Fan Fiction
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Story written on November 28, 2004 by Shakennotstirred.
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(66 votes, average: 3.56 out of 5)
So very sweet. Thanks so much Olives! I love your work!
That was simply beautiful. Perfection, thank you SNS!
wow…wow. it sounds really dumb, but um…wow. i learn from you with every word you write. bravo, mama.
Your story always seem to strike a balance between sweetness & romance & drama. It’s heavy but it’s light.
Yay!
Poor Bette. I love this story, but am feeling tina doesnt know what she is doing. GIVE US MORE, PLEASE. U ROCK
Bette needs Tina like we need air to breath. That was beautiful and a wee bit sad, The little love licks were great. Hope tina knowns that Bette loves her as much as she does. Thanks
Post-Thanksgiving and I’m grateful, thankful, etc. for this story and for you, for writing it. :D What a treat to come home to. 5 stars, of course. :)
I can sense a lot of tension. How will it all dissipate? Hmmmm. Love the story–hope to read more soon. Thanks Olives.
i love this story but your killing me! please don’t make me wait so long between chapters. love the chase
You’re kidding right? All done? WTF?? Come on Olives, the chapter was too short! Thanks for writing though, hope you’re working on the next chapter. ;-)
i continue to fall for this story with every chapter. great as always. i’m trying to patiently wait for them to fully reconcile. *wiggles eyebrows* thanks for writing! :D
Great job! Very cute chapter.
Very sweet! Nicely done. Thank you!
Oh those nibbles so so sweet. Thanks for this story
It is rainy and windy here and this story was just what I needed to cheer me up. I love how you portray Bette as being so vulnerable. Cute ending! Thanks SNS/Olives.
Oh those nibbles so so sweet. Thanks for this story
Short, but strudel sweet.