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6 Months- chapter 71
Tina heard the animalistic growl in Bettes voice. She knew this Bette, may not have seen her in a while, but certainly knew this Bette.
She always felt that Bette had to control her sexual appetite to a certain degree, afraid to fully unleash her prowess while they were making love. Tina had never encouraged this containment, actually wished for nothing to be held back, but it was all dependent on Bette and how she felt at the moment.
The times that Tina was able to pull out everything that Bette had to offer from a physical encounter, she was left speechless, her body not returning to her for hours. When Bette got that look in her eyes, that growl in her voice, Tina knew that she would need to prepare herself for turning her body completely over to Bette, releasing all ownership to her own being as Bette was in control of Tinas every response, both physical and mental.
And that was what she was seeing now. Bette simply leaned above her, looking deeply in her eyes, and that was all it took for Tinas breathing to become erratic and labored.
How does she still do this to me? she thought to herself.
Bette just calmly laid herself out on Tinas body, watching her pulse quicken and breathing accelerate in anticipation.
She leaned her head down so that she was whispering directly in her ear and said, Are you ready, T?
Yes, baby she hoarsely responded.
Are you sure? teased Bette.
*****, Betteplease. You know I am.
That I do, T, that I do she smiled, bringing her face so that it was facing Tinas. She leaned down, running her tongue down from her temple to run the length of her chin.
Tina began to slowly move her hips in a rhythm that she was setting, being neither accelerated nor slowed down by Bette, who was taking her own time, almost ignoring Tina and her bodys responses.
She returned to Tinas ear and began sucking on the lobe while intermittently, sticking her tongue into her ear, slowly pulling it in and out.
Tinas breathing was becoming even more erratic and the movement of her hips was beginning to take on a life of their own.
Bettes hands had remained on either side of Tinas head. Tina reached for one and moved it down to her breast, pleading for Bette to touch her there. Bette quickly pulled her hand back and moving away from her ear while looking into her eyes, simply said, T, youre not running this show. Ok?
Betteits just that
No, T. Like I said, youre not in charge here. Do you understand me? she reinforced.
Yes she whimpered.
Seeing Tina acquiesce, Bette leaned down and finally placed her lips on Tinas. Tina immediately opened her mouth to accept Bettes kiss. She placed her hands on the back of Bettes head, forcing her deeper into Tinas mouth.
They devoured the others mouth as Bette finally allowed her hands to begin roaming Tinas undulating body.
Bette rolled off of Tinas body, ending the kiss while Tina continued to grab onto her, wishing her to stay.
Bette rolled on her side, facing Tinas body. She needed to slow things down as she wanted to draw this experience out for as long as either woman could take it.
Tina turned her head and watched Bette watching her. She then turned on her own side, trying to capture Bette again who simply placed a hand on Tinas chest and instructed, Stay there.
Tina rolled back to her previous position and waited for Bettes next move. She saw the intense desire in Bettes eyes and knew that she was biding her time, trying to draw out this experience. Tina would normally love this extreme foreplay, but her body was aching. Her ***** was pounding and she felt her wetness seeping through her lips, to just pool on the sheet beneath her.
Bette, who had pretty much kept her hands to herself up to this point, reached over and languishly ran them up and down Tinas ribcage, slowing to trace every rib, running her fingers slowly up and down each one. She made her way to her breastbone and watched Tina trying to unsuccessfully control her breathing.
Tina could not tear her eyes off of Bette. She was fascinated at the amount of control that Bette was exhibiting and her ***** throbbed in response.
Bette took in the hardened nipples in front of her and lightly allowed one of her fingertips to slowly and lightly trace a circle around one of them.
Tina gasped at the light touch, raising her chest in hopes of Bette taking it in her mouth or at least, hardening the touch. Bette just removed her hand, running it up and down her side.
God damnit, Bette Tina moaned in frustration. Please
Bette leaned down and placed another scorching kiss on Tinas lips, this time holding nothing back, allowing her tongue to deeply penetrate Tinas mouth, fighting with Tinas for control and ownership.
While still kissing her, she returned her hand to Tinas breast and began to roughly twist and turn her nipple between her thumb and forefinger. When that did not appear to be enough, she covered her entire breast with her hand, roughly massaging Tina into a state of absolute arousal.
Tina peeled her lips away from Bettes in order to try and capture a breath.
Oh *****, baby she moaned as the sensation of the pulling of her nipple echoed the pulsing of her *****.
She put her hands on either side of Bettes head and pushed her mouth down to her erect nipples.
Please baby, put them in your mouth, suck em she pleaded.
Bette did not need to be asked twice. Keeping her hand on her right breast, she lowered her mouth to her left breast, and using her tongue, drew slow, tortuous circles just along the very tip of the nipple. Tina again, raised her chest and tried to push Bettes head down to make her take more, but Bette was not going to be rushed.
She moved from the left breast over to the right, again only allowing the tip of her tongue to come into contact with the very tip of her nipple.
Tina brought her own hand to her left nipple in hopes of touching herself, but Bette roughly forced her hand away, grasping both of Tinas wrists in her own, forced them against the mattress and with her face only inches from Tinas, said in a guttural voice, Do you not remember what I said, T?
Yes, baby. I just want you so much she panted.
And you will have me came the reply.
Both women laid there, chests heaving, sweat beginning to appear on both of them, and the look that they shared, spoke volumes to what they were feeling. They each knew that they belonged to the other and that no matter what was to ever happen between them, they would always be there for the other.
There was never a time that trust was more evident then when they were making love to each other and the trust that they currently saw in the others eyes, was back, perhaps even stronger than before.
Bette leaned down, kissing Tina slowly at first, still holding onto her wrists and then, just as suddenly, released her wrists while deepening the kiss and returned her hands to Tinas body.
Tina ran her hands up and down Bettes back furiously as Bette began to move her lips away from hers.
Bette had one knee in between Tinas legs and her thigh was beginning to slowly and almost imperceptibly, grind into Tinas center.
She moved down Tinas body to return to her *****. This time, there was nothing light about the contact between her mouth and Tinas nipple.
She forcefully sucked it deeply into her mouth, holding it hostage while her tongue roughly attacked the hard nub, using her teeth to run up and down the length of the nipple.
Oh God, Bette Tina loudly moaned, pushing Bettes head harder against her breast. She was moving her hips up and down trying to capture any part of Bettes body in order to make contact with her pulsing *****.
***** she moaned as she draped a hand across her face.
Bette replaced her mouth with her fingertips on Tinas nipple as she moved over to the other one. She felt Tina grinding into her and knew that she was not going to be able to draw this out much longer. Tina had been ready to come while she was making love to Bette and she knew that it was taking all of her self control and stamina to hold off as long as she had so far.
She lifted her head from Tinas chest and looked at her lover. Tina turned her head down to Bette and weakly smiled at her. Her face was awash in perspiration and desire and the combination had Bettes ***** throbbing as well.
She removed her eyes from Tinas and continued moving down her body. She could smell Tinas arousal, just as she had before, but this was even stronger. She took her tongue and ran it down her stomach, allowing it to enter her sensitive belly button. Tina shook in anticipation, knowing where Bette was heading.
She instinctively opened her legs for Bette and the aroma that escaped from Tinas lips, had both women gasping for air.
Bette had moved no further than her belly button, but decided to re-start her journey down Tinas body.
She intentionally steered clear of Tinas throbbing center but allowed her eyes to take a quick look.
She saw that her lips were swollen and glistening from all of the wetness seeping outside. The sight alone was enough to make Bette come, but this was not about her. She needed to please Tina in a way that she never had before and was determined to not stop until she was sure that that had happened.
She dragged her tongue away from her center and down the length of Tinas leg.
Bette she moaned, realizing that she was moving away from where she wanted her most.
Tina reached down, trying to capture some of her hair in order to bring her back up to her center, but Bette was already down to her feet, taking in toe by toe, sucking each one into her mouth.
The sensation of having her toes sucked by Bette was almost too much for her to handle.
*****, Bette she panted as she sat up and watched Bette sucking on every toe, running her tongue in between every one. The sensation she felt just reminded her of how much she wanted Bettes tongue on her *****, running it in between her lips, up and down, in and out of her.
Bette watched Tina out of one eye as she continued to work on her feet, about to make her way back up her other leg. She saw Tina sitting up, hair disheveled, sweat running between her ***** as she panted for air.
She has never looked more beautiful she thought to herself.
Baby she moaned, as she watched Bette slowly make her way back up her body.
Tina propped her upper body on her elbows and watched Bette do what she did best. Tina always loved watching Bette going down on her. Watching her tongue going in and out of her, watching her suck her ***** deeply into her mouth alone was enough to send her over the edge.
Bette finally made her way up Tinas body to where her mouth was hovering over Tinas swollen lips.
This time, she allowed herself to look closer at Tina, seeing the pool of liquid on the sheet below Tinas *****.
*****, T whispered Bette. “I dont think that I have ever seen you this wet before. Is it for me? Are you this wet for me, T?”
“Yes, baby. Only for you and all for you” she barely managed to get out in between gasps for air.
She eased her body back onto the bed, knowing that she didnt have the strength to hold herself up.
Bettes warm breath tickled the sopping wet curls surrounding Tinas opening. She lightly ran her tongue over the curls, not making contact with Tinas lips.
Betteplease she moaned, thrusting her hips in the air, trying to make contact with Bettes mouth.
Bette just watched Tina beneath her and realized that she had never seen this level of desire or want from her partner of almost 8 years. Tina was almost crazed with need and this alone was sending pangs of desire coursing through Bettes own body.
This time, she lowered her mouth and allowed her tongue to make contact with Tinas swollen lips. Tina groaned in response, reaching for Bettes head to bring her in even closer.
Yes she moaned, earnestly thrusting her hips now.
Bettes tongue finally penetrated Tinas lips and was met by a torrent of hot liquid.
Jesus, T she moaned into her center, youre so wet.
Bette reached for Tinas hand, removing it from her head to join her mouth at Tinas center.
Feel this T, feel how wet you are she said as she placed Tinas fingers between her wet lips.
Oh God she almost cried. Bette, I cant take any more. Please
Bette moved Tinas hand out of the way and lowered her head back to her opening. With two fingers, she opened Tina up, seeing for the first time, her throbbing ***** not but inches from her face. She saw all of the wetness, enticing and teasing Bette to enter her, to feel her and to taste her.
Not able to hold off any longer, she dove in attacking Tinas rock hard *****. Tinas gasped at the contact, thrusting her hips deeply into Bettes face as she put her hands on the back of Bettes head, trying to increase the contact.
Bette lapped at the juices that were swirling between Tinas lips, taking her ***** deeply into her mouth as she sucked, over and over again, pulling moans and screams from the depth of Tinas body.
She pulled back momentarily to gauge Tina and saw that she was going to come any moment.
The thrusting of Tinas hips in the air had increased to a tempo that belied the fact that she was no longer in control of her body. Bette and her actions had taken complete control of Tina, and she was just trying to ride it through.
Bette returned her mouth to Tinas center and at the same time, plunged three fingers deeply inside of her while taking her swollen ***** back into her mouth. Not hearing anything from Tina, Bette looked up at her and saw that she had her head pushed back against the pillow and with the veins bulging in her neck, knew that she had not taken a breath, hips extended in the air.
Suddenly, Tina found her breath and started to ***** Bettes mouth and hand with everything that she had. She was outside of her body, being driven by a force that she had no control over.
She reached her hand down between her legs, grabbing Bettes wrist and tried to push her in further. Bette allowed her to do as she pleased, use her hand, her mouth, whatever was needed to bring this ***** on to Tina.
Oh God, Bette she moaned as she held onto Bettes wrist, willing it faster and deeper with every stroke.
Baby, I cant hold on much longer she said through ragged breaths.
Bette increased her tempo on both her ***** and her hand movement. She turned her fingers so that they were rubbing against Tinas front wall, knowing that any attention there would bring her over the edge.
She began to lightly nibble her *****, drawing it between her teeth, teasing, pulling and then returning to sucking on it.
Oh God, Bette! Im going to come, baby. Please dont stop, oh God, Bette
Suddenly, Tinas interior muscles came slamming down on Bettes hand, making her current tempo difficult.
She continued to suck Tinas ***** until Tina began to pull on her head, begging her to stop.
Bette she gasped, trying to get back her breath. Come here, baby she whispered, pulling her up to her.
Bette climbed back up Tinas body, leaving her hand deeply inside of her. Tina pulled her into her arms, closing her thighs to keep Bettes hand inside.
Bette felt the tremors still pulsating around her fingers and smiled at knowing that Tina had experienced such a strong *****.
Bette pulled back a bit to look into Tinas eyes.
Was that ok? she asked somewhat sheepishly.
Ok? questioned Tina. There was nothing ok about that Bette. It was ***** amazing she said almost in wonderment.
Yeah? she smiled into Tinas eyes.
Yeah replied Tina, returning the smile.
Tina rolled the two of them over, while Bettes hand was still inside of her.
Bette merely raised an eyebrow in response as Tina began to slowly grind her hips into Bette.
She lowered her head and kissed Bette deeply while still moving her hips against Bettes hand.
We have a lot of catching up to do Tina said suggestively, raising an eyebrow at her partner.
Sowhere do we start? asked Bette, playing along with Tina.
Id say heres as good as place as any said Tina, voice thickening with renewed desire, as she lowered her lips to Bettes nipple, sucking it into her mouth.
Yeah, T gasped Bette. Id say thats a good place to start
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(75 votes, average: 3.89 out of 5)
My. God. *thud*
The road leading to this has been incredible and I want to thank you from the bottom of everything that I am for writing this beautiful tale and for giving your readers this reconcilliation. You ROCK!!! 5 stars!
Oh. My. God. MY head is buzzing no wait my whole entire being is buzzing! You so rock! 5 hundred million stars! Yes, what a fine Tuesday afternoon. Thank you x10000 for writing this chapter and this story!! WOW!
Ok .. I’m done .. going home for my cold shower now.
Awesome so great
Oh God… the story build up is amazing. You rock! Fantasm (fantastically awsome). Yeah, I know it’s not a word… but my word. K, heading for cold shower now.
OMG! Really great and HOT! Now I will need a very, very cold shower..
I am speechless. That was beyond amazing. Jesus, I need to go and sit in a tub full of ice to cool off. That was incredible. Thanks Skip!
Okay. Hypothetically speaking, is it a bad thing if you are suddenly unable to blink or swallow? I mean, does that indicate some kind of long-term neurological damage? Just curious… Thank you, thank you, thank you. And, again, thank you.
Wow that was some journey you have taken us on to get them to this point you did a wonderfful job Please continue…
that was absolutely great – one of the best written chapters – so hot and so real!
It’s 40 degrees outside and I just turned on the a/c!
WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Good god, skipton! I’m still trying to catch my breath. Sheesh!
Skip, I have never felt so intimately engrossed with any type of writing as I have yours-I feel as if I’m there with them (as we all want). I am truly amazed and thankful at the same time. This is extraordinary. Keep it and them coming.
ok sold shower….i need a cold shower after reading this
ok sold shower….i need a cold shower after reading this
Gawd Skip…talking about writing towards a climax…I think I forgot my name and my address…all I could think of while reading was “keep breathing, keep breathingâ€â€¦
Oh my goodness, your number one fan needs to take a deep breathe, print the story and read it later when she gets home…….!!! Hot, Hot F**** hot…
Thanks for the update, life can go on until the next time
Thank you, Skipton.I can’t find enough words to say how much I love your writing and this story. Like I said before,the buildup was almost unbearable.But, the reconciliation chapters were so worth it.I have to salute your talents in writing NC-17 as beautiful as the G rate chapters. Let’s bring on the all night long.:)
Its raining here so I;m going outside to get a cold shower. I agree with all the other ladies.I got to go and set in the rain at 45degreeS wow___hot damn
Damn that was so hot!!! I’m with down low, where’s the tub of ice, I need it NOW!!! Well worth the wait!!!
My… is all I can say just about to go running what a warm up.
Bows to you Skip.
hmmmmm, that was very good, very good indeed. i liked
this is one fucking amazing story…WOW!!!!
grinning like a chesire cat…hot hot hot!
*looks to the heavens sighing* ah skip… how do i love thee, let me count the ways… five stars is not enough for this kind of writing. absolutely amazing and i didn’t get a nose bleed this time, but now i need a shower! thanks for writing such amazing tales and stories. you are truly gifted beyond anything imaginable. :D
Skipton… all along I’m always in favor for the slow mating dance thingy *grin * and the build up was so worth the wait! Goodness me! This few chapters was so… so…so… incredibly HOT I’ m lost for words at the way you handle all these hot and heavy stuff you do it with such grace, style simply put Skipton… you’re a pro at what you do… you should seriously consider to write full time I’ll say it again I’d gladly pay to read your stuff! Thank you for this delicious sizzling treat! I’m off to the office and boy! am I glad I did not read it in the office and now I really, really need to get a COLD shower (smile) a cold shower mind you at this time of the day and it’s only 7.00Am in the morning LOL.
Thank you for sharing this precious read with us!
OH MY GOD!!!!! LOVE this story – thank you so much for writing it – 10 stars
“Bette climbed back up Tina’s body, leaving her hand deeply inside of her.” and
“Tina pulled her into her arms, closing her thighs to keep Bette’s hand inside.” and
“Tina rolled the two of them over, while Bette’s hand was still inside of her.”
You are too real for words.
Oh My Fuckin God….this is so hot….you are a goddess….
My breathing still hasn’t returned to normal. Thank you for this chapter and this series. Outstanding writing…heart pounding reading.
Goodness! You should have put a damn warning on that. What I wouldn’t give to play the part of Tina in this story…lol!
Skipton, my last comment was meant as a compliment. There really are no words…
Just wanted to clear that up. Thanks.
Wow! This story has been such a great journey. I’m sorry to say I discovered it a little late, but have enjoyed catching up during the past several weeks. The dialogue you write for these characters is so believable, as is the emotional back and forth as they carry each other through such a tumultuous time in their relationship.
As for the last couple of chapters, this story was G/PG rated for so long that I really didn’t know what to expect when the time for the … uh … ahem … actually came along. DAMN! That’s all I can really coherently say at this point. Lots of stars for you, Skipton. Lots of cold showers for me.
Techgal- I would take it no other way!!!
What a beautiful, fun, & sexy love scene!
DAMN, DAMN, DAMNNN! I loved the last few chapters and these last two were incredibly hot. I echo everything everyone else has stated.
Sorry for not being able to read your updates sooner; I’ve been MIA due to a major move. I’m slowly getting back on track, so keep up with the submissions!
It was outstanding the first three times I read it…just read it again…I think it gets better and better as the words and the emotions marinate. Thank you for putting us in the room.
Skip you wrote this three years ago and I loved it then. Now it is a classic. I have read this whole series now about 11 times. It is just that good. We should have a Hall of Fame for writers you would be the first writer inducted. I’m an old friend with a new name. Best to you and your family.