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HEREAFTER. Chapter 27. Look back in.
HEREAFTER. Chapter 27. Look back in.
Flashback:
I.. dont know if I can, I dont know what came over me, I feel like I havent been myself this weeks
What are you Telling me? that this amazing woman Ive been dating was not You?
Yeah, No, I dont know Tina said defeat Thats the whole point Bette, I dont date women, I dont go kissing women, women dont make my knees weak and put my mind in overload
So what do you think this is a fluke?
Even Tina was hurt at the sound of that Bette, dont say that, I could never regret You, but I dont know if I can move forward with you
You cant or you dont want?
Jesus Bette, what do you want from me Tina yelled finally losing it
The truth Bette screamed back
The truth is that I think am falling in love with you and that scare me to dead, I ***** wet my pants and my heart jumps out my throat every time I see you, But then am invited to a business dinner, and my best friend say bring the mysterious guy you dating… and… and all of the excitement over you somehow gets overshadowed because I know I dont have the guts to show up there with you by my side, no matter how much I would want to, ***** I dont know what am saying I dont even care about those stupid dinners, but I start thinking Tina you want to have babies and then I stop right there because am thinking of a family with you after one, yeah one month of knowing you, then comes the *****, I think am going to explode if we dont do it soon, and at the same time I think that if we do it, am gonna blow my cover and you gonna realize, how much better and uncomplicated then me you could be doing and then…
Tina had to stop since the air was missing and she was on the verge of a panic attack, Bette was right there with the most frighten expression ever
Tina, Tina, calm down she said pulling Tina to her arms Baby calm down, its okay, all is fine, believe me, I know what you going trough
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I really like that you’re using flashbacks to explain why they are doing and saying the things they are. They should do this in the show…maybe we’d understand the story a little better. Great job tee.
Love Tina in this story,Bette feels guilty over Candace.Said she loved Candace but wasnt madly IN love with her,since someone else had that place.she just needs to let her self go with the flow. This a big thing for both of them.
This is just getting better. Loved the flashbacks as always, it grounds the story with context. To me, this story has just taken off. I liked the fact that you don’t make things easy for them. And I would have to agree with Katehy, the actual L Word writers should give more context to each characters. Not that it’s bad but there’s more weight to it. K, gotta bolt to work… I woke up late! :P
Just got back from a long weekend trying to catch up. Great updates!! Looking forward to more.
Why does Bette feel guilty? Candy is dead.Bette needs to move on.
ok, all caught up now. love how this story has progressed. i think i would be slipping the kids a little nyquil by now though.
Now this was good. I thought Bette was going to lose it for a minute there. But I still think it is to early. Like I have said before I love your story line. Good Job.
I love Bette and Tina action together and how Tina got so piss with that interruption. I also love the effect that Tina could leave on Bette. I just proves to us today to how strong and independent Tina can be. But I’m a drama kind of person and I like the fact that Bette was thinking about Candy.
Cheeky I know given that you have only just posted this but I need to read more! I love reading this story – the slow pace and the uncertainty that Bette feels. 5 stars well deserved as always …………….but please post another one soon. I’m counting on you to get me sacked from work reading this stuff!
I like this assertive Tina, she knows what she wants. The flashback to the original Tina was a good contrast to the confident woman of today. Good to see how they began together.
Thanks for the flashback..explaining the “scare together” so good. As always I can’t wait for your next post thanks