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    The Note – Part 4

    Story written on November 14, 2004 by cramit.
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    Taking Turns

    I want you. Bette whispered simply.


    Sliding her hands from their supporting position along the edge of the wall, Tina reached down, loosening the knot of the sarong. Keeping her back pressed against the wall to hold the fabric in place, Tina reached first for one string and then the other, untying the bikini top and dropping it to the side. Placing her hands back along the wall, she tipped her hips closer to her wife, letting the sarong fall forgotten at their feet.


    Then take me.


    Even as the words left her mouth, Tina felt the hot blush of embarrassment tinge her cheeks. She kept her cool outward appearance, her eyes imploring Bette to follow her command, but inside, her stomach was clenching at her boldness. Tina knew it wasn’t so much that she had asked Bette to take her, it was that she knew that Bette most certainly would. Breathing deep, Tina kept her hands braced at her sides, the air escaping her lungs in a low moan as she saw Bette’s hands start to pull at the button of her pants.


    Pulling her zipper down slowly, Bette used those few brief moments to compose the maelstrom of thoughts colliding in her head. So many different ways to honor Tina’s request and as she lowered her pants and black lace panties to join Tina’s discarded sarong, Bette was brought eye level with Tina’s ***** and all thoughts crashed together into one. She wanted her mouth on Tina, inside her, moving against her, teasing her until they both couldn’t stand it anymore. Using their clothes as a buffer against the hard floor of the deck, Bette kneeled before Tina, wrapping her arms around her waist and resting her forehead against the soft skin of her belly. Closing her eyes as she felt Tina bring her hands to play in her mahogany curls, Bette inched her lips forward until they were pressed in an open mouthed kiss, her breath tickling the fine hairs trailing towards Tina’s wet *****.


    Suspended like that, the candlelight illuminating their bodies as the shadows grew deeper around them, Bette and Tina could have been an Alcamenes sculpture. A devotee worshipping her goddess, light and dark equalized in the golden hue of the flames.


    Looking down, Tina felt the throbbing between her legs begin to pound harder at the sight of her strong, beautiful wife kneeling before her. She was about to speak, about to whisper quiet words of want and longing when she felt the first flick of Bette’s tongue against her, and all sound was caught in the tightening of her stomach muscles. Holding Bette’s head in a gentle grasp, Tina guided the movement of her mouth, directing Bette across sensitive hipbones and down along the beginning of soft curls. Tugging on the tresses trapped between her fingers, Tina pulled Bette’s head back, keeping eye contact as she brought her left hand behind her to curl along the edge of the wall. Relinquishing control to Bette, Tina passed her free hand gently over her wifes flushed cheeks and warm lips before coming to rest against the warm juncture between her legs. She began to play her fingers lightly in the damp curls, pulling up just enough for Bette to see the way her swollen lips glistened in the candlelight.


    You know, Tina confessed. Ive been thinking about you all day. Seeing the transformation taking place across her wifes face as she watched Tina barely touching herself, Tina had to fight the urge to release her hold on the wall and just put Bettes mouth where she wanted it most. But she was determined to see this seduction through and so she continued running her fingers against her *****, the short curls twining cat-like between her fingers.
    Spreading her legs a little wider, Tina let her eyes close as pressed down lightly with her middle finger, groaning as the awareness of what she was doing intensified. Even with her eyes closed, Tina could see Bette kneeling there, both of them surrounded by candles, Bettes curls falling in gentle waves over her sculpted shoulders, framing a face that was flush and tense with desire. Tina began to rock her hips ever-so-slowly with each soft pass of her finger through her wetness, letting her head loll back, the tips of her hair brushing lightly against her shoulder blades. Opening her mouth to whisper to her wife, Tina felt the instant tightening and tingling of her chest as Bettes tongue began to lick at the wetness shining along the inside of her thighs. With her mouth still parted, Tina dropped her head back down, immediately falling into the dark gaze of her wife, the fire in her belly sparking hotter as Bette gently took a hold of her wrist. Tina was grateful for the wall supporting her as Bette slowly removed her slick finger from between her swollen lips and brought it to her mouth.


    Bette, god


    Letting her eyes stray to Tinas *****, Bette opened her mouth, sliding Tinas finger along her tongue, closing her lips and gently sucking. She wanted Tina to feel that pull deep inside her, to feel it race along her stomach and tighten her nipples. And hearing her wife inhale sharply above her, Bette knew that she was feeling it. Releasing Tinas finger from her warm mouth, Bette placed a loving kiss along the inside of her wrist before dropping Tinas hand to her side. Shifting her knees closer to Tinas legs, Bette spared a quick glance at her wife, her breath rushing from her chest at the naked desire she saw there.


    Without preamble, Bette leaned forward, her thumbs parting Tinas wet lips as she moved her tongue in deep lapping strokes, groaning deep in her chest as Tinas wetness invaded her senses. The way she tasted against her tongue, the smell of her arousal mixing with the scent of the candles all caused a delicious pulsing between Bettes legs. Sliding her fingertips lower, Bette held Tinas thighs wider, pressing her thumbs higher and exposing her hard *****. Over and over, Bette ran her tongue against it. Feeling Tinas ***** slide against her top lip as she pushed deep inside. Feeling the smoothness of it as she sucked her ***** between her pursed lips. Loving the way Tina bucked her hips and tensed her thighs as she flicked it with her tongue, her warm breath washing over wetness. Moving her hands to hold firm against Tinas hips, Bette stilled the movement of her tongue, laying it flat against Tinas *****, moaning as her wetness slid across her chin.


    Looking up briefly, Bette spoke in a rough whisper, feeling her own wetness coat her thighs as Tinas intense stare greeted her.


    Move for me.


    Keeping her eyes locked with her wifes, Bette moved her tongue forward, keeping just the tip of it against Tinas hard *****. Matching Tina groan for groan, Bette felt her own ***** pulsing in sympathy as Tina took her pleasure, rocking her hips up and down along Bettes tongue, her thighs tensing and trembling with the effort. Bette could feel the sweat breaking out along her back as the heat from the candles seemed to intensify, seeming to burn brighter until all she could see was Tinas golden body above her. Seeing Tina, with her face flushed with desire, her mouth parted, breathless moans escaping with each touch of her ***** against Bettes tongue, Bette felt her fingers curl, gripping Tinas hips tighter.


    Yeahyeahyes, Bette. Tina moaned over and over again, fighting hard to keep her eyes open, to keep them focused on her wife, breathtaking in the candlelight before her. She felt the tingling in her belly the quicker she moved, the harder she pressed against that wicked tongue. Her ***** pulsed and tightened against Bettes mouth, releasing honeyed wetness from deep within her. Tina felt her ***** rushing against her skin and shakily brought her hands to tangle in Bettes curls, pulling her mouth tighter against her *****, loving the way Bette pushed deep with her tongue and never stopped moving.


    Flinging her hand back against the wall, Tina rode out her *****, biting her lip as Bette lapped against her wetness, caressing her hands over the muscles fluttering in her belly. Just when she thought that she could take no more, Bette was suddenly before her, drawing her against her warm, sweaty body. Pressing her wet mouth against Tinas neck, Bette wrapped her arms around Tinas waist, moving her back against the wall and holding her in a full body caress. Tina could feel her wifes heart pounding against her chest, could feel the want and need in the way she moved her hips against her in subtle motions, even as she kissed gently against the side of her neck. Running her hands along those strong shoulders, Tina brought her hands to cup the underside of Bettes skull, raking her nails slightly as she brought her lips to Bettes ear.


    Baby?


    Hmmm?


    My turn.

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    1. Moving her hands to hold firm against Tina’s hips, Bette stilled the movement of her tongue, laying it flat against Tina’s clit, moaning as her wetness slid across her chin.

      **falls to floor**

      blushing….

    3. I was already gone and then I got to “Move for me”.
      Oh.My.God.
      Thanks for posting this on Sunday when I can read it at home and not at work….cause you know how I’m accident prone when I read your stuff at work.
      I’ll be looking for the next note.
      P.S. Don’t forget your other story, I believe Bette and Tina are still waiting to be rescued from the kitchen chair!

    5. This was so juicy!!!Now I’m not sure which is more lucious, your story or your sparing in the comments section. Now when do we see”note 5?” Very erotic and tantalizing. Now I’m sitting her at the desk ( by the way is very nice) in my Hotel room, and berating my self for reading it. I knew from the get-go that it was on the rise, but know I didn’t listen to that inner voice that we all have. Now I have to prepare my self to give two lectures tomorrow, and now I find myself in need to go to the exercise room and work this story out of my mind. Excellent chapter. So looking forward to”note 5″ .

    12. OH MY FREAKING GOD!!! I can’t believe I won something. I’m speechless. Thank you so much to the judges. I don’t even know how to thank you. I’m dumbstruck. I’m up there with Olives and Sparta and Marie and Sea and the L Wankers. I….I’m…..*faints*

    17. Hey Cramit…congratulations right back at you!!! I know that I don’t comment on your stories…but that is because my brain usually short circuits halfway through one of your chapters…any chapter!But know that I am here, reading every single one…sometimes more that once! Thanks!!

    18. Congrulations!!! I just got in from doing my work out and seen the announcements when the web page came up. I’m not going to read this again tonight. especially when I have to get up at 6 a.m. east coast time. Again congrulations.

    19. Cramit, cramit, cramit, let me count the ways. Wait, I lost count, completely, right about here “Then take me.” Lordy, lordy, you know how to bring it girl. And there is no doubt in my mind why you won an award. Damn . . . that was smokin. . .

    22. Skip, y tu tambien, amiga. :D Your name will be up there next time, I bet. :D Thanks for compliment!

      And jax, thanks for the bubbly. There’s a good chance that I’d need to hit them with it, rather than serve them, for me to be able to tell them. Unconscious confessions are still confessions, right? :P

    23. LOL…I know where you are coming from…I can’t tell any of my friends how they are missing the incredible talent that posts here without them looking at me with a raised eyebrow!

      Sorry you can’t share this with your “real” friends…I think that they would love you regardless ’cause you are just too damn adoreable…and talented. I’m sending you a bottle of Dom Perignon 1965…liquor up your buddies and then show them what u can do!

    26. Congratulations Cramit!! You are up there with Olives and Sparta and Marie and Sea and the L Wankers because you belong there. It is so well-deserved.

    27. firstly CONGRATULATIONS on the award totally deserved in my eyes. second i remind myself everyday don’t read this at work but then i can’t help myself and read and then have to go out of the office or hide under my desk for the next 20mins and i tell myself girl stop reading it at work wait until you are at home. But really honestly could you wait no not possible not gonna happen not noe not never got to read it as soon as i see it. Congrats again. and thanks for writing such hmmm emontionally tapped stories. grazie, tips hat and leaves some chocolates

    28. firstly CONGRATULATIONS on the award totally deserved in my eyes. second i remind myself everyday don’t read this at work but then i can’t help myself and read and then have to go out of the office or hide under my desk for the next 20mins and i tell myself girl stop reading it at work wait until you are at home. But really honestly could you wait no not possible not gonna happen not noe not never got to read it as soon as i see it. Congrats again. and thanks for writing such hmmm emontionally tapped stories. grazie, tips hat and leaves some chocolates

    30. Thank you guys SOOOO much. :D It’s crazy cause noone in my “real” life knows I write this so I can’t share with anyone. *lmao* I’m glad you guys are here so I can share it with you.

      Which, is kind of redundant since you’re obviously all here if you’re reading my stories. So I’m sharing anyway.

      Whatever. You know what I mean. :D

      Thanks!!!

    31. Did I just read “Move for me”, holy crap Cramit! I’m glad I was out of town for the weekend so I didn’t break my refresh button looking for this chapter. Congrats on your Fanfic award! You totally deserve it, you are an amazing writer. I wish I could share your stories with my “real” life friends too, but like you I’m a closet fanfic reader. After you call your mom will you give mine a call too and break the news to her about my addiction to L Fanfic? Thanksss that would be great. :) Now march your little ass over to your computer and get to writing.

    32. Congratulations, Cramit! This chp just goes to prove that when your readers are fainting half-way through…you’re on the right track.
      omg, move for me had me going blue from holding my breath.

    36. Congratulations on your award…I’m so proud of you!!!

      And as for this fic ~Blushes slightly~ It was amazing….~Day dreams about the next chapter~

      mmmmm I can only imagine ;)

      and in the wise words of Shane ~See now that gives me hope…Knowing that two people have been in a relationship for so long, can still make each other happy.~

    39. gentle wind, who gives a shit what you think! I think that your comment was rude and unnecessary. It’s obvious to me, as well as the other 30+ commenters, that Cramit is very talented. And at what name can I read some of your work? Because it’s just plain stupid to criticize someone if you don’t write yourself. So, in closing, shut the FUCK up!

    40. It’s okay, fizzle. You get mad love for defending me. :)

      I can’t say that it makes me feel good, but you are entitled to your opinion, gentle wind. I can only hope, as a writer, that you are basing this opinion on all my stories, and not just this chapter. If your opinion remains the same, then that’s just the way it will be. Not everyone is going to like everything that someone wrote. Such is life. :)

    43. (From the depths of pure sarcasm…) I really don’t understand how you won an award for best SEX…please…I really don’t get it…<>…I didn’t feel a thing…<>>…nope nada…<>…not even warm…<>…oh well I’ll have to read another chapter…<>…seriously cramit…daaaayyyyuuummmm!!! You’re not just good at the sex and seduction…you are one very articulate writer…thank you.

    44. Whats with the rude commenters today? First Sparta and now Cramit, thats just wrong. Just ignore them you and Sparta know we all have mad love for you and your writing. Frickin rude people. :(

    45. I almosted missed this one. I’m glad I didn’t. Okay lets see that’s strawberries, decks, and candles. Every time I see these things I will not only blush but I may have some kind of naughtly physical reaction. Cramit you are too much but not enough. I wish you were pocket sized then I could take you wherever I go. Second thought maybe that’s a bad idea. Please keep these well written vivid stories coming. COngrats on your award its very well deserved!!!!

    46. I’m still giddy. :D And I’m so conflicted, cause I can’t tell anyone. *lol*

      Mom? I won this online award for writing lesbian erotica based on the lesbian show The L Word. Tell daddy. Thankssss.

      Oy. *lolol*

    47. OMG Cramit! This story is so Hot. I lost it with Tina saying ” Then Take Me” and lost it once more when Bette said ” Move for me” You totally deserve the award for best SEX! Keep the chapters coming. I cant wait to read more! CONGRATS on the Award

    49. Cramit, your work is amazing! 30+, 40+… your talent makes all us L-chicks (slurp) drool. Visually stunning — my mind and body blaze as I read your work. Congrats on your award and keep up the DELICIOUS work!

    51. right…so….hum…hot sex tangled with beautiful love… brilliantly written….amazing…thank you for this story. Hope to read some more very very soon :)

    52. I’m ashamed to admit that I’d partially forgotten about this story. Fortunately, I’d only missed this one and out of the 5 chapters and I’m about to read the new one. Whoa! That was hot. Too hot for 6:56AM.

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