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The Girl With The Diamond Earring 8: Discovery
Bettes heart sank and she felt a lump rising in her throat. This was it, Tina was about to tell her that it didnt feel right, that shed made a mistake and that she could never love her. For the first time in her life Bette Porter was going to get her heart broken, and by a straight girl no less.
Bette Tina paused.
Just tell me Bette pleaded.
Tina took hold of Bettes hands and looked her in the eye.
I want you Bette. I want you more than Ive ever wanted anyone before
Bette sat there in silence trying to take it all in. A little bit of her was sure there was a but coming.
I want you to make love to me Tina breathed.
Bettes mouth opened but she couldnt seem to speak. Instead she lifted Tinas hand and planted a kiss on her palm. She looked into her eyes as she gently kissed her way up the sensitive skin of her wrist. Tina could see a hint of tears glistening in Bettes eyes.
Ill make it so good for you baby Bette whispered.
She stood up and held out her hand. Tina took it and squeezed it gently as they walked to the bedroom. Closing the door behind them, Bette pulled Tina to her for a kiss. She guided her backwards to the bed and lay her down before climbing on top of her and resuming the kiss. Tinas hands stroked Bettes spine as their mouths met hungrily.
God I want you Bette groaned as she pulled Tina up to a sitting position.
Tina lifted her arms so that Bette could pull off her t-shirt. Their foreheads came together as Bette moved her hands down to stroke Tinas ***** through her bra.
Youre so hot
Bette kissed Tina as she reached around her and undid her bra. It joined the t-shirt on the floor, and Bette kissed her neck whilst moving her fingers in circular patterns round her nipples. Tina moaned as she took hold of the top button of Bettes shirt.
I want this off
Then take it off came Bettes husky reply.
There was no hesitancy as Tina proceeded to unbutton Bettes shirt and cast it aside. She knew what she wanted and nothing was going to stop her. She removed Bettes bra with ease.
First time I ever took off another womans bra she whispered, her tongue flicking Bettes earlobe.
Theres no way its gonna be the last
Bette kissed Tina on the lips and indicated for her to lie down by nudging her with her chin. She leant down for a longer kiss and moaned as she felt Tinas fingers grazing her *****. Tinas thumbs found Bettes nipples and she rubbed them gently. Her hands ran down Bettes taut stomach to the zip of her trousers. Bette sat up and mirrored Tinas hand movements by hooking her fingers over her girlfriends waistband.
You ready baby? Bette asked.
I want you Tina smiled.
They stared into each others eyes as they simultaneously pulled down each others zips. Bette watched Tinas pupils dilate as her hand brushed her crotch. She shifted positions to remove her own trousers before sliding off Tinas. Bending down for another kiss, she ran her fingers down to Tinas hips and slid off her final barrier. She felt Tinas kiss grow more urgent as her hands hooked in the sides of Bettes thong, tugging it off and throwing it aside.
Bette lay her body on top of Tinas, and they fitted together perfectly. Their hips pressed together as they began to grind in rhythm. Bette stared into Tinas eyes as she moved her hand down to part both their lips. Tinas eyes rolled back slightly in pleasure as their ***** made contact for the first time.
I neverthought anything couldfeelas goodas this she panted.
Believe me, theres so much I want you to feel
Their bodies pressed together urgently, Tina raising her hips to meet with Bettes. She clung to her torso, wanting every bit of their bodies to make contact. Her fingers dug into Bettes back as their grinding became more intense.
GodBette
TIoooohhhh
Bette pressed her forehead against Tinas and they both forced their eyes to stay open so that they could watch each other. Bette felt her ***** start to build as she increased the pressure on Tinas *****. Tinas body started to shake under her and they drew out their pleasure with long thrusts.
Tina.youre incredible.my God
She collapsed on top of Tina, who felt her warm breath against her shoulder. Tina stroked Bettes face tenderly and moved her mouth close to her ear.
I love you too baby
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(73 votes, average: 3.63 out of 5)
Thank you so much for the story, please don’t stop!! :) Hope to be able to read more soon!!!!
Great story, please continue writing.
I really enjoyed reading this series…..Great job writing……….hope we can read some more from you soon….Nice sweet ending:)
baby? final chapter? well, i’m sorry to see it come to an end. i really enjoyed your writing. Please comeback soon.
Yes please sequel! Soon!
No, this can’t be the final chapter…they’re not even done having sex! Please, oh please, continue for our sake. :)
what does that final thing mean!?! you can’t stop there! they just made love and got their whole lives and the rest of the night ahead of them! please continue! thanks! :D
“I’ll make it so good for you baby†Bette whispered.
Was that Bette, channeling El DeBarge?
I had to stop andgo get a cold towel!
Ooo-whee, ooo-whee baby!!!!
Sad to see that this is the final…loved the story, please continue!!
“I,ll make it so good for you baby” said Bette. I want to be Tina, I’m sure that Bette would make it feel really good!!! Please don’t stop, they haven’t finished yet!!!
aaaawwwwww…that was so sweet…I love this…please continue soon…
This has been one of my favorite storyline! I wanted to thank you for the time spent on writing it….I am actually very sad to see it come to an end. Keep up the good work…your writing is awesome!
I enjoyed your story. write more… I love this.
The I’ll make it good for you baby line was hot…but my favorite was “i want this off, then take it off”…I felt a shiver when I read that. Please don’t end there, wanting more of the same.
More pls and really soon!!!
I just finished reading your series and it totally rocked. You’re a gifted writer, and I love the romance you built between Bette and Tina. Thanks for the story.