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    Burn I

    [Intro]
    Girl, understand why
    See it’s burning me to hold onto this
    I know this is something I gotta do
    But that don’t mean I want to
    What I’m trying to say is that I-love-you I just
    I feel like this is coming to an end
    And its better for me to let it go now than hold on and hurt you
    I gotta let it burn

    [Verse 1]
    It’s gonna burn for me to say this
    But it’s comin from my heart
    It’s been a long time coming
    But we done been fell apart
    Really wanna work this out
    But I don’t think ya gonna change ya
    I do but you don’t
    Think it’s best we go our separate ways
    Tell me why I should stay in this relationship
    When I’m hurting baby, I ain’t happy baby
    Plus theres so many other things I gotta deal with
    I think that you should let it burn

    [Chorus]
    When your feeling ain’t the same and your body don’t want to
    But you know gotta let it go cuz the party ain’t jumpin’ like it used to
    Even though this might bruise you
    Let it burn
    Let it burn
    Gotta let it burn

    Deep down you know it’s best for you except but you
    Hate the thought of her being with someone else
    But you know that it’s over
    You know that it was through
    Let it burn
    Let it burn
    Gotta let it burn

    [Verse 2]
    Sendin’ pages I ain’t supposed to
    Got somebody here but I want you
    Cause the feelin ain’t the same find myself
    Callin’ her your name
    Ladies tell me do you understand?
    Now all my fellas do you feel my pain?
    It’s the way I feel
    I know I made a mistake
    Now it’s too late
    I know she ain’t comin back
    What I gotta do now
    To get my shorty back
    Ooo ooo ooo ooooh
    Man I don’t know what I’m gonna do
    Without my booo
    You’ve been gone for too long
    It’s been fifty-eleven days, um-teen hours
    Imma be burnin’ till you return (let it burn)

    [Chorus]
    When your feeling ain’t the same and your body don’t want to
    But you know gotta let it go cuz the party ain’t jumpin’ like it used to
    Even though this might bruise you
    Let it burn (let it burn, let it burn, you gon’learn)
    Let it burn (gotta let it burn)
    Gotta let it burn

    Deep down you know its best for you except but you
    Hate the thought of her being with someone else
    But you know that it’s over
    you know that it was through
    Let it burn
    Let it burn
    Gotta let it burn

    [Bridge]
    I’m twisted cuz one side of me is tellin’ me that I need to move on
    On the other side I wanna break down and cry (ooooh)
    I’m twisted cuz one side of me is tellin’ me that I need to move on
    On the other side I wanna break down and cry (yeah)

    [Breakdown]
    Ooh ooh ooh ooh ooh oooh
    Ooh ooh oooh (can ya feel me burnin’?)
    Ooh ooh ooh oooh ooh oooh

    So many days, so many hours
    I’m still burnin’ till you return

    [Chorus]
    When your feeling ain’t the same and your body don’t want to
    But you know gotta let it go cuz the party ain’t jumpin’ like it used to
    Even though this might bruise you
    Let it burn
    Let it burn
    Gotta let it burn

    Deep down you know it’s best for you except but you
    Hate the thought of her being with someone else
    But you know that it’s over
    You know that it was through
    Let it burn
    Let it burn
    Gotta let it burn


    Bette sat in her car shocked at how this 4 minute song had summed up 3 years of hurt.

    3 years ago bette had told tina the love of her life that she wanted nothing more than to hold tina a make everything disappear. There was only one forseeable problem and that was tina was abousolutely sickened at the sight of bette.

    So bette felt the need to let tina go.Though it hurt both mentally and Physically she did. Not without telling tina that no matter how long it took bette would wait.

    It had been three years and tina had not once tried to contact her. Bette felt like ***** but she continued on waiting hoping and praying that tina would come back to her.

    It was tuesday morning and bette had been driving to CAC. just as she was pulling up to her usual parking spot Usher’s voice could be heard coming through the speakers of her beloved car. For some reason bette had felt the urge to listen to some Rnb music nothing caught her attention qutie like this song.

    Bette sat there mentally picturing everything that tina and herself had gone through during their break up. tears began to form in the corners of her eyes. Finally she broke down and cried until there were no more tears to cry.

    Little did she know that someone had been watching her constantly for the past two years and the sight of bette crying was making her cringe.
    Thinking to herself ” bette, baby if you only knew how i wish i could hold you right now.”
    (“Candace could you please come here and help me measure up this door. I’ve been calling you for the last 5 minute what were you doing outside anyway?”)










    I’m only joking about the dialogue in brackets but you may see where i’m going with this.
    Please feel free to leave comments pls give me some ideas i would ever so thankful.

    Comments

    1. This was a good start, I just got a little distracted with the inconsistancy of your use of capital letters. Other than that…three years and no contact…ouch! That’s got to be painful.

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