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It’s a Thin Line: Alice and Dana (6)
Chapter 6 Danas eyes were hopelessly locked on Alices. The sensation of Alices warm plush breast beneath her hand and Alices long gentle fingers guiding her unsure movements was just too much to take. Alice wrapped her fingers around Danas and together they began to trace small delicate circles around her very excited nipple. At first their movements were slow and fragile, but as they became more confident and comfortable, the pace began to increase, the intensity picked up. Breathing became a chore, as their lungs were hijacked by the adrenaline short circuiting their systems. Alice released Danas hand, and Dana began to explore Alices body with more confidence. Left breast, right breast, top, bottom, fingertips, palm, Danas hands slowly and confidently inched along Alices torso, finding all the peaks and valleys shed imagined, and a couple shed never expected. Alice closed her eyes and continued to relish in the physical sensations that surrounded her; the firm give of Danas back, the warmth and tenderness of Danas hand, the cool air assaulting her bare stomach. Dana lifted herself onto her elbow; she needed to kiss Alice, needed to feel her excitement and arousal. The kiss was instantly passionate, both women dove in, tongues flashing left to right, in and out, teeth gently pulling lips. Danas hand was still assaulting Alices senses. After teasing a nipple; pinching, tugging, flicking, Dana would retreat, massaging Alices stomach, moving lower and lower until her fingertips barely brushed Alices soft curls. Holy *****. I know I thought slow would be good, but Im dying. When is she going to do it. Shes teasing me, and shes good at it. Dana go for it! Alice had no idea that just hands, touching, moving could be so exciting. The fact that it was Dana, someone she knew so well, someone she was so comfortable with, she wanted Dana to touch her everywhere. She watched as Dana examined the pale skin of her stomach. This is Alice. This is Alices body. Shes breathing so heavily, so sporadically. She likes it. Okay, what next… I want to see her. Will she be okay with that? Dana was enjoying herself immensely; teasing Alice, finding her buttons her sensitive spots. Dana timidly looked up at Alice, who opened her eyes with some effort and they made eye contact. In a shy asking sort of way, Dana began to lift Alices shirt, exposing her skin to the cold afternoon air and the dim sunlit room. Alice bit her lower lip, nervous and a little self conscious for the first time in a long time, but she wanted Dana to see her, all of her. Alices ***** were bigger than Dana had expected, they seemed to fit perfectly in her eager hand. As Alice watched, Dana slowly trailed her lips down Alices chest making their way ever so slowly toward Alices small pink target. At this point Alice knew she would surely die if Dana didnt instantly satisfy her craving. So, she gently placed her hand behind Danas head and guided her warm lips to the ultimate destination. Dana seemed to react to the suggestion. She quickly grasped Alice between her lips, tugging just enough to send a small tremor through Alices body and a rush of lust through Danas being. Alice needed more, her body was on fire. She pulled Dana on top of her, up to meet her waiting lips. Gently, but purposefully Alice rolled Dana onto her back. As she did this Alice sat straight up, and slowly removed her sweatshirt. Danas eyes didnt pop out of her head as expected. She had a look of admiration of respect and of longing in her eyes, but she looked so calm and supportive. Ahhh!! What kind of look is that? Ive never seen that before? Whats she thinking? Shes staring at me, but hum she looks so happy. Alice decided it was time for her to get a peek at what Dana was hiding behind that thick fleece. Slowly Alice lowered herself to Danas stomach, and began kissing and massaging her firm abs. Her hands quickly began to work their way up, finger tips trailing along Danas small *****, teasing, tempting. Dana couldnt wait anymore, she wanted to feel Alices skin against hers, so she went for it. She slowly sat up, and removed her own shirt. Alice simply looked on, awe struck and baffled. Hum initiative and balls. Unexpected but NICE. Alice was very turned on by Danas not so subtle hint. Just as her eyes were taking in their fill of Danas flawless chest Dana wrapped her arms around Alice and they both fell back onto the bed. They could feel their ***** pressed together, the warmth of their bodies radiating and multiplying. They kissed, explored, and ravaged each other trying to satisfy their growing hungers. Alice, now on top of Dana, could feel Danas hips moving; subtly at first, in slight up and down movements, involuntarily reaching for some satisfaction. Alice aligned their hips, now pressing together, pushing and pulling, trying harder and harder to answer the demands of their bodies. Both women had essentially stopped any sort of cognizant thought by this time Each of them simply a reaction to the other, together performing an instinctual waltz whos steps emerged from the cause and effect of estrogen and adrenaline. Alice could take it no more, she slowly, but decidedly, ran her hand under the waistband of Danas sweats, not stopping until she could feel the heat and moisture between Danas legs. Dana made a noise. It wasnt quite a moan, it wasnt a grunt, it was it was a new sound to Alice, and she liked it. Please Al please Dana couldnt take it anymore, she was sure that the moment Alice touched her she would explode. She could feel the throbbing and burning between her legs. She took Alices hand and pressed her fingers hard into her own calling flesh. youre so wet Alice whispered into Danas ear, and Danas back arched and she began to move her hips at a faster more urgent pace. Alice slid her hand under Danas cotton underwear and began to set a slow steady pace, which Dana tried quickly to speed up. But, much to Danas dismay, Alice decided that she had been teased, and it was only fair that she return the favor. Alice stroked Dana slowly, never quite touching the spot she knew Dana was longing her to reach. Dana couldnt take it. She dove her hand into Alices sweats, instantly mimicking Alices own movements. As Alice slowed down, Dana slowed down. Dana knew Alice wouldnt be able to tolerate the teasing, and it didnt take long for Alice to give in to Danas athletic and confident fingers. I need you inside me. Please Danas hips were thrusting under Alices weight. In seconds Alice stopped moving entirely, and just stared into Danas eyes. She slowly shifted her weight and ever so gently gave into Danas demands. It was the epitome of what making love was about. Two women, both trying to satisfy the other, patient and gracious in their movements and actions. The pace of their love making had changed, it had slowed back down. They were both engulfed by their roles of giving and receiving. As Alice slowly moved in and out of Danas center Dana entered Alice with the same care and gentility Alice had shown her. They both began to move to the same rhythm; steady and self-assured. As their pace picked up, they both felt their bodies begin to flood with tension; muscles tightening, building. The sensation of being on the verge of climax and knowing that they were side by side in their journey only amplified their culminating affair. They both came in a flutter of muscles contracting and lungs collapsing. As they lay on top of each other, holding on for dear life, their eyes met again. I I I love you. Alice knew what Dana was trying to say, she saw it in her eyes as clear as day. I love you too, I really do, Im certain. Dana was certain, she knew that this was what love was supposed to be. Two people, connecting on so many levels, needing each other in the most primal of ways, it had to be love. What the ***** was I thinking with Tonya? They continued to hold each other, basking in their consummated relationship. Dane, are we going to tell everyone? I mean, I just dont know if Im ready to share what we have its I like that right now its just you and me, no pressure or advice from anyone else, just us figuring it out. I know what you mean. I dont think we have to tell them yet, I mean, I think they might have some idea, but we dont have to tell them. Okay well, we have that BBQ tonight. *****! Dane, quick its 6:00, we were supposed to be at Bette and Tinas well NOW!
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(53 votes, average: 3.42 out of 5)
Wow, awesome story!! Please please update it :D
I have read this story through about 7 or 8 eight times – really really enjoy it – especially if I am on a downer re Danish spoilers for S3. Like previous comment would love to see the next chapter. Pretty Please!!
Felt a little rushed toward the end, but altogether nicely done! 5* ;-) by the way, are you in the UK?
AWWWWWWWWW!!!! That is like waaaay up their with the best love scenes I have ever read. So real, and wonderful, and all the descriptions are just flawless. You continue to pleeeease me so much, I love you, Boney!
Flee – I think we share the Alice/Dana bug. Get going with your next chapter! I can’t wait!
God, I couldn’t resist reading again on my way to bed and I love it even more. UPDATE!
I think we do indeed share the bug, Boney. Have a hug, my buddy bug!
a gazillion thumbs up and stars to match. really sexy and hot. i can’t wait to see how they explain themselves to the gang when they arrive. keep it coming. thanks for writing! :D
Wow.. So well written.. Amazing..please keep it coming!