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Are You Gonna Finish That? – Part 8 — Sequel to Satin Sheets
Tina reached over and watched as Bette’s eyes widened, comprehension dawning as she realized where that hand was headed. Answering Bette’s smile with her own, Tina leaned in and whispered against Bette’s ear.
“Now, let me show you..”
Taking the soft lobe of Bette’s ear into her warm mouth, Tina once again ran a strawberry along Bette’s skin. Using its coolness to harden already hard nipples, loving the feel of the goosebumps she could feel breaking out along Bette’s arms, she slowly tracked the strawberry down over her wife’s belly button. Following the fine hair down to the center of both their attentions, Tina gently moved the fruit through Bette’s wetness, letting the tips of her fingers brush against Bette’s ***** with each pass of the strawberry. When she was satisfied that she had teased both the strawberry and Bette to their breaking points, she brought the wet fruit directly between her and Bette’s lips. Laying her other hand on the small of her wife’s back, pressing lightly, Tina turned the tip of the strawberry so that it was facing Bette’s mouth.
“You still want some, baby?” Tina whispered her question, her seduction starting to take its own toll on her, as she became acutely aware of the ache building between her legs. Not bothering to wait for an answer, Tina slid the strawberry between Bette’s lips and watched, enraptured, as Bette greeted Tina’s offering with her tongue.
Swirling her tongue around the tip, Bette never took her eyes off of Tina as she drew the strawberry into her mouth, severing it from its stem in a sensual closing of her mouth. Daring Tina to look away, Bette began to chew, purposely letting the juices coat the closed line of her lips. Bette licked her lips once before cupping the base of Tina’s skull and pulling her in for a frenzied kiss, passing the fruit and her wetness between them. Bette could feel Tina’s desire in the desperation behind the kiss. She knew her wife’s body almost as well, if not better, than her own. And she knew that should she reach her long fingers down between them, she’d find Tina wet and open, her ***** begging for attention. As much as she wanted Tina to make love to her again, the temptation of making Tina come was too much.
Using the kisses as distraction, Bette eased herself closer to the edge of the counter, groaning deep into the kiss as she felt Tina’s hands pulling tighter on her lower back. Untangling her fingers from Tina’s soft hair, Bette lowered her hands to the countertop, releasing Tina’s mouth from the heat of her own.
“Step back, baby.” Bette commanded softly, running her toes lightly behind Tina’s calves. She could see the hesitation in her wife’s eyes, as her body warred between wanting to touch Bette and needing Bette to touch her. Bette let her body make the decision for both of them as she eased herself down off the counter and came up flush against her wife’s body, counting on Tina’s hands to steady her as her shaky legs found purchase on the kitchen floor.
Wrapping one arm across the back of her wife’s shoulders and using the other to guide her hips, Bette spoke softly in Tina’s ear, her smooth voice roughened by desire.
“Come here.”
Kissing the side of Tina’s neck, pressing her lips against the pulse point, Bette navigated Tina’s body until she was standing before one of the dining room chairs. Pulling away from Tina, Bette eased her trim frame onto the soft cushion of the chair, her breath catching as her wetness came into contact with the smooth surface. Leaning back in the chair, Bette rested her palms along her thighs, patting her fingers and fixing Tina with a sly look.
“Come. Here.” Bette spoke, running her tongue along her bottom lip.
Tina felt helpless to do anything but submit to the sensual promises carried in the tone of Bette’s voice. Moving forward, Tina inhaled deeply as Bette brought those strong hands to her waist and guided her gently until she was straddling Bette’s warm thighs. With her weight supported easily by the muscles she could feel flexing beneath her, Tina had the delicious sensation of being completely at Bette’s mercy. Shifting until she was settled comfortably against her wife’s body, Tina planted her feet against the heavy wooden rungs of the chair, flushing suddenly as she realized the potential of this leverage.
Watching as the blush spread across Tina’s cheeks, Bette noticed her wife drop her eyes and look away briefly, an almost shy smile caressing the corners of her mouth. Taking her time as she let her thumbs start to trace small circles along her wife’s inner thighs, Bette waited for Tina to look at her again. After a few seconds, Bette gently squeezed the muscles beneath her fingers, sweeping her thumbs ever closer to Tina’s wet *****. This got her wife’s attention as Tina instinctively brought her gaze back to Bette’s, grasping her hands along Bette’s forearms.
“Mmmmm, are you playing shy with me, T?” Bette quietly asked, finally bringing her thumbs to run along the outside of Tina’s *****, taking a deep breath as she felt the dampness where thigh met the beginnings of soft curls.
Unable to break Bette’s heated stare, Tina could only shake her head no, imperceptibly gripping Bette’s forearms tighter, her own thumbs lightly digging into the crook of her elbows.
“No?” Sliding her thumbs closer together and resting the tips of her fingers along the soft outline of Tina’s stomach muscles, Bette slowly spread her wife’s wet, swollen lips, barely exposing her most sensitive bundle of nerves.
Dipping her thumbs lower, stifling a groan as they were instantly bathed in Tina’s wetness, Bette moved them painstakingly slow against Tina’s *****. She paused for a moment as Tina relinquished her hold on her forearms and slid her hands to come to rest along Bette’s neck, stroking the underside of her jaw.
“Are you sure?”
“Yesssss”
Sucking air through her teeth, Bette felt Tina’s wetness starting to spread to the webbing between her thumb and forefinger. Raising her left hand to her mouth, keeping the teasing strokes with her right, Bette slowly licked the wetness off of her palm, trailing her tongue along her thumb.
“Then why were you blushing, baby?”
“Becausebecause,” Tina groaned her answer, finding it harder and harder to formulate thoughts as Bette moved the fingers of her right hand and held them lightly against her *****, pushing two fingers in to the first knuckle.
“Because?” Bette echoed, using her left hand to pull her wife closer to her, faces only inches apart. Pushing in deeper, Bette kept her hand still, using just the very tips of her fingers to flick rhythmically against Tina’s inner velvet walls.
“I wantIplease, Bettebecause,” Tina exhaled, resting her forehead against Bette’s, looking down at those parted lips so close to her own. Sliding her hands down from her wife’s neck to grab the back of the chair, Tina pushed up on her toes a bit, tipping her hips towards Bette’s fingers, pulling them deeper inside.
“Because you wanted this.” Curling her fingers for emphasis.
“Bette”
“Tell me.” Surprising both of them a bit, Bette suddenly withdrew her fingers, holding the stillness of the moment briefly before pushing through Tina’s wetness to drive into her again. Using her other hand to support the small of her wife’s back, Bette thrust her strong fingers inside of Tina’s *****, brushing her thumb intermittently against her *****.
“I wanted”
“Tell me.”
Gripping the back of the chair even harder, Tina lifted her body, thigh muscles flexing gracefully as she pushed off the rungs of the chair with her feet. Holding herself slightly above Bette’s thighs for a brief moment, Tina looked down and held Bette’s gaze, taking satisfaction in the desire she could feel coming off of Bette in waves.
“I wantedthis.” And with that, Tina slowly drove herself down onto Bette’s fingers, moaning loudly as she felt Bette slip deep within her belly. Pushing up again, Tina arched her back, brushing the soft skin of her ***** against Bette, coming down and pulling Bette inside of her. Building a steady rhythm, grunting a bit each time those long fingers stroked deep inside, Tina rocked her body against Bette, shivering as the sound of her wetness mingled with the sunlight in the kitchen.
Bette felt her own wetness seeping from inside of her, tremors fluttering across her lower belly as she watched her wife move against her fingers. Love and desire flared hot and strong, reducing Bette to shaky breaths and answering groans. Bringing her other hand around to touch Tina, Bette pressed her thumb firmly against Tinas *****, letting her wife dictate the pace and pressure as she continued to move her hips against Bettes fingers. Watching as Tina took her pleasure, feeling her tighten around her fingers as she got closer and closer to coming, her senses inundated with the way Tina smelled, and sounded, and felt at that moment, Bette clenched her jaw as small waves of pleasure pulsed from between her legs.
Tina felt her thighs straining to maintain the pace that her body was dictating, the sunlight body glinting off the slight sheen of sweat breaking out across her body. Glancing down, Tina watched as Bettes fingers disappeared in between her legs and her thumb rubbed against where she was most sensitive, the combined sight stealing her ability to breathe. Hearing the familiar groan signaling her wifes *****, Tinas chest constricted even more, her stomach trembling in preparation for her own impending release.
Letting go of the back of the chair, Tina scraped her fingers along Bettes skull, grasping those long, curly tresses and pulling her wife in for a desperate kiss, groaning at the first touch of their tongues. The urgent desire to be filled by Bette, to be claimed by her, swept through Tinas body and finally pulled the ***** from deep inside her. Moving her hips in jerky motions, breaking off the kiss to pull Bette tighter to her body, Tina let the ***** race through her body. Pressing her lips to Bettes temple as the aftershocks tumbled over her, exhaling as Bette started to slow the thrust of her fingers before pulling out all together.
Curving her hands over Tinas back, Bette cradled her wife against her, shifting slightly so they were pressed from thigh to chest. Running her fingers along Tinas spine, mingling sweat and wetness, Bette placed soft kisses against the cheek resting near her mouth, whispering sweet, loving words. Bette nuzzled the side of her wifes neck, smiling as felt Tina turn and rest her head against her shoulder.
I love you, baby.
Mmmm, I love you too, T.
Bette?
Yeah?
Giggling now, Were gonna need another shower.
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(76 votes, average: 3.79 out of 5)
To hell with the chair… I want to be Tina. Jesus H!!!
I just have to ask, do you practice this stuff before writing it?
This was amazing – as always.
Cramit, just came back from a trip to find you posted again.
My dear God, sweet Jesus, holey f*cking Marie Magdalene and all the saints I am able to think of – your stories got me humping now – and not just the monitor but everything within reach…. I need a straitjacket NOW.
Okay here is the deal – I remember you got yourself a CD to get into the groove – please just send me a list with all the CD’s you need ASAP – ANYTHING to keep you into that groove girl…
This was so hot, it makes me want to Stop, Drop and Roll…so I can put out the flames.
Who needs a sex life when they can love vicariously through BnT? This borders on soft porn young lady (lol). Seriously Cramit, whatever, whomever your muse is, keep it around. Great work!
This is amazing and another shower, we all know what the last one was like…
Cramit you paint the sexiest pictures with your words. I LOVE the way you think and the way you write, your delivery, is so perfect. I still think you’re trying to kill me.;0)
You know, re-reading this? I can’t believe I actually wrote it. Cause like, I think it might have been a bit much, no? Even for NC-17? *shakes head* *blushes profusely* Thank god you guys are enjoying my writing. :)
As for my muse, it’s all Bette and Tina. I promise. Now, the actions? That’s just imagination. Well, imagination, years of reading other fan fiction, and the sexual tones of the trancy drum-n-bass I listen to when I write. No muse.
Though, I might take some applications if you guys think it would help…. :P *lol*
You’re the goddess.
OMFG!!!! Cramit I think I love you, I have been reading your stories for so long now, but I thought it was about time I told you how much I love you and what you write. If nothing else your work is making sure my right hands gets a jolly good work out everynight !!!:)
It is soooo refreshing (and f***ing hot) to read fic like this, it shows women getting it on the way that they should do.I love reading stuff that shows that two women can get up to much more fun then a quick hand fumble.
Tina riding Bette’s hand ??? Oh you have excelled yourself with this one, I can’t walk anymore (not that I am complaining of course)
Keep it coming girl !!!
Did I mention I love you !!!
Are you accepting marriage proposals at all ???
Had to go back to see who wrote this,Hell,girl,I’m to old for this sex,but loved it,you are good,keep on doing that and we all will need a Dr. Heart attack. Beautiful
NC–Thank you so much for your kind words. I’m flattered you took the time to leave a comment and I hope you’ll keep reading.
This is probably gonna be the only update for a little bit. At least till the beginning of next week. You guys make me grin ear to ear with your compliments and hopefully, the next couple of installments will live up to your standards. :)
And now that I’ve gotten the serious post out of the way……let’s take a poll. *grin*
In this story, would you rather be Tina or Bette? ;)
This is really not fair, my gf has been gone for 2 weeks not and won’t visit me til Monday. My Goodness!
They need a shower, I need a shower… Holy Heart Attack, Bat Man. That was just…so…good.
This is Friday morning and I need a shower again AT WORK.Too freaking hot, crammit. Thanks for TGIF chapter.
If I could speak .. I would but i can’t Hey sparta, can you aim that hose in my direction. I need to be cooled off myself.
***backsup fire brigade truck…*** gets out of truck, runs to get hose, drags it off the wheel…*trips* oops. connects to hydrant…directs hose at Bette and Tina…Jesus, you two…
off the hook as usual..truckloads of stars. can i be the chair?
*LOL* Good god… who is your muse?!
All the time, everytime, it’s just superb!
You sounded a little deflated yesterday with your comments…don’t fret my pet. You, sparta, seahurst and countless others take creative writing to a higher level! Keep it up!!!
No, my name really isn’t Tim Robbins, motivator extraordinare…*LOL*
Ok Cramit – I’ll respond to the poll question. I’d pick Tina. Something about the way she uses that yummy fruit…..
By the way – This story really rocks my world. So Beyond Excellent!
If chairs could speak…
cramit, I don’t know what I love more–your sexy stories or the hilarious comments you leave for other writers. Okay, it’s your stories, but don’t stop with the excellent comments either!
i don’t know who the hell you are, but boy would i luv to be in your kitchen!!!!!!!hot,hot,hot!!!!!
Cramit that was sooo worth waiting till today for you to post. I think I held my breath the whole time I was reading and read it too fast because I thought I would pass out from lack of oxygen. Now I have to go back and read it again much slower this time around. I agree with Sparta I too would like to be that chair. Going back up for round 2 of many I’m sure.
A shower is indeed in order! Whoa.. everyone just gets better and better!
In this story: Tina for sure
This scene seems consistent with the original characters. I could really see them doing this on the series.
NO cutting away to humping Jenny either. IC -are you listening?
I say Bette. The love of your life is hot, sweaty and suspended above you with raw need…she crashes against you time after time seeking her pleasure from you, only you. Now that’s an image that’ll have you smiling for days to weeks to come.
cramit, damnit, girl you rock! omg, you are freaking awesome. your writing gives so much imagery and sensory elements it should be illegal. you are a great writer. btw, i would be bette, for obvious reasons, but how sexy is it to have the person you love sitting in your lap while you give them the physical manisfestion of your love for them. awesome chapter. thank you for writing! :)
PHEW!!! Yummy!! A great breakfast treat as always! Thank you, Cram
Finally, I got through one of your stories with no interuptions. What a good one to finish in one sitting. I love work from home Fridays. I’m gonna go take a nice cold shower now. Cramit you are awesome. Keep the chapters coming….pun intended.
I am totally speechless…HOLYYYYYYYYYYY….
That was officially the hottest fucking thing I have ever read.
Hey There! my goodness women!!!!! No words can express what you do with these stories! and ur discriptions……. wow! oh and poll answer definetly Bette, to be able to gaze at Tina unabashedly…nice!
*running to the nearest restroom for a cold shower*…..damn I just remember I am at work…fuck!!!!