need a cold shower after shes gone I wrap her in a soft towel, her eyes still closed and her lips curled into a tender smile, Im melting as I take in the sight of her. Shes breaking my heart, I love her so much. I lean my naked wet body next to her and plant a soft kiss on her lips, she mms. I begin to dry her, gently and tenderly, watching as her natural mocha glow emerges. Her face is completely relaxed, not a single frown, her breathing is steady and even. I know she loves me. I want nothing more than for her to love me, thats it. I wonder if its healthy sometimes, to have be so dependent.. Frankly, I dont care! I kneel down to dry her thighs and legs and feet. I rise and stand behind her, drying her back. I go in front of her again and shes aware of whats coming, she has opened her eyes. My eyes meet hers and I gently start to dry her softness. Lightly, without pressure, this time our gaze isnt filled with our usual desire and lust, we stand in silence our eyes swell with tears of love, contentment and joy go dress that beautiful body of yours honey, and Ill make you breakfast I say as I exit the bathroom wearing nothing but my wedding ring
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That is beautiful. The “wearing nothing but my wedding ring” line brought tears to my eyes. What a powerful statement. Just exquisite.
and there is a perfect example of why i hate cold showers. warm ones are so much nicer!
“…..wearing nothing but my wedding ring!” That’s my favorite line! :D 5-more-stars
All of your stories are so well written and detailed you are an excellent writer. They keep getting better if that’s possible. Please continue 5 ++++
Wow, I love Tina’s last line, “wearing nothing but my wedding ring”. What an image in my head! Thank you for such a beatiful writing.
the line now forms to the right and left for the cold shower. Love Tina leaving the bathroom wearing nothing except her wedding band. great
I know its been said a few times already, but “wearing nothing but my wedding ring” IS a great line… If I ever get married I will remember that…
Wow! what great stories, when reading them i felt as though i was in the same room watching it all with my own eyes, keep up the good writing its just great.xx
I’ve said many times EXCELLENT!!!!!
Please continue to post
So descriptive and well written. Feels like their love oozes onto the page from your words. BTW, also like your sense of humor.
Excellent doesn’t even begin to describe this!
This series is just wonderful. The last line is great.
Beautiful, 5 big stars. Keep going!
such nice comments, thanks everyone! by the way, don’t you have public showers in the US..?
“…I know this one’s special, she’s rocking my world, she’s changing me, she’s improving me, she’s completing me and she’s loving me…” Beautiful!!! Thank you!!
“I exit the bathroom wearing nothing buy my wedding ring” That was incredibly sexy and poetic…very nicely done girl!!!