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    Love me Tender – Ch40

    ..a little later

    Bette held Tina wrapped in her arms as they sat together on the sofa. She explained about Baz and how the discussions had progressed during the day. She finished with hes just so politically incorrect – its like the business world has been set back 50 years.

    “Maybe it’s the Australian sense of humour” Tina leant back into Bettes shoulder.

    “Well if that’s their sense of humour I just don’t get it” Bette said with a puzzled look on her face “Do you think thats it?”

    “Well no..but I’ve never actually met the man..I’m just throwing out suggestions here ..” Tina leant forward and turned to face Bette Babe have you though that maybe he feels threatened by you?

    Well that would be good then wouldnt it? Bette frowned.

    Not necessarily, youre an attractive woman who is not available to him Tina stroked Bette cheek He cant flirt with you or use his charms because hed feel vulnerable about being rejected – maybe putting you down is his way of coping

    Bette eyebrow rose You think he does that on purpose?

    I didnt say that..may be you just automatically bring out that side of him. Tina laced their fingers together and looked back up at Bette Whats he like with the others?

    Bette thought for a moment then started to shake her head I havent really seen him with anyone else..

    Maybe you should have someone else in the room when you meet with him, see how he handles it.

    What.. Bettes voice started to increase in volume give him the impression I cant handle him without backup..I dont think so.

    Well..no.. Tina frowned someone whod genuinely have to be there..

    Alright..Ill think about it Bette didnt look convinced. She looked at Tina Would you give me your impression of his work? Im no longer sure how objective Im being and Id like your thoughts.

    Sure Tina smiled; touched that Bette would ask for her opinion. Bette hadnt involved Tina in her work since the preparation for the Faye Buckley debate.

    They moved over to Bettes laptop and Bette took Tina through a selection of Bazs work.

    Finally Tina commented You know..I like it..its different. You can almost see him maturing as the work progresses.

    But can you see the inconsistencies.. Bette leant over Tinas shoulder and pointed out a number of examples that she felt showed the work was regressing at stages.

    Umm yeah .. I can see that but overall hes improving and its exciting and innovative. Cant you insist on being part of the selection process for his work?

    Well..yes.. Bette nodded Id expect to be if were taking such a big risk with him.

    Bette reached out and took Tinas hand. Thanks for taking the time to work with me on this.. I know how busy you are.

    Bette, I like to be part of what youre doing Tina smiled as a new idea occurred to her If Baz has such a smart mouth on him maybe we should introduce him to Alice.

    They both started smiling then laughing. Bette was grinning from ear to ear Oh ..thats good.. Im not sure whod win that one.

    TBC

    Comments

    1. Hey all – Thanks for taking the time to comment ..and for taking it back to 5 stars

      Yes at least a few people don’t like my writing or Baz or something – the last few chapters have been at 3 and 4 stars at different times – I can appreciate that not everyone likes the same thing but it would be nice to know why they think it deserves a 3..or a 4 .. I figure we’ll all end up writing the same story if we don’t introduce a few characters we don’t like – and it also gives a contrast to the fun chapter like the previous one…

      You may be interested to know that I hung back on posting the Baz chapters BECAUSE I thought people would not like them.. nice (not!) to know I was right..

      ..and I must admit the thought of Alice and Baz together makes me smile but the thought of writing them makes me cringe!! …Oz

    2. So ozlfan… seems these fine folks in here thinks it’s a good idea to match motor mouth Alice *grins * and the egotistical Baz from the down under-LOL. Personally I’d love to see Alice take down Baz too. Sure Bette can handle him but it sure would be fun to see some hilarious scenarios what Alice would put Baz through now there’s a lot of drama in there (smile) What do you say Oz… feel up to the challenge * nudge-nudge *

      Thank you for this delightful read… let’s see if there is indeed going to be a showdown in the next chapter *wink wink *

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